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The author formerly known as Comet Chaser, still writing, still awesome. For further inquiries, well, good luck... I'm bad at getting around to things.

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This story is a sequel to Light and Shadow


It's been over a decade since Luna's return, and much has changed.

Some of the changes, you may not know yet.

Of those wonders known to the public the Lord of Chaos rose, and fell, then rose again, an ancient queen attempted to take the land of ponies for herself and an empire lost to time was reborn. An apprentice became a successor, and then her own mare as a new Equestria was born under the watchful eye of a princess imbibing the point between the Light and the Dark.

And then what?

Until the unfolding of a fifth set of stories, if one emerges, one can only hope to view the evolving world of Equestria through the eyes of a young gray colt becoming a stallion, hardly aware of the changes he might witness, but keenly able to influence them. The powers of love and magic move without rest in a conquest that shakes the known world to its very roots.

What precisely happens in the lull between the seasons?

Are you ready to find out?

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 10 )
Comment posted by megabyte97 deleted Aug 4th, 2014

I resent your use of I as a pseudonoum, but your story is amazing. I wish I could write as well as you.

Yay! Intermissions are my favorite! Sorry CometChaser, but I am rooting for i . Its all your fault he's in control anyway. Thanks to whichever of you wrote the update. I have been waiting for it.

They are right! You murderer! I am so glad we have i to make sure our characters are happy. I mean, you would have let Lightning die if not for i.

So thanks, i. And good riddance CometChaser.

Waaaaaaaaa?! I was gone for one month and this happens?! I nearly passed out in my chair!

Is Lighting bisexual or lesbian? Right now it is leaning towards lesbian... Though still, Are you updating every Saturday? If so, YAYYYY!!!

Volcano insurance?

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5192062 Sorry if that joke wasn't super clear, it could be just a regional thing but there was kind of a running gag that i see on TV a lot but the joke is sort of that there's nothing so much as a mountain out here so sell people volcano insurance and you never have to pay them. I think it was on family guy even...? Either way, vague joke, meant to elaborate on it but there's a lot going on with them right now so i sort of slashed the full joke.

Alright I liked how Iris seems to be able to hold her own (in light and shadow she seemed just like the typical princess in distress) I mean she might not win in a fight but she doesn't seem helpless anymore. I really like Lightning's ingenuity with the ender pearls, but the best thing I've read so far... was the random toaster ovens.... I don't know why but when those came up I laughed so hard. I mean 'I' has the God of Chaos, the Goddess of Eternal Night, and a pony who's special talent is pretty much calling in a stone age air strike, and the thing that (metaphorically) catches him with his pants down... is a toaster oven. Charm seems pretty good but is she limited to only illusions, or does she have a few more spells in her arsenal? Black Mesa... I got nothing to say he's got luck, one good 'connection' if you even call it that, and possibly strength (not 100% sure since there hasn't been anything where he's had to show his). Anyways with that out of the way I like where this is going good job and I can't wait for the next chapter.

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