Time is always moving onward at its steady pace. Things happen: cities rise, empires fall, new technology and innovations are made and discovered. It is inevitable, impossible to avoid. But time? Time never truly changes.
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A/N: I have no idea what I'm doing.
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Yeah, it may not be all that. I'm just making a world and rolling with it. Give me a break, I'm tired
If you're going to downvote it though, at least give some criticism please.
Not my kinda story.
Alternative universe BS.
Phooey i say, PHOOEY!
Happy ponies are best ponies.
this is going nowwhere better get somewhere soon or people will start to dislike...
Hmmmm. Interesting idea.
I'll see where you take this.
I, personally, thought this was VERY well written. Most people have trouble with descriptive first person, and I thought this was spot on. I love the idea you generated, and I love how well the dialogue is portrayed, as well as the feelings of the characters.
There's only one tiny problem, and that's getting the plot to go somewhere a little more quickly. Maybe your writing type is the kind to explain things slowly and thoroughly, and that's fine--just take heed that some people may not have the patience.
But overall, dude, this is awesome. I love your writing style and I love the plot. All it needs is a little pickup, and everything should be fine. If you don't want this to go anywhere and it's just a test, that's okay too--it IS a test. We should all be able to appreciate that.
Keep it up, man.
(Here's my response to part of the description. I copypasta'd and edited this from something that someone posted in some forum somewhere. Sorry if anything is wrong
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Time...
Time never changes.
Since the dawn of life, when single-celled organisms first discovered the number 42, life has spent time living in the name of everything, from games, to Nyan Cat, to simple psychotic ecstasy.
In the year 2012, after... yeah, I'm too lazy to think of anything else.
But it was not, as some had predicted, the end of this comment. Instead, the EOL was just the prologue to another stupid waste of space. For ponies had succeeded in hijacking the computer and typing more crap.
But time...
Time never changes.
I~dea! im going to write my first shipwrecked fan fiction! Hmm. I may aswell update my other ones on fanfiction.net too...
Thanks for the inspiration dood!
437013 I know right? his 'Moonlight Sonata' has just that feel! I love how this guy writes!
439067 Of course
Make sure to alert me when you've finished it. I'd love to take a look
448098 Ok, I'm writing it now, actually. It's going to be in diary style, entry after entry, one per day to start. I have several Ideas for plot twists, so it's going to be an ongoing, evolving thing. I'm always open to suggestions, such as whether or not to put a small village on the island, and whether to make it of the people on there, whether they're all going to be amnesiacs after the crash or not, or even if he'll be the only one! I'll be writing it as I feel it needs to be, as with all my fictions, and only using backspace for spellings or when it doesn't make sense.
It probably won't be as long as yours, mine now seem to range form 1,000 - 2,000 words.
This feels very much like beginning of Skies of Arcadia, though there are some differences, such as the Airborne Drifter not being a pirate vessel, and that Twilight (who would be Fina in this case) doesn't have her own ship. I like this very, very, much.
584725 Are you, by chance, a writer? I'm actually looking to hand this story off, but so far no one's taken me up on that offer
oh man this looks too good to pass up on asking for more chapters XD
I really think this story could go miles if you went for it
but it's up to you, if you aren't into writing it, then there's no point in forcing yourself to write a story you won't be willing to continue