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    PK's Stories (2)

    • Antipodes
      An epic post-apocolyptic adventure fic surrounding Celestia and Luna's dissapearence.

      122,115 words · 8,935 views · 941 likes · 39 dislikes
    • Lodestone
      An ancient wound in a healing world is re-opened. A strange artifact emerges, with a strange power- Spectrum cannot die. Can he uncover his true purpose before his time runs out? Sequel to Antipodes.
      11,573 words · 1,308 views · 150 likes · 4 dislikes
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    Set in the far future after Celestia and Luna mysteriously vanished and the sun and moon froze in the sky, Antipodes is the story of two ponies thrust out into the harsh new world on an adventure to uncover what happened to the world so long ago.

    First Published
    10th Jul 2011
    Last Modified
    19th Oct 2012

    Comments ( 701 )

    #1 · Chapter 16 · 97w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Love this story. Nice to see that it's supporting this site too.

    #2 · Chapter 16 · 97w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Overall, a very nice story that I'll be tracking.  There were some parts, though, that seemed a little off, like the scene where Spike aka Tantalus kills innocent ponies.  I don't think he would do that unless he's radically changed.

    PK
    #3 · Chapter 16 · 97w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>102

    Give it time...

    #4 · Chapter 16 · 97w, 10h ago · · ·
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    One of the better fanfics I've read to date.

    The story is long and full of adventure, just the way I like it. I'm eagerly awaiting chapter 17!

    P.S. The beginning of the fanfic reminds me of "City of Ember".

    #5 · Chapter 17 · 96w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I love this series. I started reading this on EqD, and now I'm excited that it is also posted here! Keep up the good work PK.

    Also: Still love TiptoeXJigsaw! So cute

    #6 · Chapter 17 · 96w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Woop! another chapter read - and anxiously awaiting the next! :D

    #7 · Chapter 16 · 96w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Not sure if it's just a glitch on my end, but the formatting for chapter 16 is a little broken, with a line break after the first word of most of the paragraphs.

    #8 · Chapter 17 · 96w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Eagerly waiting for more! =] This is a very interesting world!

    #9 · Chapter 6 · 94w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Tantalus is Spike, isn't he?

    #10 · Chapter 18 · 94w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>102

    I wasn't too surprised; Spike had been using dark magic for centuries to make himself powerful enough to stand up to Rubidium.

    #11 · Chapter 6 · 94w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Alright! now the real adventure begins! :rainbowkiss:

    I'll be honest, when Tantalus debriefed them on their mission, he seemed quick to endow them with such responsibility... I mean, These are two ponies he's never seen before, even the first ones he's seen in ages, he knows nothing of what they can do, and he also knows it's nothing compared to the dark magic pony, and all they want is to go home... And then lickety-split, he sends them off. Honestly that sounds a bit... wrong, story-telling wise. Then again, Tantalus could easily just be doing this to be rid of them, or have them do the dirty work for him.. oh well. Time to keep reading! :pinkiehappy:

    PK
    #12 · Chapter 18 · 94w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1080

    there are reasons for this! stay tuned!

    #13 · Chapter 19 · 93w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Well, damn, that nearly brought me to tears, great work. Can't wait to see how this plays out!

    #14 · Chapter 19 · 93w, 5d ago · · ·
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    PK...you scared me there for a bit, and now I feel stupid for ever doing so. You can tell the effort you put into there, especially when it came to the swctions where we se each characters flaws. That was pure gold!

    PK
    #15 · Chapter 19 · 93w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1288 That's so great to hear! I teared up a little writing Incendia's part, not gonna lie.

    >>1289 :o I scared you? Well, sorry about that! I'm glad you liked the chapter, though.

    #16 · Chapter 19 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Hoover Dam, that's like... like... :pinkiecrazy:  awesome!

    Pretty much what Medivh said.

    #17 · Chapter 19 · 93w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Awesome job.:twilightsmile:

    #18 · Chapter 6 · 93w, 7h ago · · ·
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    Despite a few pacing issues, this is shaping up rather nicely.

