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Muffinmallow


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The Cutie Mark Crusaders decide they want adventuring cutie marks, but that seems more like a four pony job, so Apple Bloom went out and found a filly to go along with them. What will happen to them? Where will they go? Will they get their cutie marks? Read to find out.

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So is Scoot/Sweetie one of the ships setting sail now?? I would think Apple Bloom would understand Dinky's situation a bit more, her parents aren't am around either. But I wouldn't mind seeing Ditzy's ghost keep popping in to comfort her daughter.

4660659 Apple Bloom never really had parents to begin with (meaning they're dead,) so she wouldn't understand how it feels to lose them. The ScootaBelle ship is one sided (Scootaloo is also oblivious to any obvious hints.) And the ghost Ditzy thing, yeah that might be a thing.

4661490 Ditzy's ghost manages to break out of heaven/ the afterlife just like she breaks anything else she hits: head first and with no idea how it happened but determined to see her little Muffin.

Yay for Ghost Ditzy! Now eventually the other Crusaders besides Dinky should start seeing and hearing her since she's watching over them. And now the Dinky/Bloom and Sweetieloo ships have sailed!:twilightsmile: I can't wait to see hwo things go for our four adventurous fillies... and how frantically their friends and family try to chase them down only to constantly miss them:scootangel:

4678925 I'm actually writing a side story that has to do with the adult perspectives. The ships, yeah, friendshipping and romance shipping are present here. As for Ditzy, she'll get a happy ending, she has to!:derpytongue2:

4680482 Glad Ditzy gets a happy ending, but I can still see her showing up to give the Crusaders grownup advice when they need it.

Dinky and Scoots being cousins is a surprise, but hopefully they'll stop arguing so much now. but why didn't Ditzy adopt Scootaloo if they were related???? Letting her live alone doesn't seem in character for Ditzy. Though if she had filled out the paperwork and was waiting for approval before she died it would be a good way to show Scootaloo that somepony cared about her and was trying to help her.:twilightsmile::yay:

4756769 Ditzy's abrupt vanishings tend to cut her off during a steady conversation. That'll be answered sometime. Probably the next chapter.

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