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1w, 3dTwiShy/Fluttershy
Another peaceful autumn afternoon gently faded toward dusk as Fluttershy tended to her duties. Angel Bunny sleept soundly in his bed, with his belly swollen from his recent gorging on fresh carrots. Fluttershy delicately hovered about her home, dusting off the tops of her various furnishings and happily humming her favorite tune. Fluttershy's feather duster sat clamped in her teeth, letting her brush off the insignificantly small layers of dust and animal hair any place she could find it. Lately Fluttershy had been having a bit too much down-time, as if her compulsive urge to clean hadn't made that abundantly clear. All of the animals had long since finished building up their nests and eating to their hearts' content for the winter, so they'd gradually left the yellow pegasus behind in search of a place to sleep.
As Fluttershy finished her self-given chores for the day she dropped off her cleaning supplies and lethargically plodded to her small sofa, curling up and glancing around her quaint little home. Boredom overtook her; Fluttershy got up and searched for a book, any book, and ended up with the same novel she'd read just last week. After only a few pages, Fluttershy clapped the book shut and set it down on her end table and attempted to take a long afternoon nap. With her mind abuzz with mental activity, sleep never quite found her. Things that she needed to do to prepare for the winter raced through her mind, though redundantly due to the fact that she'd attended to every single one, many of them twice. Her own food supply was nearly overflowing, and that of her animals even more so. Firewood and kindling hadn't ever really been a problem for Fluttershy with her close proximity to the woods, but even so she gathered a very large quantity in her back yard. Fluttershy simply dropped her hooves at her sides and gently pounded the cushions of her couch in frustration.
"I'm bored..." She complained aloud, though it was still barely above a whisper. She glances around her living room one more time for something to do, but she finds only the same repetitive things time and time again. "Angel, are you still hungry?" She asked the unconscious bunny rabbit. The small white critter came to at the mention of his name, simply looking Fluttershy in the face with an annoyed quizzical look. He responded by pointing his paw at the pile of carrot greens nearly as big as he was. "Right... sorry..."
Finding little of interest in her minimalist living room she simply starts to take in her surroundings. Noticing that the only furniture she has are either for herself or her animal friends. Even her sofa is really only comfortable for a single pony; It hadn't ever crossed her mind to have many house guests, and even less so to pursue a relationship. Just the very thought made her blush dark red through her yellow coat. A few stallions had shown interest in her back up in flight school, but she never really was fond of the competitive types of guys that always seemed to chase her around. She was far more content sitting around with a sick bunny rabbit and nursing it back to health, or taking a troublesome pet off of her friends' hooves. Fluttershy flaps her wings a few times, unable to quell some of the pent up energy that she still has, finding a slight entertainment in watching the leaves on her various potted plants quiver from the breeze.
"Alright, well, I suppose I could go try to find a new book to read... Maybe Twilight would loan me one... what do you think, Angel?" She asks as she stands up and trots toward her door. The bunny simply stands up and walks inside of his small shack set up in Fluttershy's living area, slamming the door and getting back to sleep. "... I'll take that as a yes then..."
After tossing a scarf and saddlebag around herself and making doubly sure to blow out any candles she had left lit, Fluttershy takes to the brisk autumn air and flies toward Twilight's library. Fluttershy always loved flying, but not quite for the same reason as other pegasi. She loved to feel a gentile breeze between her feathers, to smell all of the wonderful scents of the forest during a low-fly, and to see all of the colors just beneath her. She never flew faster than a small bird, enjoying everything she could and trying her best not to strain herself; but of course Rainbow Dash had other intentions. The daydreaming yellow pony is brought immediately out of her trance by a rainbow streak right across her nose, sending her spiraling mid-air and completely messing up her bearings. The pegasus snaps her wings open and tries to stabilize herself, succeeding literally seconds before she would have hit the ground, glancing up in the direction of the rainbow trail left by her friend.
"Woops! Sorry about that Fluttershy. I was trying out a new succession of barrel rolls to see if I could get some clouds to corkscrew behind me and I guess I didn't see you there... y'alright?" The blue pony calls out as Fluttershy lands, readjusting her scarf.
