Ello! The name is Brighty, and I'm a Frozenaholic.
It's been a long time since Celestia disappeared. Nobody knew where she went, not even her own sister. Princess Luna has delved into her own sorrow, and Cadence has her own kingdom to run. So where does that leave Twilight?
On the outside, she's the leader of Equestria, and it's always been that way. But really, she's just a lost little filly. So what does she decide to do?
Write letters to her mentor, of course.
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Crying? I'm totally not crying. What make you say that?
Wow...I'm actually trying to hold in tears. I never cry from reading, even if I'm reading something sad. I'm thoroughly impressed with this story, and it's definitely going in my favorites.
...Gosh darnit, now I'm bawling like a child.
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It's okay dear. Have a Rarity
>>Linayru
Thank you so much. It means a lot to me that you like this. The story's actually not done yet, there'll be another part.
Didn't actually think this could make people cry
Wow...This is just as good as the first chapter, and it made me cry again.
I really like the way you write the characters; you give them depth without really changing them. Your grammar is spot-on through almost all of the story, although I did notice one spelling error. In the sentence "I could not bare to live with myself.", the word 'bare' should be spelled 'bear' for the context it's used in. Otherwise, great job with this story.
I look forward to seeing more of your works in the future (If you choose to write anything, that is).
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Daw, thank you! I honestly wasn't sure about that error myself, I'll change it.
I am actually working on more stories, but to be honest, I'm still working on the plot for most of them.
Thank you so much for reading!
4751125 Good luck on your other stories; I'm quite interested in seeing how they turn out!