Twilight Sparkle couldn't be happier. Ponyville has set a new record for the length of time between disasters that have occurred in the otherwise quiet little town, there are no new evils rising in the horizon and her new telescope just arrived in the mail. Then, she gets a party invitation for a pony that just arrived in town. Twilight soon learns that the new pony isn't as she thought she was, and she may be more trouble than she seems. Answers seem to evade Twilight, as she can't pin any information from the newcomer. But in the background, darkness is rising, and the only way out of the danger is through cooperation and perseverance.
Meanwhile, the new mare struggles to fit into her new home...
AUTHOR'S DISCLAIMER & NOTES:
I know "Adventure" is tagged with the story, but halfway through it's gonna slightly shift towards slice of life. Why? Because that's how I plan it to be. I'm warning all of you this now because I can't have both "Adventure" and "Slice of Life" tags at the same time. So just be aware of that.
I'm a bit of a stickler when it comes to tags.
Also, this story is rated teen for violence, broken bones and possibly a little bit of blood.
Shows promise. I reserve further judgment for later chapters.
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You just spurred me on to write another chapter lol.
Showing more promise. (However I personally feel that details give the story a nice personal touch, but to each his own.) There was one error: The last word 'come' should be 'coma.'
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Good catch. I swear to @#$! that I already edited the entire thing. I guess that's what happens when I don't have an actual editor to help me.