"Oh, uhm, it's alright Rainbow Dash... I guess I blend into the leaves this time of year sometimes..." She replies modestly, trying to avoid making Rainbow feel bad, always one to think of others' feelings.
"Yeah you do, well take care Fluttershy, I gotta go try this again... I'm losing daylight!" She replies, pointing one of her hooves out toward the setting sun. Fluttershy had been so lost in her daydreaming that she didn't even notice how dark it was getting. She decides that it would be best to get this book and get home quickly before it gets too cold. She's about to tell Rainbow Dash to have a nice evening, but she was already long gone.
Fluttershy continues to fly toward Twilight's library, thinking intently about just what kind of book she might want to check out, or even if she really wants a new book in the first place. Maybe I'll just check Twilight out... she thinks after letting her mind wander just a bit too far. It doesn't take her long to realize what she just thought, causing her to blush intensely and wonder why the thought even crossed her mind. "I guess I'll just check Twilight's recommendations out..." she says out loud, as if trying to correct some kind of mistake. She notices the candle-lit windows of the familiar tree, landing just a few steps away from the front door. The sun is completely behind the mountains now, leaving only the soft orange glow on the horizon in the fading light; Fluttershy knocks softly on the door, worried that she might be intruding.
Almost without hesitation she hears a set of hoof-steps coming toward the door. A gust of wind blows behind Fluttershy, messing up her mane and causing her to shiver from the autumn chill. The door opens with a faint purple aura of magic around it, revealing Twilight Sparkle on the other side, looking at Fluttershy like she's got three heads.
"Hey Fluttershy, is everything alright?" She asks, unaware of the pegasus's intentions, but noticing immediately the wind-mangled hair and deep set shiver in her stance.
"Hmm? Oh, everything's fine, Twilight, just a little chilly out tonight that's all..." Fluttershy says, pasting a smile on her face and almost forgetting why she came to visit. She spends a few seconds staring awkwardly into Twilight's eyes, she always did have such pretty eyes...
"Would you like to come inside?" Twilight asks, gesturing the mare into her home, feeling a little worried for her well being. "And what are you doing out so late anyway? are you sure everything's okay?"
"Oh, yes Twilight, I'm just fine... I only came over to take a look at you..." She catches herself and blushes a little bit, stumbling over her words to try and correct herself a little bit "t-t-take a look at your selection of books! I just was feeling like I needed something else to read lately..." Twilight responds with a concerned, but amused, look on her face.
"Well that explains what you're doing here, but not why you're out so late. You'll catch a cold in this weather, you know," She responds, stifling a little bit of a laugh at the silly pegasus.
"It was more of a last minute decision really... The animals are mostly holed up for winter by now and I just haven't had too much to do in the past few days," She says, regaining a little bit of her composure, only to realize that she'd spent the entire day cleaning, organizing and feeding her pets, but hadn't actually eaten anything since breakfast. Her tummy announces this with a deep growl, frightening Fluttershy just a little bit from the noise.
"Uhhhh was that your stomach?" Twilight asks, clearly hearing the sound. She continues to grin and stare at the yellow pegasus and her unusually awkward motions tonight. "Why don't you stay for a little while; Spike just made dinner."
"Oh, I wouldn't want to intrude..." Fluttershy responds, taking off her scarf and tossing it over the small coat rack just inside the doorway.
"Nonsense, Fluttershy. It would be no intrusion at all... Spike always cooks way too much for just the two of us... and besides, when's the last time you and I got to sit down and talk anyhow?"
"Well uhm... I guess it has been a while... and--" Twilight interrupts Fluttershy by appearing seemingly out of nowhere right next to her and nudging her toward the kitchen with her hoof.
"Then it's settled, you'll stay for dinner. I think you'll love this veggie soup that Spike makes, it's delicious and should warm you up plenty after a flight in this weather!"
Fluttershy can't help but think, just being here is warming me up but tries to look away from the lavender unicorn and push thoughts like that away. She can't even quite put her hoof on what she likes so much about Twilight, possibly the fact that she's one of the few ponies in this town not trying to one-up every other pony around them. Either way, she hasn't ever had thoughts like that about anypony else.
