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4830852 It's beautiful! Frozen in time!
This was really good and I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapters!
Awww no celestia to scrub her back
Minor nitpick, but it scans clunkily when you have strange repeated twice so close together.
Recognize.
You need to write four as the word.
Delectables.
Remembered.
Hung.
Nothing wrong with this. Just reminds me of that old joke about people either singing or masturbating in the shower.
"... the bang of the shower head as it hit ..."
Pretty cute story! I loved Luna's thoughts and emotions. Good job.
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No Gods or Kings. Only trains
Gotta wonder, how did they keep clean back then? No showers? Did they strut around dirty?
But anyway, a good read. Think you pretty much nailed it.
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I think sponge baths or self cleaning
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Baths. With water brought up by the servants, if one was lucky enough to own a bath or servants.
Otherwise, one would need to find stream or river. Or sponge bath.
Well, I guess it's time to update my comment, since this story is now complete. I was really looking forward to more chapters when it wasn't complete, I wanted to see what Luna would continue to discover while she is adjusting to modern life, like maybe finding out what a dildo is, or maybe even discovering pornographic films and stuff like that. This really could've gone so much further than just a shower. But it's up to you, I still really enjoyed reading it, and I hope you didn't take this comment negatively.
4833327 If you had servants
4833160 If you had a sponge or a rag
4833147 Yeah, pretty much.
Who knew shower time could be so much fun for Luna? I really enjoyed this one-shot. Hopefully in the sequel, Celestia and Luna will get into a sexy bubble bath time!
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Yeah, sorry. The "incomplete" was a mistake on my part. I didn't have any plans to add anything to the story based on how much one could write about masturbation in each chapter before each chapter starts to read the same...
4877754 That's true. But like I said, I still really enjoyed it!
Great story! But the visualization kinda sucks
So, is she in a bathroom that's like, the entire room is the shower? Or is she in the tiny shower space that some people have? I know she's not in a bathtub.
If I had servants, I wouldn't need to masturbate.
........Oh goddammit. This is your fault. You can't just show me something like this and expect me to walk away.
4877754 An interesting story, short and sweet. But I can't help but wonder if she wasn't being watched by a random draconequus or Princess, perchance?
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Discord would still be stuck in stone at this point, so no for him.
5024258 Celestia would be most likely^^ She just returned so Discord is still trapped in stone remember?^^ Also, I get the feeling that Celestia knew this would happen and took her to the shower room instead of a bath because of it^^
his banana shoots straight out, it's hood flailing open than going limp and spraying like unmanned firehose.
"Not again"
Walks out his, snake still spraying.
Diablo corps10 stays and shouts to Luna
"Don't stop!"
Warning: incoming head cannon!
As Luna was walking out of the bathroom, she was then shocked to see Celestia right outside the door. "Oh, hello sister", Luna said, forcing herself to make eye contact, and act normal, stoic expression and all. This quickly became difficult when Celestia give her a smug smile, the same smile she always had when she knew too much. Oh, boy.
"It sounded like you figured out how to enjoy yourself even faster than I thought you would. I would have thought that you wouldn't realized you could pleasing yourself for at least a few more showers", she says, her smile somehow becoming even more smug. "I guess you just couldn't wait, could you?"
Luna can't help but facehoof. Celestia shook her head. "Tsk tsk tsk. You really shouldn't put your hoof near your face, considering where it probably was just now." She always did have a way of adding that one thing to make your shame complete, Luna thought to herself.
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What the fuck, man...
Here is a reading
Nice shower time =3
Oh my luna what a show