Warwolf
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@Warwolf...
While your story premise/style/theme(s) may not be my cup of tea {no malice intended, just personal opinion/preferences}, your Technical Writing (spelling, grammar, format, etc.) and your high word count earns you a Like from me on those two (always important) literary writing factors.
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Thanks. ...I think.
Keep an eye out. There's more to come in this story.
I Need More
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More will be coming in the days and weeks ahead.
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It was a compliment.
Regardless of personal story preference, I always applaud (&/or Like) good Technical Writing and a hearty Word Count per chapter.
Whether I read later chapters, perhaps if the timing is good and I happen to see it in the Updates List. As I said, not my cup of tea for fan-fictions (thus not actively Favorite-tracking).
As usual, a very well written grammatically and high word count story. As expected, Warwolf.
That said...
-Bops Discord-
No touchy with the dimensional fabric of the universe! Not unless you're a user of the Second True Magic! Otherwise, it guarentees Bad Things to happen! And yes, the Capitals are Necessary!
IC Shenanigans aside, I do look forwards to moar stuff from you. Not just this, the rest of your stuff as well.
Humm.
Combine that they both like sci-fi with the description of what is attacking the old world.
Sounds like Cylons to me.
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You're surprisingly close. Off by a year and series. But the Cylon thing would be a good guess.
Are we talking gen1 cylones or the newer ones? That would give me a clue as to what to look at.
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Like I said, you're not thinking of the right series. In other words, while Battlestar Galactia wasn't a bad guess, you're a year short and a country off.
Finally got around to this one. It felt a bit choppy at the start, but I got into it once the sex scene was over. (I find myself skimming over most sex scenes I read regardless of quality recently.)
The MUCK Twilight's discomfort at the premise of the story mirrors mine. You might have an uphill battle to convince me that Celestia would in fact punish Twilight in such a way (especially with that speech in the end I mean Jesus), or that every one of Twilight's friends (except Spike) would just let it happen like that. I'm still holding out hope for a reconciliation down the line. I'll keep watching this because of the good times we had on the MUCK.
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Hehehehe. The muck version is inspired by this version. However, more will be explained as we go. Will there be a reconciliation?
Only way to find out is to watch and read on!
lovin it
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Happy to hear it. Anything in particular you liked or disliked? I'm always looking for constructive criticism.
I liked it but really? Yugure Kirameku? really?
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What?
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Seriously, what's wrong with the name?
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It's more of I bothered to use a translator on the names
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Yeah so? It's Twilight Sparkle in Japanese. What's wrong with that?
So got any critique for the story?
What is this a crossover of?
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I'm waiting to see if anyone can guess it. The crossover aspect of this story has been hinted at since the first chapter. I'm surprised nobody got it before now. The ending of the second chapter should tell you, if you know what to look for. Candy Cane or cookie (depending on when/if anyone can guess it) to whoever can guess. Also, do be aware, I've also given a hint in the comments as well when someone already made a guess. I told them they were close, but a year short and a country off. That's your only other hint for now.
Mm.....Only I Think In Transformer, OR A Variety Of It.
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Nope. You're five years and a country off.
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Braves Series?
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I have no idea what that is.
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Ever Heard of King of Braves Gaogaigar?
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Vaguely. You're thinking along sorta the right lines, but not quite. Not right yet. Think less Super and more real.
I don't know if I ever brought this up, because I feel conflicted about this story and we're friends and all (or at least I hope so), but I'm not entirely convinced that everypony would be so convinced that Twilight was guilty, especially since we haven't been shown anything from the attack and Twilight's conviction and sentencing. I hope that this changes in the future, but in the meantime this huge rift is actually making me feel emotions that I like feeling, so I'll keep reading.
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Oh yes, we will be seeing more about that. In the meantime, glad you're enjoying. Anything in particular jumping out at you?
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Just that it feels like I'm getting a lot of an incomplete picture, and I'm not sure that putting a sentence in untranslated Japapanese romanji was the right way to go. It looks so weird.
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Well, if I've gotten you curious about what happens next, then the narrative style I decided to go with is doing its job. What do you think of the chars so far? Which reminds me, haven't seen you on the MU* lately.
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Eh. Not much. This does not strike me as a very character-driven story.
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It's more a plot driven story. But I meant what do you think of the chars so far, not necessarily whether you think the chars drive the story.
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The missing pieces that I mentioned earlier makes it pretty much impossible to determine how in-character everyone is acting. As for the OC Marc, I don't remember that much about him from the first chapter that distinguishes him from being a perfect boyfriend that someone wishes they had.