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Twilight and Applejack have been married for two years now, so it's not surprising when Applejack gets the motherly bug to have a foal. To please her wife, and to have a foal that belongs to both of them, despite mares not being able to get pregnant the normal way (obviously), Twilight creates a spell to do the job, and it works perfectly. However, there are unexpected consequences when each one of the mane six wake up the next morning and find that they are all expecting their own little bundles of joy.

*Takes place about five years after current cannon*
*Yes, the library is the setting. I'm in careful denial of the thing ever blowing up in the first place*
*Coverart by Me, using a base from Softybases on dA:

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 88 )

Love the pacing so far, in some stories *cough mine cough* the writer would just cut to the case. So in other terms

Mewantmoar

Thanks so much! Moar is coming! I'm almost done with the next few chapters, but I like to release a little spaced out at the beginning so I get a backlog built :twilightblush:

You have piqued my interest
I do hope you carry on soon
I await the update
-DD

4634668 Should be up in the next few days or so! These short chapters are doing wonders for my update rate :twilightblush:

this my good writer is AWSOME. give me more..i cant wait to see where this goes.

Can't wait for chapter 2

4634920 Thank you so much! It shall go good places I hope! :twilightsmile:

That is an excellent opening chapter :twilightsmile: Can't wait to see more like it.

"Owlowscious II"?!?!?! What happened to Owlowscious?! :twilightoops:

Hello. I'd just like to say that this is a very interesting fanfic, and I hope to see more. Even if I am distarcted reading something else, this is well-put-together. :twilightsmile:

4652959 Hey thanks! Glad you like it! And, sadly since time has indeed passed since the main series (about five years), Owlowscious the first has gone to bird heaven:scootangel:, and her offspring is happily living in the library with Twi and AJ ::twilightsmile:

The pacing of this story is tantalisingly slow. :trollestia: Norally, I'd get frustrated about there being "No action", but this is going so smoothly that I don't mind the slow pace.

4655311 Thanks! I'm glad you think it's going well! I wanted to get a bit of info out before the really good stuff gets going, hopefully it wasn't too much of a info dump! :twilightblush: Getting to the fun stuff next chapter. :yay:

4653008 Hey, now Owlo-whatever his name is can go and live with the alter-world representation of Scootaloo, the chicken! :scootangel:

wish it would update little faster or else, awesome

4662904 Yeah, I'm trying to update about every 4 days or so, that way I can keep up with the writing and not get behind. Currently I have a backlog of two or so chapters, so hopefully I can stay enough ahead. :D Otherwise, we'll get a few chapters in and I'd run out and it would be a week or more before you had your next update :twilightblush:

4663072 yyyyyaaaayyy :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:. but D: buts i forgot to save part of a a story i was working on before veiwing thia reply :fluttercry:

4663084 OH NOES!!! D: That's why I type my stories in google drive (that auto save is amazing!) :rainbowwild:

4664126 due to the fact I was writing about chores
Chaos lords and my crazy O.C must have magically saved it. Our something. Another thing is that once I finish one of my stories or something I was wondering if I could do a story like this one but not at the same time. :twilightblush:

Yay, getting into the story!!!!

So faving this right now. Must. Have. Moar!

The first half of this chapter was SO cute :rainbowkiss: But then Applejack needed to ruin it, didn't she? :facehoof: Your pseudo-science-magic thing about how Twilight's magic can force impregnation has a good premise. It's just a little confusing in some of Twi's explanation, and sometimes it seems a little vague, but I get the theory of it, all the same. Most F/F pregnancy fictions use impregnation through unicorn horn sex or gender alteration spells - futa and such forth.

One thing I'd like to see; how Twi and Applejack's wedding went. Maybe in a future chapter, do you think you could have a flashback to the proposal and the wedding day? Maybe Twilight starts having fears and doubts about the pregnancy, but something Applejack says brings back those memories for her that help her get over those insecurities. The way you've written these two together is so adorable :pinkiehappy: Hope to see more updates soon

4677245 Thanks! There will be more explanation next chapter, when Twilight actually you know, does the spell, but mostly just well "magic" :twilightblush:. And, that stuff about doing a flashback to their wedding is actually a really cute idea! I think I'm gonna write that in now :yay: I don't know where in my outline it's gonna fit, but now I really want to write it! So, thanks! Also, glad you're liking the story!

I was looking forward to a new chapter! :pinkiehappy: It's just as enjoyable as usual, and I can't wait for the next to come out! :heart:

I like it:twilightsmile: I shall keep reading

Yay! AJ's expecting! And so are the other Element Bearers though they don't know it yet. Hope that wasn't a spoiler.

So the Rainbow of Harmony hijacked Twilight's spell. Was it her overlooking her and her friends connection to the rainbow power causing an unexpected reaction? Or does Harmony have a will of its own and did this to some unknown purpose?

And through making a deal with the Devil, Applejack found herself with child :trollestia: Sorry, but if you use pentagrams, you can expect jokes like that :twilightblush: Nice to see you added in a quick description about the proposal. Twilight proposed? That's a surprise, I would've thought AJ would take the initiative :ajsmug: But good on Twi :twilightsmile: Looking forward to further updates

PurpleFire135 i got a question when will the next chapter come out for this story

4781156 I knew this would happen!:fluttershbad: I'm so sorry, but the next chapter might take a bit. I'm working on getting done with my summer job and getting ready to move back to school. Once I get settled there, the chapters should start popping up again. :twilightsheepish: So, mid-august? Maybe sooner, but I'm giving myself extra time to get it done! Again, I'm sorry! :raritydespair:

4782006 ok and i forgive you two times

CANT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER

4869571 Soon, young grasshopper, soon...

Sorry for my favorite pony, but Rainbow is an idiot.

LOVE THIS STORY CAN NOT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER

MORE NOW, PLZZZZ?

4921568 Yeah, I had way to much fun with that :twilightsheepish:

:rainbowlaugh: Haha Dash pregnant. This is gonna be good! Except...
What's gonna happen to her wonderbolts career?? :twilightoops:

4923622 No it's the exact amount of ignorance Rainbow Dash has.

Rainbow dash the most stupidest pony ever but still funny

Haha! Dense Dash strikes again!

Well, Twilight will have a lot of explaining to do :twilightblush:

Well that's just typical, ain't it? :facehoof: Although, I can't help but notice.... :raritydespair:, :pinkiehappy:, :rainbowderp::..... where's Fluttershy's reaction? :fluttershysad: Did the spell not affect her? But isn't that the problem with magic? Try to make the impossible happen, get half a dozen times more than you were expecting. Oh, the joys of magic :trollestia:

I'd say at least 2 ponies want to strangle Twilight... :rainbowderp::raritycry: Probably have to wait until after her baby is born though.

I love it! Pinkie makes a fantastic mom, it surprised me a little.

"No, silly, only mommys can have babies! Are you a mommy?"

:rainbowlaugh: yup. Pinkie is best mom.

spike is with rarity right? i hope so.
Because if so spike willmthink he got rarity pregnant. when he probably didn't.

5005738 nope, he's with Celestia I think...

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