Looking good so far. Make rainbow dash die a bad death.

>>440650440650 ur mean

>>440659440659

I'm not the one who orphaned Applebloom.

Also not the one who made Rainbow dash deserve a horrible, gruesome, painful, tororous death.

What the hay...? Tracking!

This somehow reminds me of HL² City 17....

Moar please

More. Now. I loved the prequel to this, but now I need more. Quickly. Or I'll die of deponyzation.

Rocket to Insanity: Dawn of a Dying Madcunt

Save Rainbow Dash from her pain.... through death.

Rocket to Insanity: Dawn of a dying Madcunt

Okay,even though everybody else is saying that they want Dash to die, I think that she should actually live....just saying, having her be dead won't fix any of the ponies problems, but having her alive will!

Tracking dude

IT'S FINALLY UP!

Oh god this is good, more! Beautifully written and interesting plot line

Give it a sad and dark ending, but I wouldn't like it if it was completely sad and dark. I think it should be bittersweet.

Tracking this!   Twilight, you must save Rainbow Dash!  

if your gonna kill of dashie, let her kill herself, she deservs better than prison, or being killed. leave my poor dashie alone

I think u guys should check out my secondary story. It's based on this, and I got neighbors consent to write it. So far, I think it has been a successful endeavor, and I think you guys might like it.

I'm so, so sorry...but I can't help my inner grammar nazi from showing itself.

"Your welcome, Twilight."

Now, I know that you didnt edit this, but my inner grammar nazi/troll got out. I call him grammar troll. He isn't nice in the least. Sorry, again.

Either way, this is a piece of art. I love the storyline, and that's what's important. Great work, neighbor.

Awesome! I really liked the ending to this chapter too!

You have my applause! *clap clap clap*

That was awesome. It deserves a

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Woo-hoo first

Great so far

Wow

This just went beyond of just being insane

wonder how twilight is going to help RD

I might be a good editor...I work from my iPad, so I have spell check on my side.

Oh, nice work on the new chapter! I'm enveloped in mystery! The chapter is too, but me, mostly. It's so mysterious that It's enveloping me as well. Awesome job, neighbor!

Oh, nice avatar, by the way. That custom?

>>449681449681 1. Dont worry, the editing side of things is sorted. 2. Yes, the logo is custom. I made it using photoshop.

Well, it's pretty cool! Nice work on all that, guvnor!

All though, it's probably best that I'm not an editor...I also have shoddy Apple Internet conection on my side, next to auto correct. You know, once I was writing in my notes, and I put down Rainbow Dash, but I forgot the space in between. So I went on before I could fix it, and it replaced it with samaflange. I don't even know what the heck that is! And now, when I type that word down, it tells me it's wrong and that there aren't even any replacements for it. I swear, Apple hates me.

Ok, I looked it up. Its apparently spelled "samoflange". It's a Thundercats reference. Apparently the crew at apple likes to mess with people's heads using Thundercats references. A sad, sad day for technology...

Give Rainbow a death as painful stabbed by 1000 red hot needles.

>>452708452708 I second that.

my god this story is juicy! i need moar!

More

Sergeant Rainbow 'Technicolor' Dash. Reporting from front lines: Cobblesdale. Message forwarded by comms expert Aringsor Greatbow. During R&R time.

"What. The. Bloody. 'Ell? First o' all, Fluttershy died at the battle of Lopenhagen. She was a medic. Second of all, she was an A.C.R. Medic. I worked with her. Is this, like, some kind o' alternate reality? And if I were to murder someone, I wouldn't use wolves. I would use wasps, then wolves. The wasps clean the carcass, the wolves get rid of the bones. Simple. Fluttershy was my best friend. I would never do that...the bunny, well, that's a harder question.

End message.

Neighbor, that was awesome. I'm surprised that Rainbow wasn't using any kind of weapon. Not criticizing, though. The wolf pack was a good idea. Pretty cool.

>>452906452906 I third that

>>453895453895 I fourth, fifth, and sixth that

Sergeant Rainbow 'Technicolor' Dash. Front lines:Cobblesdale. During R&R time. Forwarded by communications expert Aringsor Greatbow.

I still don't understand this. Man, you guys must REALLY hate me. Amazing story, though. A little disturbing...

>>452708452708 technically, she already has been. Or at least, burnt by a barn.

Oh the irony!

Ive been waiting so long for a fic where fluttershy is killed. THANK YOU, KIND SIR.

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oh shit son this keeps geting better and better cant wait for the next one keep up the good work

give the monster a fate worse than cupcakes.

oooo man

when twilight gets here

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Rarity...Rariteeee!? HAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!! She had it COMING!!! Heheheh...hehehehe...!

>>461479461479

My thoughts exactly

Oh no, rarity is dead....................eh i dont care

NOOOO!!! RAINBOW!!!    Twilight, you must hurry!  

  N-n-n-n-ooooo!  Not Fluttershy, please live! Twilight,  If your crazy scheme works, do it quickly so we can get the real Rainbow Dash back!  

