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My name is Katona Izubori. I was bullied as a kid for most of my life, and now I am introverted and shy because of it. Writing keeps me sane. Music makes me soar. Love you all! :D Keep being awesome!

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Pastern is Princess Celestia's personal maid. When a Changeling raid kidnaps her, she finds the only means of escape is befriending her captor, a Changeling by the name of Gaskin. They escape together and have to live in a town that hates Changelings.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 10 )

Chapters are a bit short, but at least it has proper spelling and capitalization, unlike some other stories I've seen.

Aside from that, looks good so far. Premise is interesting too.

Chapters could be a little longer, but it looks good so far. Have faved and will look forward to more!

You did a great job and I'll be watching this! Please come out with the next chapter (hint make it longer.):ajsmug:

4781163 kk thanks in canada without wifi often but ill try as best as I can:heart::heart::heart:

Interesting beginning.
Killing doesn't really seem to be a changeling way. More like knock 'em out, or trap them, but not kill.

4806431 Pegasus... Earth... Changeling... Unicorn. Long ago, the four species lived together in harmony. Then everything changed when the Changelings attacked.

The world is changed. I Feel it in the trough. I feel it in the earth. I smell it in the air. Much that once was has been changed, for I write how I want when I want :trixieshiftright: :duck:

4806891 I liked so much because after the chapter there was an ad for " guaranteed pest control "!

I dare to guess it is death. Sad, I am sure it would have had the potential to become a great story. :pinkiesad2:

don't tell me this story is dead. This is one of the only stories on here with this angle of perception.

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