First?

>>439918439918

yup

I love her drawings XD

>Dorpy

D'AAAWWWWW

awww that was cute

Interesting... I like it. Tracking. Keep it up.

A tad random, But it was a good break from constant reading of Saving the world, Shipping and Massive amounts of violance that I read all the time =P

It's Ditzy Doo.

Also.

Nice story.

Mr. cat.

Dorpy that's amazing.

Awesome diary :D

This is incredibly cute!

This was adorable. Thank you for sharing, I hope you choose to continue. And yes, im following it, even though you marked it as complete. Im a dork like that.

Yay

Sees DO NOT READ

Reads anyways

Nice

Welp, you've managed to make a pony moe. Are you proud of yourself? ARE YOU?

Seriously though, that was great fun. It's great to see something so... just plain happy after all the Everything Else that MLP fanfiction seems to resort to. I want moar.

Awesome story, you write Derpy very well...

I'm SOOO pisssed! I can't see the pictures!!!!!

Silverstein222 out!

I very much like. An amazing work of "Dawwwwwwwwwww" if I do say so myself.

This was really cute... everyone accepts her and tries to help her at working on her flaws. Rainbow Dash training with her patiently and praising her, so adorable

More? Awesome writing :3 I'd rreeeeaaaaaallyy would like more!

Because you keep asking for this in chat.

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Are you happy now?

>>440090440090

what chat?!

>>440113440113

Fimfiction chat.

>>440124440124

just noticed that.

>>440136440136

I'm going to regret his now.

>>440142440142

yes, you are

>>440181440181

Sugarcube Corner

"Be there or be square!"

OH SNAP!

I think it was a fun and good story so i up-voted it, but i think it's a shame that a lot of people make derpy seem  like an idiot.

anyway, keep up the good work.

That was pretty cute. You made her seem clumsy, but not idiotic. I salute you, good sir/ma'am/person.

OH MY GAWD

Loved it. Absolutely loved it.

First time in forever I literally "daawwwd" at a story.

so cute!

You have captured the soul of Derpy. I hope you do more chapters.

I get such a Flowers For Algernon feeling from this, and that is such a good thing.

Cute story! :3

Great read, mate.

Hard to find good lighthearted material around here, so this is a nice change of pace!

That was really good. I expect this to be featured tomorrow.

If this gets featured, you must become Opal.

Hee hee. I laugh at the Derpy bubbliness.

I was honestly not expecting this much of a positive response.

Insert generic comment about how this is a good story and how I enjoyed it... also add in roughly 5 emotes.

Huzzah.

Hmmm... alright, you caught me, I enjoyed this story.

Five duck faces for you.

I read it because I was told not to.

Derpy is best artist. Derpy is best writer. Derpy is full of win and I shall read this diary.

Dorpy. Best ending ever.

Hi

"Really secret. Please don't read. :X"

Ok. *Closes window*

Alright...that was pretty cute. Have a like and fave on the house.

Yes yes yes!!!!!!!1

I refuse to read this on the basis that Ms. Hooves has asked politely that I not.

Simply put: Nice have a thumb

must... resist... urge to read...

started... writing with... same... concept...

will save... for later...

>>439948439948

Tag says Derpy Hooves. Hell, the show says Derpy Hooves, unless you want to argue with canon, in which case do carry on being delusional.

Why on earth did this make me tear up?

The last few paragraphs seem ominous for some reason

But when I saw: :O, I lost it

Ah, a nice refreshing read. A good escape from all those suspenseful fics I always seem to read.

Love, Dorpy.

That made me laugh the most, actually.

GREAT STORY!

-TechnoPony

P.S:

>>440328440328

>>440473440473 That was the exact same thing that popped into my head too. Oh, Reading class...

I loved this story, though- and yes, you should have been expecting this much positive feedback. Unless you're modest, which is ok, but this is a really good piece of writing that expands upon one of the maybe(?) personalities of Derpy/Ditzy Doo. You're good and you should feel good.

(Twilight): "OH NO, WHAT'S THIS DOING IN THE LIBARY?!"

(Rainbow Dash): "BHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"

(Rarity): "Such a gossip goldmine! oh, wait until the ladies at the spa hear this!"

(Derpy): "Hey guys, i-"

(Derpy): "Huh?"

(Twilight): "Derpy, we can explain."

(Derpy): "You read my dairy?"

(Twilight): "Derpy, we didn't mean too, we found this on a pile of books you left about Humpy Dumpy Donkey, and-"

(Derpy): "Was it fun to read?"

(Pinkie Pie): "All's well that ends well."

I'm sorry Derpy... I looked at your diary

This was really cute.  You should make these a weekly thing.

Loved it!!!!

O.k. Derpy, I won't read your diary.  I'll respect you privacy.

Aw, that was cute!

>>442118442118 Same here, bud, except I'm not doing this to respect her privacy, I'm doing it to troll the author.

:>>439943439943 I'm only replying because your profile pic is cool.

Awww Derpy, You'll always have a friend in me. You adorable scamp you.

