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Okay, so this is very loosely based on Lil Miss Rarity. The only thing relating the two are the cover art and the BDSM/Friends with benefits element. I, however, chose to showcase that they are still good friends, and that even friends with benefits show concern and compassion towards each other, instead of just "I'm gonna torture the fuck out of you."
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) it. 
I'm glad you (enjoyed?
I may revisit this after I finish Opposites Attract, but I'm not sure if I wanna be "that BDSM pony."
I'm in the process of revising it now (thanks for the notes
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A favourite from 463736???
My life is complete! 
Blood? Rarity?
Oooh yes. <3 Moar!
I usually hate BDSM because I hate hurting things, even though I fight for money... But this was pretty good and I actually did enjoy it. Good Man!
wow this was a very tasteful and accurate representation of BDSM. I could only wish it to have been longer. there is so much BDSM is and isn't and you seem to have a good understanding of it. I hope to see more like this from you.
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Thanks, guys
When you asked me to look at something the other day, I can assure you I did not expect this!
I'll have to admit, BDSM isn't really my thing, but that doesn't take away from the fact that this definitely achieved what it set out to do –>
As has been mentioned already this was nicely written, with good attention to detail. And the grammar was relatively good too, which was nice from my point of view
I would say that there could be a lot more in it, perhaps as much as another one to two thousand more words, just going into the details of the blood-letting (a nice touch), and what each was thinking and feeling during it, and adding more torture (oh, sadism). Perhaps a few more cuts and Rarity nearly passes out before RD quits? Emotionally, there's room for development, but then again, very few one-shots are aiming for that kind of thing.
Still, I would say expand on this session before you start on new chapters.
Overall, not bad. I liked it.
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, I'm considering either adding to this or writing another, more detailed story. 
Since everyone seems to be demanding more filth
It honestly says something terrible about my character if the the story that garners the most positive attention is dark fetishism.
Really, I'm not that into bdsm either. The idea popped into my head one day, and it just wouldn't go away until I wrote it.
This is definitely one of the better clopfics on FIMFiction.
Sadomasochistic ponies, why are you so damn sexy?
i hope JAY JAY (http://lil-miss-jay.tumblr.com/) like it i send it to him
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I completely forgot to do that.
Hmm... I like it. A little too hasty, though. The ending seemed to come too fast (buh-dum tsh), and the action felt a little weak. Could have used more imagery, as well as longer pacing. Still, for a quick concept, I did enjoy it.
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The general consensus is that this fic was too short. It's only the second story I've written, and it's my first clop. I plan on writing more like it (extreme fetishes, that is. Not necessarily BDSM) soon. I'll be sure to make it longer and more descriptive next time around.
Well if you aren't into bdsm how come you are much more spot on then every other story I've read. You sold me on knowing what youare talking about when you had them establish a safe word, which almost no other fic does, and the communication they had( very important;. The only complaint content wise were dash licking her blood. Usually a big no no unless you are completely confident with the after care you will revive and positive there are no stds present. But that didn't seem to be a likely problem
And I'm not sure if you did it intentionally but you seem to have them abide by RACK(Risk aware concentual kink) and SSc( safe, sane, concentual). You make it seem so much more positve and fun thing to do. keep those in mind and you will have a solid kink friendly story. Other wise they tend to turn grim dark. Also fun fact this was on par to my first knife play with my girlfriend, minus the spreader bar and I had a flogger instead of a riding crop. So thank you for reminding me of it.
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I actually had no idea what I was doing. 
Apparently I have more knowledge on the subject than I thought.
I wouldn't say I'm the most knowegeble or expirenced with bdsm and kink but if you want a pre reader with a decent grasp of the concept, I could do it. Although I'm not the best when it comes to grammer.
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I'll keep that in mind the next time I decide to write something like this (probably soon).
I usually take care of the grammar editing, and just let prereaders point out anything big I might have missed. I only ask for content reviews from prereaders. So your offer is exactly what I like to hear.
"If you don't appreciate BDSM, or clop of any kind for that matter, then I strongly urge you to leave."
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So... Does that mean you liked it?
In all seriousness, was it bad, or did you just not like it?
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With the time to decompress and take control of my fragile mind once more:
Well written but not my cup of tea.
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Glad to see my favorite writer/biggest supporter is pleased.
My only regret with this is that Mr. Brony didn't tell me about it sooner
What I believe truly makes this work so genius is how you emphasis the point that it is purely, consensual fun between two loving friends.
I've always had the mindset that "love" is not something we should be forced to experience with one person. We are biologically programmed to experience the phenomena of "love" after simply hugging another person for ~20 seconds. So why should we force our body to believe otherwise? We'll only end up feeling "wrong" and uncomfortable with ourselves. As RD and Rare demonstrate, when we embrace our natural desires, detest social idealism, and openly accept who we are, we will then know true happiness.
The two drifted off to sleep, cuddling absent-mindedly.
Just like that.
Love is not purely meant for one that you are to marry (Marriage in itself is nothing more than a social statement). Love is a wondrous emotion and should never be frowned upon in all of its glorious forms.
I've always said, "For friends to share sensual relations is the ultimate form of trust."
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Failing horribly, by the way.
)
I completely agree with everything you said (even though I'm in a monogamous relationship.
You seem to be a very intelligent pony.
Although, with that state of mind, you probably won't like any of my other work. It's all standard shipfics.
IJAB sent you here?
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Ayo, dawg, we herd u liek love...
Oh, come now. I said love should be accepted in ALL it's forms!
I don't look down on monogamy in anyway, so that won't interfere with how I read your fics. The only thing that will effect my outlook on it would be the actual writing itself 
Sorry to hear about your relationship too. It's never fun when things go sour
...unless they're Gobstoppers. Those are suppose to change flavours
People are only as intelligent as they are willing to listen, I always say! (God, I say a lot of things it seems
)
Yes, he and I were chatting last night, came up with an idea,...>spoiler here<..., and that's why I decided to check your fic out. He spoke rather highly of it, and I concur. It truly is genius.
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If only others felt the same about my writing.
Ah well. I suppose as long as somepony likes it, it's still worth it.
This fic used to be up on IJAB's "Amazing Content" box on his page, but I deleted it. It's clearly back up now, though.
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If only, if only
Yessss....But to what extent has yet to be seen
All in due time.
Let the knowledge that your story was favourited by one of the more renown authors in the fandom denote your success. Kind of like my trophy is BlackGryph0n favouriting and commenting on one of my pictures and my artistic style on DA
And Silver Cloud's acknowledgement of my grammatical prowess...
And Mr. Brony's flattery on my...well, everything from my Dramatic Readings to my philosophy, really
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The real prize will be IJAB and Silver's reaction to my latest fic.
Which I'm working on at this very moment.
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Well if it's as good as this, then you shouldn't have anything to worry about
Can't wait to see it 
Good clop, but a bit too short for my liking. Now I just want to go write my own kinky clopfic
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>im14andthisisdeep
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I am glad to have caused you mental stimulation.
It pleases me to know that my comments are still being processed after all this time.
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10/10 retort u rekt me
u > me
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Oh, you!
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Imagine Lil' miss Rarity equestria girl...
BDSM isn't my kink whatsoever, but this is easily my favorite of the RariDash BDSM fics I've ever read.
Mainly because it puts RD in the dominant role for once.
Just for that, I'm going to fave this.
Is the artist for the cover pic on derpiboo?