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"Really secret. Please don't read!"

-Derpy Hooves.

Heavily revised with assistance from NorsePony and Denim_Blue.

First Published
11th Apr 2012
Last Modified
11th Apr 2012
#1 · 140w, 15h ago · 2 · 4 ·

First?

#3 · 140w, 15h ago · 2 · ·

I love her drawings XD

#4 · 140w, 15h ago · · ·

>Dorpy

D'AAAWWWWW:derpytongue2:

#5 · 140w, 15h ago · 2 · ·

awww that was cute

#6 · 140w, 15h ago · · ·

Interesting... I like it. Tracking. Keep it up. :pinkiehappy:

#7 · 140w, 15h ago · · ·

A tad random, But it was a good break from constant reading of Saving the world, Shipping and Massive amounts of violance that I read all the time =P

#8 · 140w, 15h ago · · 1 ·

It's Ditzy Doo.

Also.

Nice story.

Mr. cat.

#9 · 140w, 15h ago · · ·

Dorpy :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: that's amazing.

Awesome diary :D

#10 · 140w, 15h ago · · ·

This is incredibly cute! :heart::heart::heart:

#11 · 140w, 15h ago · · ·

This was adorable. Thank you for sharing, I hope you choose to continue. And yes, im following it, even though you marked it as complete. Im a dork like that.

#12 · 140w, 15h ago · · ·

Yay

#13 · 140w, 15h ago · 2 · ·

Sees DO NOT READ

Reads anyways

Nice:pinkiehappy:

#14 · 140w, 14h ago · 2 · ·

Welp, you've managed to make a pony moe. Are you proud of yourself? ARE YOU?

Seriously though, that was great fun. It's great to see something so... just plain happy after all the Everything Else that MLP fanfiction seems to resort to. I want moar.

#15 · 140w, 14h ago · · ·

Awesome story, you write Derpy very well...

:twilightsmile:

I'm SOOO pisssed! I can't see the pictures!!!!!:flutterrage:

Silverstein222 out!

#16 · 140w, 14h ago · · ·

I very much like. An amazing work of "Dawwwwwwwwwww" if I do say so myself.

#17 · 140w, 14h ago · · ·

This was really cute... everyone accepts her and tries to help her at working on her flaws. Rainbow Dash training with her patiently and praising her, so adorable :heart:

#18 · 140w, 14h ago · · ·

More? Awesome writing :3 I'd rreeeeaaaaaallyy would like more!

:twilightblush:

#21 · 140w, 14h ago · · ·

>>440113

Fimfiction chat.

#22 · 140w, 14h ago · · ·

>>440124

just noticed that.

#23 · 140w, 14h ago · · ·

>>440136

I'm going to regret his now.

#26 · 140w, 13h ago · 1 · ·

Sugarcube Corner

"Be there or be square!"

OH SNAP!

#27 · 140w, 13h ago · 1 · ·

I think it was a fun and good story so i up-voted it, but i think it's a shame that a lot of people make derpy seem  like an idiot.

anyway, keep up the good work.:heart:

#28 · 140w, 13h ago · 1 · ·

That was pretty cute. You made her seem clumsy, but not idiotic. I salute you, good sir/ma'am/person.

Meeester
Story Approver
#29 · 140w, 12h ago · · ·

OH MY GAWD :derpytongue2:

Loved it. Absolutely loved it.

#30 · 140w, 12h ago · · ·

First time in forever I literally "daawwwd" at a story. :derpytongue2:

so cute!

#31 · 140w, 12h ago · 1 · ·

You have captured the soul of Derpy. I hope you do more chapters.

I get such a Flowers For Algernon feeling from this, and that is such a good thing.

#32 · 140w, 12h ago · · ·

Cute story! :3 :derpytongue2:

#33 · 140w, 12h ago · · ·

Great read, mate.

Hard to find good lighthearted material around here, so this is a nice change of pace!

#34 · 140w, 12h ago · · ·

That was really good. I expect this to be featured tomorrow.

#35 · 140w, 12h ago · · ·

If this gets featured, you must become Opal.

#36 · 140w, 12h ago · · ·

Hee hee. I laugh at the Derpy bubbliness. :derpytongue2:

Obselescence
Moderator
#37 · 140w, 11h ago · · ·

I was honestly not expecting this much of a positive response.

#38 · 140w, 11h ago · · ·

Insert generic comment about how this is a good story and how I enjoyed it... also add in roughly 5 emotes.

:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: Huzzah.

#39 · 140w, 8h ago · · ·

Hmmm... alright, you caught me, I enjoyed this story.

Five duck faces for you.

:duck::duck::duck::duck::duck:

#40 · 140w, 8h ago · · ·

I read it because I was told not to.

#41 · 140w, 7h ago · · ·

Derpy is best artist. Derpy is best writer. Derpy is full of win and I shall read this diary.

#42 · 140w, 7h ago · · ·

Dorpy. Best ending ever. :derpytongue2: :heart:

#44 · 140w, 7h ago · · ·

"Really secret. Please don't read. :X"

Ok. *Closes window* :derpytongue2:

#45 · 140w, 7h ago · · ·

Alright...that was pretty cute. Have a like and fave on the house. :pinkiehappy:

#46 · 140w, 6h ago · · ·

Yes yes yes!!!!!!!1

#47 · 140w, 6h ago · · ·

I refuse to read this on the basis that Ms. Hooves has asked politely that I not. :duck:

#48 · 140w, 6h ago · · ·

Simply put: Nice have a thumb :derpytongue2:

#49 · 140w, 6h ago · · ·

must... resist... urge to read...

started... writing with... same... concept...

will save... for later...

#50 · 140w, 6h ago · · ·

>>439948

Tag says Derpy Hooves. Hell, the show says Derpy Hooves, unless you want to argue with canon, in which case do carry on being delusional.

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