"So uhm, Twilight... how was your day?" Fluttershy decides to break away from her awkward silence just to give her the illusion that she isn't thinking about her.
"Oh my day was just fine! Mostly just organized books, cleaned the shelves... Spike helped me with a small experiment I was conducting to see how magnetic fields affected the control and direction of magic... let's just say it didn't go too well," Twilight replied, happy to take the spotlight away from the shy little pony.
"You're tellin' me! I thought your horn exploded when we tried that," Spike said as he walked into the living area. He plods happily along, unable to see over the massive pot of soup that he holds barely clutched in his claws; the whole scene punctuated with a comically large chef's hat extending over the creature.
Twilight rolls her eyes and pats Spike on the head for bringing out the dinner, using her telekinesis to serve up three hearty bowls of the delicious smelling soup. Spike drinks his straight from the bowl, not having any sensitivity to heat of course, and then goes for several more helpings immediately following. Fluttershy and Twilight simply sit and chat, having not had any time to truly catch up with each other. They speak of their days, well... Twilight speaks of her days while Fluttershy sits there nodding and trying to get a word in edge wise.
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"... And so the resonance frequency turned out to not match up with that specific metal semiconductor, so obviously that caused so many recursive problems that I simply had to restart every single step in the procedure! But enough about my exploits in cross-dimensional teleportation physics... what have you been up to Fluttershy?" Twilight asks, finally breaking away from her mental rant long enough to realize she had a guest and not just a soundboard.
"Oh uhm... Well I just fed the animals and helped them build their nests and insulate their dens for the winter... gathered some firewood and food... and that's it really, nobody's needed a vet lately," Fluttershy replies, immediately eating a spoonful of the delicious soup right after. She had only just barely finished her bowl when Twilight realized the time, it was already almost ten o' clock.
"Oh whoops! I'm sorry for keeping you around so long Fluttershy! I just lost track of the time," Twilight says, using her magic to gather up all of the dishes and sending them into the kitchen. Spike, passed out in his chair at the table from having gluttonously consumed more than half of the soup (not to mention the intense boredom at Twilight's speech) wakes up startled from the clanging of ceramic wear. Twilight gives him a dirty look and asks him to wash the dishes before bedtime; he grumpily goes about his new chore.
"It's no trouble at all, Twilight, I lost track of time too..." In truth Fluttershy loved to hear Twilight rant. Unlike many of the other ponies around town she could understand most of what she said (though admittedly had a lack of experience in the scientific subjects, her vocabulary at least fit the bill), and she genuinely enjoyed her voice. Soft spoken, but still projecting an air of confidence; not quite as abrasive as Rainbow Dash's but not as overly refined and meticulously polished as Rarity's.
"You know, you're welcome to stay the night if you would prefer not to fly home in this cold," Twilight says, seemingly off the top of her head.
"Oh I wouldn't want to impose! The dinner was generous enough," Fluttershy replies, not wanting to seem eager to stay the night due to an irrational fear of being 'found out' by the lavender unicorn.
"Aw come on, it'll be like a good old fashioned sleepover, just the two of us. I have the day off tomorrow anyway, and you said yourself that you haven't really had anything to do lately, right?" Twilight chirps happily as she doesn't get to spend too much time with any of her friends, let alone Fluttershy.
The canary-yellow pegasus simply stands in shock, blushing a little at the brief thought of sharing a bed with Twilight Sparkle. She looks around and realizes that she can't get out of this without being too disappointing, but deep down she feels a spark of excitement about the prospect. Twilight and she never really interacted too much anyway... Maybe she could muster up the courage to talk to her about all these strange thoughts that she'd been having, maybe just to be safe she'd tell a little white lie about just who the thoughts were about.
"O-Okay, Twilight... if you insist," She says, looking down a little bit and smiling, feeling a tad weak in the legs from the thoughts racing through her head.
Twilight giggles and turns a little red in the face, walking up to Fluttershy and tilting her head at her. "Gee I thought I would detect a little more enthusiasm in your voice considering... well, those," She follows up by pointing at Fluttershy's involuntarily extended wings.
