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Lokimen


Let's make this precious

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Rainbow Dash stands alone, her friends long gone and no safe haven left for her in all of Equestria.

When Death comes to her doorstep she is left with only two choices: fight or run.

One way or the other everything ends tonight.


Inspired by The Quick And The Blue. Special thanks to Novablast, without him this story wouldn't exist. Proofread by JohnPerry and Craine.

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Comments ( 19 )

This is written like a creepypasta not bad

An intriguing concept. Another gateway to many possibilities.

In the description: "No safe haven," not heaven. Just thought you might want to know.

FUN...This was a suspenseful read, actually. :twilightoops:

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That's way funnier than it should be:rainbowlaugh:.

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Thanks:twilightsmile:.

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Then my job here is done.

4997788 It was the only thing that came to mind when reading it.

I must say that was surprising. Kinda makes me think what spike can do when he lets his emotions take over. :twilightoops::moustache:

Woah, now this is a thriller! :twilightoops: :pinkiegasp: It almost reminds me of what would actually happen in a horror film! :pinkiehappy: But, I have one question: Why are the terms 'his', 'him', 'he', etc capitalized? :rainbowhuh:

5008586 I think it's cause she doesn't think of him as Spike anymore, she thinks of him as an It, a He.

This reminds me of Prince of Persia: Warrior Within where the prince has to outrun the Dahaka.

5089008 Oh, you make a good point there. :rainbowderp::pinkiesmile:

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I think it's cause she doesn't think of him as Spike anymore, she thinks of him as an It, a He.

Yes. That's exactly what I was going for.

I noticed you added your story to Rage Reviews, so I did a review.

Here it is.

Very lovecraft in the writing here. I like it, for just an experiment, you did a great job. iambrony.dget.cc/mlp/gif/130516246149.gif
Also, were you inspire by the megas song "the quick and the blue", even the chapter is a direct quote from it.
Edit:
Just saw that you were and I feel dumb for not reading that.

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Thanks a lot, man:twilightsmile:.

Why did he do this in the first place?

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