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justindashsparkleshypie


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[Interactive/Comment driven] (Author's notes are important) In an instant you, Scootaloo, are forced into a destiny that is too complex to imagine... Now what do you do?

My story is not solely comment driven. I have three branches with many subbranches and i expect there to be many shared branches... I have a really large branch to work off of. Way too much time on my hands. way too much.

Rating IS subject to change, easily. As are all tags.
original rating, everyone.
tag, slice of life.
Main character, Scootaloo.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 13 )

Hmm can my oc be involved, politically?

Yes, this is a journey. I assure you that the oc can be worked in. Pm me who it is and I will find a good spot for it.

Haven't read it yet but, NOUCOME!
At least, I think that's what it is. imma read it now.

Scoots finds a portal and lands in pandaria and becomes empress of the pandas PANDAS

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Ok, well. I have no idea what that is. so it will probably end up as a dream...

M'kay?

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yes, I think that is actually rather workable. In fact, why don't you PM me some things like age height etc. also, leave a comment for the next chapter or i fear for what is to come.:pinkiecrazy:

Maybe you could have some entity (like Discord or someone new) show her and let her interact with different alternate universes (acting as herself in that universe's Scootaloo). If you need to justify a reason for this, you could have an evil portal jumper (maybe you don't have to call it that) trying to undo the fabric of reality.
As for why Scootaloo when it could easily be someone else, really just about any reason would work. You could have him say that because of her inability to fly it makes her perfect for the job (no habits to relearn as far as flying is concerned) or because fate had dealt her a bad hand at the no flying thing, he decided to do her a good turn. Or you could say it was completely random and he'd have taken anyone.
The reason I suggest this is for two reasons: First you can include a multitude of possible tags for it, while maintaining the original core of the work. The other is because you can have that particular Scootaloo comment (either mentally or outloud) how cool or ridiculous a situation. If you are feeling particularly gutsy, you could possibly include the rest of the CMC (or a multitude of other characters) on the action.
Writing could use some improvement, but there's nothing too glaring.

Personally, I say she should choose to live and defend Mytheria. She might fail, but she should at least try. Give her an adventure for the ages. :pinkiesmile:

Comment posted by justindashsparkleshypie deleted Aug 2nd, 2017

Choose to love, she still has so much to love for. She can still do amazing things for the world.

I'll assume that the options concerning corruption and such are what will happen to Scootaloo's psyche/soul. If that is the case, I go with the 'Enlightening path of action and comedy. :pinkiehappy:' Might I recommend seeing exactly what she can accomplish if she 'releases' the magic inside of her. :twilightsmile:

Hmm... I'll choose the enlightening path of comedy and adventure!

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