Guess you can say:

Rarity's death...Wasn't a pretty sight.

or

Diamonds AREN'T a girl's best friend.

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Oh no. TWILIGHT RUN!!!! Oh, wait, she already tried that.

Hmmm.....i should draw a picture of what RD looks with all her injuries

>>465529465529 That would be imteresting.

Twi? ... I'm gonna buck rainbow dash up!!!!!

well she's fucked, i can't wait for the end nice work

Change the cover pic of how Rainbow bitch looks right now!

In the words of Spike from Shed.MOV

'Welp, we're fucked.'

>>465529465529  I dunno.  I mean I would like to see a picture of her, but if Amnesia taught me anything, it's that a monster (in this case Rainbow Dash) stays scary the less you see of it.  Just putting down my thoughts

>>465760465760 you do have a point but I'll do it anyways

>>465551465551 or how about a picture of good RD fighting the insane RD as your cover art

>>464538464538>>464538464538 hehe...hehehahe....hehahahahahahahahaha...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA....hahahahe.....hehhe....hmmm......no

>>465810465810 Go nuts!

>>465810465810  I like that idea for the cover art!  

>>466345466345 thanks...................................................................im hungry, I'll order some pizza and wait for reply on how to take over the grand canyon from the flying rabbits

Just one thing to say...

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As for the story...it's driving me insane. And I LIKE it!!! Hehehehehe...I'm looking forward to what happens. Death! More and more and more DEATH!!!!! This is amazing! Sooooo, amazingly, amazing! Ha!hahahah...heheheeeee! Ask anyone at my school. They'll tell you I snapped a few years ago. I honestly want to see what would happen when Twilight has her neck snapped. I'm looking forward to it. Or, at the very least, an alternate ending like that. Heh...

As rainbow dash being my favorite I hope she kills twilight its cruel but poor Rd what she has gone through on the other fanfics some justice need to be served and as always nice chapter I'm dying waiting for the end keep up the good work

Oh shit!

A very pissed off, magic induced Twilight vs Insane, blood-thirsty Rainbow Dash

LET THE BATTLE BEGIN!!!!!!!!!

>>468613468613 Rainbow is my favorite pony too.

My favorite pony is Big Mac. I hope twilight avenges the death if the apple family! Well, Applejack and Big Mac. And that taco.

DEATH TO RAINBOW DASH!!!!!!!

Just wondering, why didn't Fluttershy use "The Stare" on those wolves? Did she panic?

>>455392455392 I twenty-fourth that.

>>468730468730 In the condition she was in, I doubt that she'd be able to do the stare.

>>468787468787 That IS a good point.

I LOVE IT NEED MORE RAAA-

Well, this was good. Love it and i pray for more!

This is Rainbow Dash

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ooooohhhhhhh.....shit raiboowww dasshhh is going to geeeeet iiiit

>>468891468891 lets be friends

Hehehe...cant wait for more

  No Twilight!  Don't kill her, stick to the original plan!  You can at least try to save one of your friends!  

Twilight!  Whatever you're going to do, do it now!  Please save Rainbow!  

wow this is getting so good will twilight live or die

>>469582469582 Find out. In the next hour. DUH DUH DUUUUUUUUUUUUUH!!

>>469634469634 f*** yeah!

wow shit is it the end? it was sooo good she saved dash but i cant stand seeing rainbow blind lets hope twi can fix her eyes as well cool fic still a part of me wanted to see all dead but shes fine now i loved this stroy so much

.....................................SweET

>>469900469900 Who said it was over?

>>469964469964 just asking bro

Why is rainbow not torn in half?

make her die.

YES!!    TWILIGHT SAVED RAINBOW!!    At least now I can calm my nerves for a while, but they still have to find that wretched villain who started this whole thing!    Can't wait for more!  

Heeeeheheheee!!! Here come the neighbors!!! Hahahahahaaaaheeheheeeee!!! Oh your time will come, Twilight! It. Will. Come!!! But not today. Today is your day. But tomorrow is still a question. Wait. That is all there Is to do. Simply wait. HAHAHAHAHEEEE!!! Heh.

Supbrony...heh...giggle at the ghosties, giggle at the ghosties...oh, there will be a reckoning. But not for Rainbow Dash. Why. That is the question. Why did whoever poisoned Rainbow do it? Why didn't it do it's job? Why was she able to fend it off long enough for Twilight to help her? But why did they do it? There is something to be settled between our mystery antagonist and Twilight. I am sure of that. And there will be a reckoning. Heheee!

rainbow oh god D:

meh not really how I wanted that to turn out.

for some reason i dont see princess celestia acting that brashly, shes over 1000 years old surley she has enough sense to listen

why did twilight have to get hurt?

No RAINBOW!...................can't wait for more.................cyber CupCAKeS anyone

So Spike is still alive.

Interesting

Speaketh ye foul being! SPEAKETH!!!

Dr mm, Celestia, see. So this, and this happe...

I don't want to hear your EXCUSES!!! Who said you could TALK!!!?

But you asked me to...

I did no such thing!!! You will die now.