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Pinkie Pie Fanfiction

Pinkie pie is a doctor. Not a doctor of the body, mind you, but a doctor of the mind. Her patients? As weird as they come. (One thinks that her personal relationships are in the direct interest of princess Celestia.) This is the everyday life of a pony psychiatrist.

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Heath of Tragedy

Heath of Tragedy #1 · Sep 12th, 2014 · 1 · 2 ·

Well, I've got good news for you; I only found one thing wrong in this fic. The bad thing is that it's literally EVERYTHING.

It's rushed, the characters are OOC, the description says one thing where the story says another, you use words that should never be used in fanfiction, you, the dialogue is awful and doesn't make sense, your grammar is awful, there is little to no mention of what happens in the scenes, the title doesn't tell us anything about the plot itself... it's just awful.

Consider getting a proofreader and an editor. Seriously.