"Ohmugosh! I'm sorry Twilight!" Fluttershy blushes the deepest shade of crimson that Twilight has ever seen a pony turn, hiding her face in her hooves and dropping to the floor with an embarrassed squeak.
"Relax Fluttershy, I didn't mean to embarrass you," Twilight says, punctuating her statement with a giggle, walking past the pegasus to greet spike, who finished cleaning the dishes and had already begun walking upstairs. "Uh Fluttershy? My extra mattress is still up in the linen closet somewhere, do you mind just sharing a bed with me tonight?"
This statement immediately makes the already embarrassed and timid mare almost shrink down into nothingness. "That's just fine, Twilight..." She says, barely able to speak in an audible tone. She wanted to say that nothing in the world sounded better right now... but just couldn't bring herself to do that... not yet anyway.
Fluttershy follows Twilight up her stairs, inadvertently staring at her haunches and trying awkwardly to look away, almost tripping over her own hooves a few times, and sighing contentedly as they reach the top of the flight of stairs. Twilight makes quick work of blowing out the candles around her room and closing the window with her magic, climbing into her bed (a rather large one for a single pony, Fluttershy thinks) and happily relaxing. Fluttershy very slowly steps up to the opposite edge of the bed and sits down, shyly inching under the blanket and rolling onto her side, trying to face away from Twilight and avoid thinking too hard about this situation.
"G'night Fluttershy," Twilight whispers. The breath on the back of Fluttershy's neck makes her shiver a little bit, having to fight an involuntary reaction to twitch her hind leg.
"Goodnight Twilight..." She whispers in response, trying to no avail to get some sleep. Her mind races, sometimes thoughts of romance, sometimes thoughts of slightly dirtier things, sometimes things that are completely unrelated to her current situation. The belly full of soup does make her feel heavy and tired, but the knowledge of Twilight laying right behind her continues to arouse her mind and thoughts. Needless to say, she doesn't sleep a wink that night.
Comments ( 53 )
this story is just...DAWWW I don't know which is better TwiLuna or FlutterTwi!
Now i want more..and some of that soup spike made that sounds freaking awesome
nice! You did a great job building the momentum of the events and keeping Fluttershy in character. Interesting concept having pegasus' wings stick out when they're aroused. I love a good romance, I look forward to where you take this!
A very cute start to what will almost definitely be an extremely cute story. With Fluttershy being...well Fluttershy it's kinda hard for it not to be cute.
Well I'm certainly glad to see the high rating and happy comments. I'll definitely keep working on this one but my real life (pain as that is) sometimes tends to steal away my attention, so I'll work as much as I can but it may not be a rapid-fire update. Thank you all for the positive support and don't be afraid to voice any feedback, I'm a comment-whore. I feed off of your comments and opinions about my work... don't let me starve.
Nice job with the story, especially keeping everypony in character. Definetly interested in seeing where you take this. ![]()
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quite the observant one twilight
can't wait for more, this is definately going to be good
I'm wondering why it went from past tense to present tense in the middle of it o.o
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Rainbow Dash's dreams and fantasys are being written down by her, she is just so bad at disguises!
Rainbow Dash: noooo this is NOT my thought track, you must be Pinkie Pie's Cosmic double or somethin'!
While it lacks tension and intrigue, it manages to make up for it with good harmless fluff. This story is just so cute, especially with the sexual tension Fluttershy feels around Twilight. There's nothing like a cute yuri fanfic (
?) to give you a warm fuzzy feeling. Go get her, Fluttershy, you can do it. ![]()
Hrm...Okay, let's see how this compares to Once Bitten, Twice Shy... (No offense, but that's the best Twishy shipping story that one has read to date, so that's what one will be comparing this story to. Anyhoof, seems to be off to a decent start, but one expects to see over the next chapters why exactly Flutters likes/loves Twi, and if/why Twi loves her back.) For now, no judgement of stars, since the story is incomplete.
