Hi, I'm Silver, Silver swirl. This is the story of me and my friend, Blue Moon. We're new to ponyville, well, new to this world actually, its a long story. you'll have to read it to get what i mean, sorry. hope you enjoy!
Hm, I like where this is going! Keep it up!
Not sure if good, need more to determine
I hope to see more soon! I do like the premise; there are a few editing details, but they aren't normal and they don't detract that much. I'd just recommend a beta-reader as far as that's concerned. As far as the plot, there have better be some pretty good reasons for what happened in chapter 1...I'm looking forward to you explaining them.
She's a cute character. I normaly don't like fics based around other ponies.. but this one is'nt half bad! Thumbs up for you!
>>446142446142 thanks, i hope that my explanation is ok for what happened, and no it wont be 'cause they felt like it.'
I await your explanation; consider it a challenge of sorts. :D
I like the premise a lot. Let's see where you take it, Sky.
So far I am looking forward to seeing what happens. Although I will admit I am suprised that Sky/ Silver is handling the situation well. Personally I would have gone off the wall, but maybe that's just me... Anyways so far so good and keep up the good work.
Keep up the good work this is great.
For one thing awesome story.. for another thing, I HAVE NEVER WORN STOCKINGS, they're knee-high socks thank you kindly
You have definately been hangin with me too long sky. you voice me perfectly. Keep up the great job
Honestly, i don't know whether to be angry, jealous, or totally freakin impressed that you voice the Mane 6 better than me and i watch more than you! great writing!
Lolz these chapters make me happy :D
good... goddess.... pinkie....
i loved courage it was one of my favorite shows on cartoon network but now ctnw died and shows crappy stuff i want my childhood back of ed edd and eddy
and power puff girls that stuff was the shit
no no no no no it just means that you've been reading spiderman again. i really ought to take those for a weekend or so...
oh sorry sorry. i havent read any spiderman like fics on here, sorry.
LOVE THE ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
just make silver a lesbian sence its a guy in there still
if you look up a few comments, you'll see the newly favorited word; Fluttersilv...or silvershy.
and dont worry, its all....part of the plan. *Joker laugh*
i do think that was kinda disturbing vivid mental image i got when they were eyeing out silver and shy
BURN THEM WITH FIRE THEN SEND THEM TO A PLACE WITH MORE FIRE!
Silver should MAN UP and make a shotgun
not sure what your idea of silver is, but that is DEFINETLY not silver.
Elaruki can voutch for that.
lol being random is fun
>>10010301001030 i can tell you that the words MAN UP are not going to be anywhere in this story lol
"Kinda like how Blue always said ‘Suck my dick’ but had a vagina!!" dat famous elaruki phrase
"But when we did, the unicorn trotted up to me before punching me.... It was Blue alright." and dat way too realistic reaction. aw yeah. WIN.
Is there a reason this says cancelled?
I found this to be a good work of fiction.
Yes I would like to see more of a consistent writing style.
However other than that I have enjoyed it.
I would love to ready more. I want to know why they were turned, why the did not tell Twilight about being humans and the kidnapping, who was that doctor, and what is up with that metal bird. Inquiring minds want to know, and only your story can answer them.
Well if you do not ever come back to this story you still get a fave and upvote from me.
>>22295632229563 Well...to be honest i sorta got lost and went off the track. The main characters were based off me and a friend, but while i was writing this some personal drama accured between us and i kinda lost all i was originally planned. I wouldnt mind doing this over, since its been cancelled things have calmed. And mabye i'll give a re-do a try. If you'd like to give some ideas and help the idea bucket that'd be much appreciated, and thank you for your message