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In a horrible bet gone wrong, Diamond Tiara and Apple Bloom are lost in the great outdoors. Having no idea on how they're going to get home, they need the guiding hoof of fate to save them. That is where you come in! Will your decisions save our fillies? Or will you lead them to their demise? Come, and find out.

*rating may go up depending on choices made by you, the reader

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 170 )

My vote goes to lesbian orgy.

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[20:46:10] Mattricole: yuki
[20:46:13] Mattricole: make a serious vote
[20:46:18] Mattricole: you get three choices
[20:46:25] Mattricole: THAT'S NONE OF THE CHOICES
[20:46:36] Mattricole: I'm whiny and picky and have no sense of humour ¬3¬

FIIIIIIINE! I vote for numbah three.

4622241 nvm and i vote for Follow the road east

At least she has magic, maybe she even knows a fire spell or something.

Trust me, DT, if Sweetie Belle tried to cast a fire spell, the story would be very short...

I vote number 3 :twilightsmile:

Are you going to show all of the choices eventually?

Comment posted by Mattricole deleted Jun 30th, 2014

I vote 'horrible demise and/or alicorn ascension'! :trollestia:

Hey Mattricole, have you consider posting this on writing.com? You'll fit in with all the terrible writers there. :rainbowwild:

I vote North. If they keep heading that way they're bound to hit the arctic, and could easily "convince" a few Windigos to help.

I vote number three, since I really need explanations for what the heck's going on.

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You do realize saying this will lead some readers to specifically try to get them killed, right? Just for the challenge?

4622338 I'm tempted to pick whatever will get them killed now that I know its a challenge.

4622384 Puh-lease. I bet they're nothing compared to those on fanfiction.net. I would know, I'm a member.

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...Your prediction is coming true :rainbowderp:

4622397 Oh good lets get this started then. *ahem*

> Reminisce on how this came to be, hoping somepony will find us as we wait.

Alright, lets move north, good stuff is always north!!! Like waffles, and killing diamond tiara!!

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Don't worry. I, at least, will be trying to keep them alive.

...well, Apple Bloom, anyway...

>Throw Diamond Tiara at the next attacking predator. Either eating her gives AB time to run away, or kills the predator from food poisoning.

Also, I'll be voting for any choice involving coating themselves in the droppings of a large predator. Not only will it drive DT crazy, it will keep all scent based hunters - 90% of them - from having any interest in eating them.

>Go Dennis.
(Or east, if Dennis isn't an option.)

In any case, looking forward to more. Especially as Diamond Tiara's sanity continues to decay. (Earth pony sanity and medium awareness are inversely related, after all. Cf. :pinkiehappy:)

I vote for an explanation on how they got stuck in a cave in the first place plz ; it would be interesting to know. :derpyderp2:

Number 3, please with popcorn and tartar sauce. Thank you!

Lets go north.

And curse you! My co-workers are wondering what's so funny.

After a lot of thinking, I have reached a conclusion:

Head East.

:3:rainbowkiss:

Door number 2 please

4622395 that explains so much.

You are free to jab my balls until I squeal in agony.

Edit: in case you don't know this, writing.com is an interactive writing site. Anyone can input their...writing... styles. Huh. Hey Mattricole, post it there! :D

Re-edit: I vote for Diamond's whimsical fantasy. Bow Chica Bow Wow! :rainbowkiss: Wait, what do you mean that's not a choice?

Re-re-edit: Reminisce then.

I vote #3

And then make them both alicorns :scootangel:

Move forth to the north!

And so the story begins, three choices start off this adventure of small yet great intentions. As such i require more information on how this came to be, I choose the choice numbered three. :twilightsmile:

I vote Three as well.

Okay seriously, how many comment driven stories has this been since I wrote the first one? :ajbemused:

But I'll play along.

I vote going north. That's never been wrong before. :pinkiehappy:

> voted for three. :pinkiecrazy:

"Rating may go up depending on choices made by you, the reader"

It's Chapter 1 and already there's a teen and sex tag.

I love this fandom.

Reminisce

>Reminisce on how this came to be, hoping somepony will find us as we wait.

Oh, man, this story is totally awesome already, as is the concept. I'll vote to head east, 'cause why not.

>Reminisce on how this came to be, hoping somepony will find us as we wait.

I vote north. Into the Everfree.
Or east, if it goes deeper into the Everfree.

I want this story to go deeper, is what I'm saying. They need to find Zecora and use alchemy to turn marecum into a healing potion!

Apple Bloom knows she wants to.

>Reminisce on how this came to be, hoping somepony will find us as we wait.

also GODDAMMIT DIAMOND TIARA :facehoof: i already like this story

I vote for 'Applebloom rapes the hydra'.

Failing that (spoilsport), I vote for waiting, because forced hydra mating is more likely that way.

I vote for reminisce. They need the breather.:twilightsmile:

Did anyone else read this thinking of a Diamond Tiara voiced by Plague of Gripes?

Punch self in face for being a bitch.

This sounds stupid:facehoof:... upvote and fave.:yay:

4628227 You should smile more. Also, that's not one of the options. Play nice. :fluttercry:

4645959 Hey, maybe if Apple Bloom hadn't awoken that Hydra... :trollestia:

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