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dramatic_spoon


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The Long Awaited continuations/prequels to Help Yourself, It's Not Unusual, and Resurrection Beat.

After another long night of drinking with each other, Time Turner and Rainbow Dash are forced to face something that's been on their minds for the longest time:

Are they just friends?
Or is there something about the other that makes them want to give a little love?

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 49 )

Excellent, the turnerdash cometh :yay: can't wait :pinkiehappy:

I really hope this will be handled as realistically as possible, with all the awkwardness that ensues

That's not love. You've still got some gas buildup from all that booze last night.

This seems interesting. I have to see what the other stories say. Great job with this one.

Blooming heck, I don't normally do this (as in comment on stories) but dammit, this is worth it; Love the story, the pairing (Turnerdash, yay!), and everything you wrote really.

Once again you do not disappoint, high expectation met, nice chapter mate :twilightsmile:

Time Turned stumbled

*Turner :twilightsheepish: (At first when I read 'time turned' I thought it was a pun :rainbowlaugh:)

I consider Shy and Pinkie to be my best friends

I understand Fluttershy, but Pinkie? I thought it would've been AJ, but I guess it's up to writer, and it works for the joke of Pinkie's idea of romance :rainbowlaugh:

When I first read there was a character called 'Raven', I just thought of a ponyfied version of Raven from Teen Titans, kinda funny considering she shares a voice actress with Twilight :twilightsmile:

Also, love the Derpy/Time Turner joke at the end :ajsmug:

Nice chapter. I'm glad this story is spaced out. Good luck with the next one. I love your stories.

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From my standpoint, Dash and Applejack's relationship is a bit more of the competitive, I can do better type.

That, and I consistently prefer to portray Applejack as uninterested in romance, so Dash wouldn't go to her for help.

4702274 I agree that Rainbow wouldn't go to Applejack for romantic advice, I think Rarity was really the best choice in that regard, but I still think RD would consider AJ a closer friend than PP. While I think their friendship does have a lot of 'I can do better', there's still a lot more there than her friendship with Pinkie

“Apparently Thunderlane is into Pastel Sweet Lolita.”

Yeah... I didn't need to know that, either. :derpytongue2:

Great. Now I have a mental image of Thunderlane dressing Bulk Biceps up as a loli. Thank you very much, dramatic_spoon. :pinkiecrazy:

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How did Bulk get dragged into this?

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Somehow my train of thought derailed and went from Flitter to Bulk. It was not a pretty sight.

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This sounds like the plot to a really weird one-shot.

There hasn't even been any romance yet and I'm squealing in delight and anticipation.

That cliff hanger though.

Hi Rainbow Dash. Mind if I borrow a bit of your... Time? :derpytongue2:

Nice chapter. I can't wait for the next one. Good luck. This is getting good.

Ditzy was suppose to be a bit more trolly, with most of her dialogue dancing around and hinting that she knew the truth, but it felt a bit too out of character.
Which then shortened the chapter tremendously.

There's also a dirty reference in it, but I'm not going to tell you what it is until the next chapter.
Unless you figure it out before then.

Nice chapter. I think it was funny with Derpy giving her blessing to Dash. Good luck writing the next chapter.

Ravioli castrato is not a real dish.
Castrato is what they called the Castrated male vocalist back in the early 18th century.

Anyway, Here we are.
Almost at the end.

The startled stallion spun around: Dash crawled through the window, landing on the ground in a crumpled heap.

I don't think she land like that. She be more like a cat.

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Castrato is what they called the Castrated male vocalist back in the early 18th century.

WTF?! :fluttercry::raritydespair::pinkiesick:

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Flying yes, crawling through a window while trying not to make too much noise...not so much.

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It was done so that the singers would keep their prepubescent vocal range.
For the lack of a better Term, they were the equivalent to rock stars during the time period.

5106206 Yea but rock stars have lots of sex so no they were not like rock stars

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Some were rumored to have relationships with noble women, despite the lack of equipment, and how underdeveloped it was.

You don't need sex when you have the support of the Pope, Napoleon and all the Royalty of Europe.

Nice chapter. I like the basic ask out the guy idea. I find that is the easiest thing to do. I'm glad about this update. Thanks.

Ahh, so they've been drinking the money.
Been there before.

And it's over, finished.

Time for part 2:
The Ballad of Time Turner and Rainbow Dash: Love is On our side...

It's a working title.
still taking suggestions for it.

5255727 This was awesome. Also I have a funny name you could use:

The Ballad of Time Turner and Rainbow Dash: Romance Novels Can Suck It

This was an awesome story. I loved it. Rarity's and Dity's roles were awesome. I can't wait for any future stories from you. Thanks for writing this. It brightened my day at times.

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Might use it for part 3.

Part 2 is more about the future in laws meeting.

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The Ballad of Time Turner and Rainbow Dash: Gonna Need More Liquor

“Yeah. I mean, I know Pinkie isn’t as dumb as folks think she is, but her idea of romance is…”

“Skewered?” Rarity interjected as she finished her stitch, “There, that should do it.”

I think you meant "skewed."

Though, with Pinkie I guess you never know. :applejackconfused:

this was seriously adorable

Your pleasant commentary and review is here!

Thanks for submitting, dramatic_spoon!

“I think I’m in love with Time Turner.”

And...cue music!

it's Doctor Whooves, not Time Turner. No offense, though. The story is great, the name is the only thing that bothers me.

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No it's not.

"Doctor Whooves" is the name that would be used if this was all about Rainbow Dash going on adventures through time and space with The Doctor.

"Time Turner" is the Mayor's assistant, and a regular old pony.

Given that fandom's preference for portraying him as the Doctor-as-a-pony, I use Time Turner to differentiate the two interpretations.

Dash paused, uncertain how to start her sentence.

“I think I’m in love with Time Turner.”

"Aand, cue the ominous music"

'I'll see myself out, trust me that hurt to type given how the guy is now. Still can't wait till i can mount that peacock's head on his precious throne.'

“Do I still smell like booze?” Time Turner looked at the pegasus, “I didn’t get a chance to shower.”

“A little,” Ditzy giggled, “Spent another night out drinking with Dash?”

“Yeah. You know she thinks we’re dating.”

Ditzy stopped for a moment, taking the information in. A smile crept onto her face before the mare burst out laughing.

“That’s a good one.”

I might be reading into this too much, but-and i quote with Sniper's Australian Accent that i'll never get just right-'Crikey'

Ditsy is a smart one...

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