~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria
Hrm...Okay, let's see how this compares to Once Bitten, Twice Shy... (No offense, but that's the best Twishy shipping story that one has read to date, so that's what one will be comparing this story to. Anyhoof, seems to be off to a decent start, but one expects to see over the next chapters why exactly Flutters likes/loves Twi, and if/why Twi loves her back.) For now, no judgement of stars, since the story is incomplete.
~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria
Been a little while since I've read a fluttershy fic.
This one is starting off very nicely :)
P.s. Daaaawwww
At first I stayed away from shipping, but then I read this and am loving it.....
I'm off to go draw some fan-art of my new favorite pairing.
It's a very cute start to a story!
Writing in the present tense is slightly jarring, especially since some parts seem to be in the past tense. But, regardless, I'm enjoying this story so far!
It started off well enough. I haven't read many present-tense stories; this should make for an interesting read.
It was a bit unsubtle and generic how Fluttershy's feelings were first introduced as a possible love connection. Besides that, the scenes were beautifully described and you obviously are a very skilled writer. I'll be reading the rest when time permits.
A very nice shipfic so far. Here are my notes:
1. I think that the present tense is bugging me a little. This probably has something to do with my personal writing style, but it's nothing too significant. Just feels weird reading it.
2. Everyone is pretty well in character.
3. There are some very minor gramatical errors, but not too much other than that!
4. Your use of the "wingboner" amuses me.
I will read more and provide feedback as I deem needed.
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I did not read this because of the coupling. But, in a moment of weakness I gave it a try. I like how you're doing Fluttershy, did not mess her up someway like most pple. Not a bad coupling, now that I've read this.
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I bled rainbows from my eyes reading this! It was freaking awesome! More more more shipping! Oh, and thank god you made sure to have rarity and pinkie be straight. Compulsively making the whole mane six ship with each other would have been just god awfully intolerable, like if the only sexuality that exists in equestria is lesbian. I don't know where you are going with big mac, but I love your portrayal of him. Now, of course there are minor things I didn't like, but this is not my story and this is fanfic after all, so taking things too far is what we come here for. My biggest complaint really is the wingboner. I could have done without that, but, once again it is not my story and I really really really am enjoying it and can't wait for more!!!!!
what are you doing out so late anyway? are you sure everything's okay?" <-- Just a little captialization mistake. Looks good so far!
Ooh la la Fluttershy and Twilight getting naughty in the bedroom. The image in my head is not a pretty one but i must read on!
Oh my... you're going to be responsible for sleepless night. I do declare this story to be quite... enjoyable.
Very nice start. It's an interesting premise and I'm eager to read the many chapters you've put out. What inspired this, if I may ask?
Maybe I'll just check Twilight out...
What do you call it when you make a double entendre where *both* of the meanings are sexy?
(I always thought Fluttershy would be the type to make double entendres, in a perfectly deadpan manner.)
Well, that looks promising, though it somewhat irks me that the story is written in the present tense, but I think I can live with that.
You wrote the whole thing in PRESENT TENSE??
UUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH
This is going to be hard to read. Present tense should be reserved for 1st person fics only. It's painful to read, honestly, and I'm sure i'm not the only one to bring that up.
Awesome fic!
I wonder if the recent streach of Writer Fluttershy would fit in this fic ....
(she is the actual author of Darring Do in some and a romance writer in others). ![]()
I like the idea but.... maaaan, reading the story in present tense is going to suck.![]()
She loved to feel a gentile breeze between her feathers,
Um...gentle, not gentile. I'm a gentile and I would find it offensive if that were intentional! ![]()
A good start, been reading a lot of ship fics recently and I like how this doesn't seem to start with either of the parties stumbling in their minds over an attraction to the other. If this becomes the case later on that's just fine, it's just refreshing to see a beginning that's along the lines of "why do I have these thoughts about _____?" as opposed to "I really love _______ how can I tell her?" Looking forward to catching up with the rest.
Also I'm curious, alot of people give Twilight at least one scene where she rambles about science-y stuff. Do you research what you want her to say or make up something on the spot? Been wanting to write a Twilight based story and it wouldn't be the same without one of her adorkable rambles.![]()







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