    I like it - I don't usually read OC stories. Yet these character templates work well as ponies and the story keeps an odd feeling of familiarity.

    To sum up my feelings - not bad. Not bad at all.

    PK
    #19 · Chapter 19 · 93w, 5h ago · · ·
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    The fact that this is slowly climbing the featured stories list despite no activity from me both delights and confuses me. :twilightsmile:

    new chapter maybe tomorrow or thursday? this week almost for sure.

    #20 · Chapter 20 · 92w, 6d ago · · ·
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    :raritystarry: >mfw I finished this chapter.  Definitely one of my favorites!

    #21 · Chapter 20 · 92w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >sees Antipodes being updated

    >:pinkiegasp:

    >:heart:

    #22 · Chapter 20 · 92w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I love this story... but you left in a message to your pre-readers by mistake. Also, you're awesome and I love your characters. I wish mine were as good as yours...

    PK
    #23 · Chapter 20 · 92w, 6d ago · · ·
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    derp, fixed the proofreader note

    also WHAT TOP FEATURED STORY WHAT.

    #24 · Chapter 20 · 92w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Woot great update! Now give more :ajsmug:

    #25 · Chapter 20 · 92w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Awesome chapter. Is. awesome. Thank you. You made my day..again.. :D

    #26 · Chapter 20 · 92w, 4d ago · · ·
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    i say :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

    #27 · Chapter 20 · 92w, 4d ago · · ·
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    This isn't as much of a comment as much as a review. Don't worry, though, because I wouldn't be wasting my time writing a review for a worthless story. There's two things I want to make clear before I begin, though.

    #1 - This story is a complete 5/5. All of the problems that I mention in this review are minor that do not really detract from the story in any significant way. So when I suggest anything, although you should note it, it's not something that you have to change.

    #2 - I give thorough reviews. I have good ideas. And I'm not being arrogant when I say that, because I'm a writer as well, and I have received my fair share of praise and feedback. However, writing is a work of art, and like all works of art, it can be made better. So read my entire review, please.

    Now that I've gotten that out of the way, I'm going to answer some questions that I think every good reviewer should answer.

    My favorite hero: This is a very hard decision. All of your heroes are extremely well developed, and their motives clear. Each of them has their merits and flaws, which makes for an interesting story, hence why I read the entire thing (20 chapters so far) in one day. Of all of them, I think that Jigsaw is the best, because he has both aspects of his personality in check. Where Tiptoe only has the personality merits and flaws, and Incendia has a jarring event in her past that defines her personality, Jigsaw is the only one that has both. I am okay with Tiptoe not having a jarring event like the others, but I think that Incendia's personality needs to be slightly more defined.

    My favorite villain: Well, Rubidium, because he seemed like the most diabolical at the time he was alive. I would have liked you to keep him around as a reviewer and story critic, but as a reader, I'm glad to have him out of the characters' hair. I really can't say too much more than this because your story's theme in general was the heroes versus the environment, so you won't have too many villains. And that really isn't a problem.

    Who needs work: Like I said earlier, all of your characters are well developed and interesting. Tantalus stands out, though, because we know so little about him, even after this chapter. My only suggestion here is that when you do develop him, make sure you do it in the right time and place. I also have a minor point about Incendia. Personally, and as a reader, I preferred your story when there was no swearing at all. My father says that swears make anypony that uses them sound dumber than they actually are. Whether this is true or not, the swear rate has been increasing in your newer chapters, and as a reader I'd appreciate it if you toned it down a bit.

    Plot ideas: This is a long one, so brace yourself. I do think about stories after I've read them, and how to make the plot more interesting. Feel free to use this idea however you please, or not at all, but I've found in my writing career that ideas from the public can help smooth writer's block away.

