Nightmare Moon worshipers in the frozen north have a new leader, a natural born alicorn that has declared war on Equestria! But Twilight and her friends are missing! Celestia sends out a brave warrior in search of new talent but will it be enough? Follow Captain Auto Tomaton as he finds many friends to fight many foes in this epic tale!
*Note* I began writing this after season 2 and tried but failed to keep it up to date with the series. So there are some consistencies with the show and many inconsistencies. I also am only "half" way through editing it (it is really big!) and I did begin to change one characters name; Know that He-pon and Pwnicus are one and the same.
*Note part 2* Critique is not only welcome but very much appreciated.
Chapters (31)
Dude, you have a full length- no, two full length novels here. If I were you, I'd unpublish everything but the first chapter, and then release another chapter every other day, at least :P your story would be found by a lot more people that way lol. Not many people have time to read a 100,00+ word fic! But episodic releasing? Hecks yeah!
But that's just my opinion lol. Do whatever you want
Thank you! I hadn't thought of that... I think I will!