>>442052442052 I was expecting the same reaction should anyone find this diary   

Great story! Very cute, continue! Tracked!

>>439948439948 In "The Last Roundup", Rainbow Dash adresses her as "Derpy".

Too... Much... Dawww....

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>>439943439943 Kake?

>>442219442219 I also have a mountain of other fanfics to read.

this was a really great story and i think that these are the type of stories that deserve publicity. They are sweet and innocent, like the characters they are about

Loved the sign off, Dorpy

sorry derpy, but i simply can't respect your privacy.... the request not to read was too much.

i am ashamed

Dorpy is best pony.

>>439943439943 A random fanfic a day keeps the ghosties away.

Very cute story =) It was fun to read.

YAAAAAAY positive light dashie

and derpy as clumsy and having a relatively limited vocabulary with focus issues makes more sense than a stupid one

I LOVE this fic! But, it had too much cuteness, Dorpy

It made me baawwwwwww halfway through

>>442524442524

Heck yeah Dorpy is!

Derpy needs more love like this!

Dat drawing. I would commission her for done arts.

My good sir, I must thank you for sparking in me an incredible story idea. Not to mention, I find this story very moving and expertly done... I must also applaud you on your use of what I refer to as "Derpyisms."

You receive a gentleman Spike

Good show!

Ah, the sweet, surreal feeling of reading a 2000+ word pony story at 1 in the morning narrated with Baldumborat's voice in my head on a school night.

>>442344442344 We all know that the kake is a Lie ...

This. This right here is now my favorite fic ever. Why?

It isn't sad for the sole purpose of trying to become the next MLD.

It isn't gory for the sole purpose of trying to become the next cupcakes.

It isn't an idea that has been done millions of times before.

Well done.

Yus.

This was pointless and boring.

D'awwww. I loved this! It was so heart-touching. You also played her off as being not so smart and kind of oblivious, yet showing that she is aware of everypony and what they are doing. It was adorably sad in my eyes. She really tries. This is definitely going in my faves. Good job!

>>442888442888 Just because something's not action packed or emotionally thrilling doesn't make it boring. I thought the story was cute and fun.

>>442903442903

Actually, the lack of that is exactly what makes a story boring.

>>442908442908 If all you care about is action and thrill, you are a sad, sad person.

I found this to be cute and well written. Well done.

Very good, a definate gold star story

I loved the lined out mistakes, especially when she spelled "sophisticated" correctly but lined it out for "suffisticated."

I noticed you have this marked as complete, too bad as I would like to see more of it.

What I can't understand is how 5 readers (as of now) have given this a thumbs down.

>>442316442316>>441863441863

That got cut out.

And been used once by dash doesn't make it a name, makes it a nick name.

You know why?

She was mad with her, when she's mad with Twilight she called her egghead.

So Ditzy doo can still be used.

>>443089443089 I prefer Derpy. We made the name, so it seems more... Intimate.

This was unbelievably cute. I loved how she crossed out 'sophisticated' and wrote 'suffisticated'. I laughed at that.

Good job, mate.

>>442888442888

I respect your opinion but must humbly disagree with you.

I found it to be cute and well done, even though not much of anything happened. Let's be honest here, not everyone's going to be able to write emotionally jarring stories or action-filled thrillers, so it's nice to just see somepony write a nice, lighthearted little note about a day in the life of Derpy.

This probably didn't change how you feel at all (it didn't), but I'm okay with that. Like I said, you're entitled to your own opinion.

>>443132443132

Never really liked Derpy, but maybe it's a nation thing.

Derp is a more american word.

And the story is very cute.

>>443146443146 I'm not American.

It was definitely D'awwwww-worthy.

>>442908442908

It's [slice of life] which is basically an average day for a character, in which average things happen, averagely.

Your definition of boring is obviously not the same as everyone else's who commented. Congratulations on your hamfisted approach at nonconformity.

*ahem*

@Obselecence

I got the feeling, while reading, that there were things going on in the original scenes, that were slightly less sunshine and rainbows than she saw it, yet at the same time, she wasn't completely oblivious. The fact that I was able to imagine more than what was written is a testament to how aptly written it was.

What is interesting about this story, is that years in the future, when equologists are studying the culture of the past, and they find that diary, they'll probably learn more about society than from the collected works of recorded history of that time period. A diary is often more indicative of the values of a society than its official documented history, due to the lack of direct political bias over every comment. What can be learned from this entry...? An interesting thought...at least to me.

In any case, while I normally dislike [SoL] I enjoyed this thoroughly.

~Scivor

>>443157443157

Nor am I, but most of the people who came up with the first fandom were.

I can see the cute in this, don't feel it, but I can see it.

>>442888442888>>443174443174>>443144443144

He does have a piont, it's cute but boring.

This story is rock solid. I enjoy reading it, and my niece loves reading along with me.

Thank you.   

Moar please, if you have time?

It got featured.

Obal, pay up, in chat you are now Opal.

>>443179443179 Feel the cuteness, my friend...

FEEL IT.