    The heroes were just in Canterlot, where the goddesses resided. We know that Celestia and Luna were both split into three fragments each. What happened to Twilight Sparkle? Perhaps, during the attack, Celestia cast a form of spell on her to keep her spirit asleep for as long as need be until someone found the shard? If not Twilight, have it be an apprentice to Luna. When they found the shard, his/her spirit was awoken and was send to aid in their quest. The spirit can generate powerful magic, but doing so shortens his/her lifespan which is only about 4-5 months already, for his/her body has already long since rotted away, they are only represented in spiritual form for a limited time. The magic they are capable of includes creating lodging and food, but other than that you can go wherever you want so long as the spirit is more powerful than anyone else in the group. This idea is yours to warp (it's your story, after all), but I'd appreciate it if you gave me a shout-out at the beginning of a chapter should you use any of these ideas.

    A reader's perspective: You can disregard everything in this section, it's just what I'm thinking of as a reader and what I'd like to happen. You do not have to pay attention to this at all when writing unless my thoughts are leading somewhere you didn't intend.

    As a reader, I'm getting awfully tired of Jigsaw & co. not getting a break. I think that they need to find a place to stay and get up to strength before they continue on.

    As a reader, I'm curious to the fact that Jigsaw has had two serious relationships with his apprentices. Just how old is he in relation to the others? How old do you have to be to be an apprentice?

    As a reader, I'm wondering how much longer it would take to get the other four fragments. Some of the community might not have that long an attention span.

    As a reader, I love the scenes between Jigsaw and Tiptoe. Not the love scenes as much as the cute scenes, the ones that warm your heart and make you love the characters even more. We need more of those.

    As a reader, Incendia is not as important a character to me as Tiptoe and Jigsaw.

    As a reader, I'm wondering if there is any way to reverse the damage done by the Grand Cataclysm, and I'm also wondering who is responsible. If there is a way to turn back time and prevent this from happening, what will happen to Jigsaw and Tiptoe?

    Final thoughts: I hope this review was helpful, and again, all problems in this story are minor. I would like to give a shout-out to whoever drew the thumbnail picture for the story, that's what really caught my eye and convinced me to enter this world. It also helps me visualize Jigsaw and Tiptoe much better, which adds a lot more to the story's experience. I would actually like visual representations of all of the characters; it would only make the story that much better.

    This story could be edited into a movie. I'm actually doing that with one of my fanfics. I am immensely impressed with the level of talent in this story, but before you get involved in any other projects, please finish this one.

    I. WANT. MOAR.

    With regards,

    Mindblower

    #28 · Chapter 20 · 92w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #29 · Chapter 2 · 92w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Is the sea serpent based off a Gyarados? I'm pretty sure it used hyperbeam. :derpyderp2:

    #30 · Chapter 20 · 92w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Today is my six-month Antipodes writing anniversary.

    Woah.

    PK
    #31 · Chapter 20 · 92w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1858

    forgot to sign in, that is me :v

    PK
    #32 · Chapter 20 · 92w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1760

    TIME TO BUCKLE DOWN AND RESPOND

    You don't have to tell me twice to read reviews. I'm always looking to improve :)

    I debated about including the swear for a long time, but ultimately it decided that it added to the scene too much to take out.

    I don't generally take large plot ideas like that. I have the general story already laid out. The only thing I take is usually locations.

    Jigsaw is three years older than Tiptoe. His relationship with Antimony started when he was still in school.

    I'm not sure how much longer it will take, but I'm not really concerned. If people have stuck with me for six months, they probably aren't about to quit. :)

    #33 · Chapter 6 · 92w, 2d ago · · ·
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    :pinkiegasp:

    Green fire + magic + Rarity drawing = SPIKE!!!!! wicked! :moustache:

    *reads on* :twilightsmile:

    #34 · Chapter 7 · 92w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Damn. Spike wrecked that place good. :moustache:

    #35 · Chapter 20 · 92w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Wow. Such a good fan fic :twilightsmile:

    Cant wait for the next update. I just want so see a little more development on Tantalus' character :moustache:

