The Great and Powerful Plan: Jealousy is Magic

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When Trenderhoof comes to Ponyville, head over hooves for Applejack. Trixie (being as dense as she is) assumes her marefriend returns those feelings. She hatches a plan to get her lover back. With the help of Rarity, will they get the love of their lives to themselves, or will they get unexpected results?

Probably, why else would I say that?

(Thank Fimfic for this amazing name!)

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HaoKyruss

HaoKyruss #1 · Jul 22nd, 2014 · 1 · ·

Great start. Excited to see how this progresses

Arkan0id

Arkan0id #2 · Jul 22nd, 2014 · 1 · ·

I liked it. I'll feature it on the blog I work for.

Quick Wit -Littlepip-

Quick Wit -Littlepip- #3 · Jul 22nd, 2014 · 1 · ·

4736287 Thanks ^^ Truth be told, I started writing this because I was watching a horror movie.

4736452 Thanks mate!

fimfic4ever

fimfic4ever #4 · Jul 22nd, 2014 · · ·

This was awesome, everything from the horror movie start to the cutesy love scene to the hat swapping (really works with the cover art), glad to see we have a little more trixjack on this site

One thing I should point out:

"You look like you're wearing,Trixie?, hat,"

I'm guessing this should be: "You look like you're wearing Trixie's hat,"

As for the title I think Trixie's Plan is ok. but if you really want to change it, maybe 'The great and powerful plan' or 'jealousy is magic'

Quick Wit -Littlepip-

Quick Wit -Littlepip- #5 · Jul 23rd, 2014 · 1 · ·

4736844 I was trying to aim at her making a little comment on the side, mid sentence maybe I should do...

You look like you're wearing- Trixies?- hat.

Glad you liked it! :D Jealousy is Magic works so good!

fimfic4ever

fimfic4ever #6 · Jul 23rd, 2014 · 1 · ·

4737106 i was wondering if that was what you were going for, yeah i think that way you put works better

i loved it, and i'm glad you liked the title i made up, since you're using it you may want to take the 'the title sucks, any suggestions' part out of the description