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TheNewYorkBrony


The name's Dash. (Previously Ronnie) And I write humanized pony stories. Welcome to my humble page.

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This story is a sequel to Adventures In Babysitting


It's been ten years since Twilight had met Cadence that chilly October day. Now a young teenager, she's looking to reconnect with her old sitter in hopes that she can get Shining and Cadence together again. But like always, some things are easier said than done.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 53 )

Well, here we go.

One thing though, Cadance must be brighter than Twi if she left for college at 16.

5018764 it was said in the first one that she was actually really smart. And no technically they're equal because Twilight was a child genius.

I'm worried about Shining. He's worse off than when we found him towards tend of Adventures in Babysitting. Speaking of which, why the heck is he staying with his parents and NOT in college?

Another thing, are you fond of TwiDash?

5018890 he was in community college but dropped out. And nope, but I thought it'd be funny if Twilight ended up dating the girl who bullied her and not the boy she kissed.

5018914 Your current profile pic says otherwise. Is there a pairing name for TwilightXSunset? Also, do you hate Flash Sentry?

5018917 yeah its called Sunlight. And nope. I actually think he's a pretty cool guy.

5018922 I tolerate Flash at best. Like Blueblood, he doesn't have much of a personality, which is the only reason I tolerate him. Every guy I asked hate Flash with the passion of a thousand burning suns. :ajbemused:

5018933 of course because of the whole "Twilight es mah waifu!" Thing. Honestly I think he's a nice love interest for her. He just needs to be fleshed out.

5018975 Is Twilight your waifu? If you ask me, I don't have one... so far. Or at all, for that matter.

As good as I thought. Here, have a fav, a like and some pretzels.

So glad to see a sequel to Adventures in Babysitting.

Here's a favorite and a like for you.

Rainbow and Twilight?!:rainbowhuh: didn't see that one coming.

Comment posted by Sly Cheddar deleted Sep 19th, 2014

Poor Twi. I hope Shining realizes his mistake in yelling at her and tries to fix it. well, eventually

Didn't know you had made a sequel. Darn to me. I doubt I have time to read it tonight. Welp, new thing to read tomorrow then, eh? XD (Nice pic of Twilight, by the way.:D)

Three thoughts after reading the entirety of the first story, and starting this story:

1. Dis gonna be good.

2. Aw, I was hoping for Flutterdash, not Twidash (though if FLuttershy and Rarity are in a relationship, I'll be satisfied)

3. This bugged me to no end, though I am nitpicky about things like this and I'm not trying to offend:

"It was common for Twilight to be left alone by herself"

The department of redundancy department approves this sentence with great approval. (and I never tire of saying that line. It's just too much fun for me to say)

"(especially ever since Cadence had left and she refused to have another babysitter.) And she truly didn’t mind it"

Either the period is on the wrong side of the parentheses, or And shouldn't be capitalized and the period should be excised completely.

Lol kinda funny how I guessed that Celestia would ethier be a teacher in this fan fic or the dean of the college.

Wow, how did I miss this glorious sequel? :moustache:

Having read this, I hope Shining and Cadance turn out okay. :twilightoops:

I was honestly hoping for Flashlight since you were one of the few people who I thought could develop him from a blank to a fleshed out character, but okay. Also, was expecting Flutterdash, but it does go to show you how much things have changed.. :ajsleepy:

Good luck. :ajsmug:

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In all seriousness, I really think you blew the chance to develop a Flashlight relationship that developed over 10 years with us seeing how the two turned out today in favor of a popular and over done pairing involving two already developed characters to create a one off "irony" joke. :applejackunsure:

And I also would have liked to see Fluttershy's and RD's relationship progressing over 10 years as well. :fluttershysad:

But, I'd forgive you if this story had Fluttershy and Flash as a couple. :trixieshiftleft:

5140810 don't worry ill get into all of that. This stories only begun friend.

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K. Just saying. :twilightblush: I'm still mainly in it for the Shining and Cadance stuff, but I still have a few concerns that may come up in this fic, and this Twidash over Flashlight and Flutterdash is the first.

Still good though and worth my time. :scootangel:

Yay update! I think an "and" is missing between Applejack and Fluttershy when they are looking through the yearbook.

"like water for the thirsty and honey for the bee
and a painkiller when your head is aching
as sunshine after rain and Sandwich after tea
so is an update of "adventures in matchmaking"!

Hm, good job and all, but I think I'm gonna list some problems.

First, 10 years is far too long of an obsession. Something is wrong with Shining and that makes him look pathetic. Too pathetic. As in stretching my willing suspension of disbelief. :facehoof:

Cadance seems way too perfect if she was good enough to be skipped ahead. She was already describe as being popular, kind and rich. Kinda overkill, but I guess it's a genius reference to her being an Alicorn. Seriously, the brainy thing is Twilight's trait and Cadance thus comes off as sueish. Oh well, Candace is still my favorite character in this fic. Not too much harm done.

Contrived Twidash and disappointing a Flutterdasher and Twiflasher. I mean, why did you have to abandon the Flutterdash? It was the cutest thing ever. :fluttercry: You don't even apparently like Twidash and what's worse is that Twilight mentioned that she was straight in the previoius fic. Contrived bisexuality annoys me unless there was no previous contradiction. I really hope Flutters and RD get together along with Flash and Twi but hey your fic.

So thoughts on my points?

I also want to say that the flashback was pretty well done.

OH AND PLEASE TELL ME CADANCE IS RELATED TO CELESTIA AND LUNA IN THIS FIC! :pinkiehappy: That would be the best twist ever.

Also, chapters could be longer, but I would never dream of rushing you. I'm interested to see where this turns out.

5268914 multiple people have said that they don't like the twi-dash. Don't worry, ill fix it :pinkiesad2:

5269810
Because flutterdash is one of the cutest things ever.
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Especially rule 63 Flutterdash. LOOK AT THEM:
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I'm straight as fuck, but that is adorable. Hell, it reminds me of Cartman X Butters shipping we have in the South Park fandom.

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And don't worry, you're doing a great job. Honestly, it will only take a few chapters to fix since these are just story problems characters face, not anything with quality.

I love the Twidash in this! They are honestly SOOOOOOOOOOOO cute. Please don't break them up...I mean, unless you want too.... :fluttershysad:

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But Flutterdash is the cutest thing ever!
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If I didn't ship Soarindash or Fluttercord, they would be one of my top.

5294081 I'm not going to fight you about it. But I'm just hoping that the author doesn't break them up just because people wanted them too...

5294087
Meh, we have like a trillion twidash fics. Flutterdash is underdone on fimfic.

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There was hardly any Twidash and it felt like an ass pull while there are twidash fics in thousand upvote range. Don't be greedy.

5294130 Hey, be fair. We are in the third chapter. Not much of anything has happened yet.

5348732
Meh, it would be another twidash fic which we've seen too much of. I've hardly seen flutterdash on this site or even a humanized ones.

I just really hope shinning and cadance get together again tHey are perfect for each other and and there love is pure and can overcome anything Please make this a happy ending please please

Faust Damn it Now I have to wait Buck Buck Buck:flutterrage:

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