    #36 · Chapter 20 · 92w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Also, what exactly does the title mean? Lol :derpyderp2:

    #37 · Chapter 20 · 92w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1918

    It means "polar opposites"

    For example: :flutterrage: versus :pinkiehappy:

    #38 · Chapter 20 · 91w, 6d ago · · ·
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    so epic, time to "mindsplosion":rainbowderp::pinkiecrazy::derpytongue2::derpyderp2::derpyderp1::rainbowkiss:

    #39 · Chapter 21 · 91w, 5d ago · · ·
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    As always, a very good chapter, PK. I'm looking forward to more, and thanks for finally having them find food. :3

    The Incendia/Tiptoe moment was... awkward, perhaps, and I wasn't quite sure where you were headed with that, but that's my only issue and like all others it's a minor one. Update soon.

    #40 · Chapter 5 · 91w, 5d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowkiss:

    PK
    #41 · Chapter 21 · 91w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>2127 It was intended to be awkward. That was kind of the point.

    #42 · Chapter 21 · 91w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Wow. Really well written chapter :twilightsmile: keep it up, and update soon.

    #43 · Chapter 21 · 91w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Nice chapter, I enjoy reading this interesting and developed tale. :pinkiehappy:

    #44 · Chapter 21 · 91w, 3d ago · · ·
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    :twilightsmile: :pinkiehappy: Awesome story!

    PK
    #45 · Chapter 21 · 91w, 3d ago · · ·
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    LOOK AT THAT BANNER

    IT IS FUCKING GLORIOUS

    #46 · Chapter 21 · 91w, 2d ago · · ·
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    how the F*****K did you do that banner!?!?!!?

    #47 · Chapter 21 · 91w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Banner = OMG EPIC.

    Can't wait for more! :pinkiehappy:

    #48 · Chapter 21 · 90w, 4d ago · · ·
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    My God, that banner...

    #49 · Chapter 21 · 90w, 1d ago · · ·
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    very good

    #50 · Chapter 21 · 90w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Such a good story! I Just read all 21 chapters. I eagerly await more awesomeness.

    #51 · Chapter 21 · 89w, 5d ago · · ·
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    i expect this to turn into a polygyny , simply because i havent seen it happen in any fanfic yet and it can make many awkward and good moments .

    :derpytongue2:

    #52 · Chapter 21 · 89w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I require more to satisfiy my hunger.... and i destroyed you moon thats why its in chunks

    #53 · Chapter 21 · 89w, 1d ago · · ·
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    CMON!

    Do part 22! I check back here every other day.

    PK
    #54 · Chapter 21 · 89w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Sorry! I have been so insanely busy I haven't had any time to write, but I should now. :)

    #55 · Chapter 21 · 88w, 6d ago · · ·
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    -Noms on the story- fabulous work! The test to get Lunas first fragment was really well done it reminded me of something but I cant remember what. lol :twilightsmile::moustache: -teh moustache approves-

    lawl :heart:

    #56 · Chapter 21 · 87w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>3561 I love your story and want more, but man dont push to hard, you can't rush genius. I havn't been able to get back to my drawings in 2 weeks cuz of school >.< but :heart: you work man :scootangel:

    #57 · Chapter 21 · 87w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I've managed to upload 15k of pony but I can't even get 2k of Antipodes awesomeness? C'mon, PK, give a dog a bone! I can't complement your story if there's nothing more to complement! I understand if you're busy and I'll leave it at that but it's been a week or more and I'm a little cheesed off, to say the least.

    That aside, are you thinking about finishing this for the National Pony Writing Month competition? I know this is probably a long-term project, but I'd love to see this type of story get featured in a competition. Along with mine. ^.^ Yep, I'm a writer, too! Hope I can compare.

    Update soon!

    PK
    #58 · Chapter 21 · 87w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Chapter coming this weekend. Will probably be a little short, I have seriously been so busy you don't even know aaaaa!

    I feel so bad about leaving you guys hanging for so long, seriously.

