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Plan 9 From Equestria: 22,121 stories ·270 members

Harmonic Sins

You do realize you could just read the first few paragraphs of the story instead of this description, right? Do you? Because you totally can.
Anyway, Pinkie is left in a coma while going to find Rainbow Dash. Conveniently, the Mane 5 find her and take her to the hospital. However, while Pinkie's body is in the hospital, her mind is left to wander the unknown...

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goaway

goaway #1 · Aug 27th, 2014 · 11 · ·

You do realize you could just read the first few paragraphs of the story instead of this description, right? Do you? Because you totally can.

A good description is what will convince us to give your story the courtesy of at least a few paragraphs. If those few paragraphs then succeed in hooking us, we might stay 'til the end.

Tailgate

Tailgate #2 · Aug 27th, 2014 · 4 · ·

You do realize you could just read the first few paragraphs of the story instead of this description, right? Do you? Because you totally can.

*Face palm*

Sigh- You do realize that you as the author have made a critical mistake. You have PWF (Posted without followers.) Little if anyone is going to read your story for the fun of it, and so your objective is to spark the reader's interest to read the story. Not insult them right off the bat.

Rayanne