    #59 · Chapter 21 · 87w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>4836 no worries PK. Good things come to those who wait, right?

    PK
    #60 · Chapter 22 · 87w, 2d ago · · ·
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    In need of an Incendia audition for the Antipodes audiobook project! Check the ponychan thread for the details: http://www.ponychan.net/chan/collab/res/16543.html

    In other news, I’m so sorry it took me this long to write the chapter. I’ve been so busy with life stuff.

    #61 · Chapter 22 · 87w, 2d ago · · ·
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    You forgot an I at the very first word :P

    ncendia must be pissed, lol :derpytongue2:

    #62 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 2d ago · · ·
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    It sounds very interesting, I'll surely read it. Its nice to take some time off of my own story. I just hope my inspirations and views of my own story don't get side tracked. :applejackunsure:

    #63 · Chapter 22 · 87w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Poor, love-starved Incendia!

    It's pretty obvious to me that a bit of envy is building up in her heart, and I wouldn't be surprised if that became a problem later on. Tiptoe and Jigsaw are still cute together, not much to say on that point but watch out for keeping this story in its designated genre, which is Adventure. You still have a lot of wiggle room, and I'm not saying there's really anything bad about this, but as a writer it's just so fun to write those scenes that...

    Y'know what? Forget it. Awesome chapter, PK, keep it up and update soon.

    #64 · Chapter 22 · 87w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Very, very nice.  I just love the characters and characterization in the story.

    #65 · Chapter 5 · 87w, 1d ago · · ·
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    And suddenly, necromorphs.

    #66 · Chapter 22 · 87w, 1d ago · · ·
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    :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

    #67 · Chapter 22 · 87w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Clopfic time?

    #68 · Chapter 20 · 87w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Nightmare Spike?

    #69 · Chapter 22 · 87w, 1d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowhuh: Creaking noises? INCENDIA COVER YOUR EARS  :twilightblush: but i do like wut u did there <3 tiptoe + jigsaw

    #70 · Chapter 22 · 87w, 13h ago · · ·
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    Too bad the update took out your banner :fluttercry: maybe you'll get another one for the new layout. Anyway, keep up the good work :pinkiehappy:

    #71 · Chapter 22 · 87w, 9h ago · · ·
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    I'm definitely putting this on my "to-read" list. Oh, and, watch out because I like to give out very lengthy reviews...but only to "Complete" stories (so perhaps you'll be immune for a while longer). In fact, come to think of it, I rarely like to start incomplete stories at all, otherwise I just end up with a big long list of cliff-hangers floating around. I might make an exception for this one, though.

    I'm assuming you've planned the whole thing out? How far into the story are you at this point?

    #72 · Chapter 22 · 87w, 7h ago · · ·
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    i look forward to what you write in the future

    PK
    #73 · Chapter 22 · 86w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>5519 Yeah, I've got it pretty much planned out.We're about maybe 55-60% done? Ish? There's a good ways yet to go.

    #74 · Chapter 22 · 86w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Someone's going to write a clopfic. I know of this.

    #75 · Chapter 22 · 86w, 20h ago · · ·
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    Incendia is hot. I like that character very much, but she wouldn't like me cause I'm a planet sized robot:fluttercry:

    #76 · Chapter 22 · 86w, 4h ago · · ·
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    Loving the story so far, on chapter 13 right now and can't wait to finish what you have so far

    #77 · Chapter 22 · 85w, 6d ago · · ·
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    God this story is good!

    #78 · Chapter 22 · 85w, 2d ago · · ·
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    This is honestly my favorite fanfiction ever. I am truly jealous of your writing abilities.

    #79 · Chapter 23 · 84w, 1d ago · · ·
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    YAY PICTURE IN CHAPTER 23!!!!!!!! UNICRON LOVES PICTURES!!!!!!!!!

    #80 · Chapter 23 · 84w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I think this is spelling mistake; "A huge flash of light and a monstrous book echoed out from under him". Is it supposed to be "boom"? Still, great story :pinkiehappy: keep it up!

    #81 · Chapter 23 · 84w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I looked at the picture, read the description, read the first chapter & for the first time in my life my breath caught oddly enough. Love the story doing a great job. :twilightsmile:

    #82 · Chapter 19 · 84w, 1d ago · · ·
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    this reminds me of nightmare moon's shenanigans from the second episode.

    #83 · Chapter 1 · 84w, 21h ago · · ·
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    AWESOME. :raritystarry:

    #84 · Chapter 23 · 83w, 6d ago · · ·
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    can this happen

    #85 · Chapter 23 · 83w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I have no idea how to to use picture urls

    #86 · Chapter 23 · 83w, 6d ago · · ·
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    like my new avatar picture? I've always wanted to see this.

    #87 · Chapter 23 · 82w, 3d ago · · ·
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    wow, this is a really amazing story you have here. i started chapter 1 about a week ago and every time i would finish a chapter i only wanted more. through this week this fanfic easily became my favorite and since all the characters here are OC's it kinda surprised me. but i really admire you being able to write a story like this with OC's because with the mane 6 they're characters we already know and love but with these there has to be actual character development, and with Jigsaw, Tiptoe, and Incendia i can say i truly love these characters. keep up the great work PK!

    #88 · Chapter 23 · 82w, 16h ago · · ·
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    The plot, setting and characters seem nice so far, but I keep getting caught up by the writing style. Repetition of words, awkward-sounding paragraphs; it's not the biggest problem in the world, but it's certainly something you should work on.

    #89 · Chapter 23 · 80w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I await PK.

    -Anonymous who offer to help.

    PK
    #90 · Chapter 23 · 80w, 4d ago · · ·
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    New chapter coming very soon! Thanks for the patience and understanding.

    #91 · Chapter 23 · 80w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>24946

    Oh YES! This has been a painful month of waiting, but after reading your comment I can sleep easily again.

    I love your work PK, you are somewhat of a celebrity (celebrony?) among me and my friends. :twilightsheepish:

    PK
    #92 · Chapter 23 · 80w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Chapter is done! Just waiting on madmax then it's gonna get posted :)

    #93 · Chapter 17 · 80w, 20h ago · · ·
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    Who's Sue? I assume that's a typo, and should be "she?"

    #94 · Chapter 23 · 80w, 19h ago · · ·
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    Me and my friend Gogeta are extreme fans of your work. I love Incendia, and Tiptoe

    #95 · Chapter 24 · 80w, 14h ago · · ·
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    :pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:

    NEWCHAPTER!!!!!!!!!

    #96 · Chapter 24 · 80w, 12h ago · · ·
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    A wild cliffhanger appears!:facehoof: Now I have to wait another three weeks for more story.

    Am I the only one thinking it's been too long? Well, probably, but I'm still glad we've finally got a new chapter. Second longest or not, I'm happy to get anything Antipodes.:twilightsmile:

    ...Though, I would suggest getting rid of that little disclaimer at the top. If you've been busy, you've been busy; there's no need to apologize for living your life.:pinkiesmile:

    #97 · Chapter 24 · 80w, 10h ago · · ·
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    what mind said RL first we can wait

    #98 · Chapter 24 · 80w, 8h ago · · ·
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    Incendia's rough day wasn't nearly as rough as I had expected. But I really enjoyed what it turned out to be. Soul searching is a very healthy sport and she did it well, given her conditions and background.

    What bugs me is that it looks like the next chapter is going to end at the same point in time… AGAIN! :twilightoops: Well played, PK, well played.

    But no matter. Nice work. Hope to see more… Stalliongradians? :moustache:

    #99 · Chapter 24 · 80w, 4h ago · · ·
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    YAY:yay: more reading of awesomeness.

    #100 · Chapter 1 · 80w, 33m ago · · 1 ·
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    "give him and assistant"

    This did not start well.

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