Pretty good

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this is great! wish there were more, though.

One nitpick... I really can't believe that Big Mac wouldn't have heard of Sugarcube Corner before or that he would never had met Pinkie, Ponyville isn't a large town to begin with and Big Mac isn't a newcomer to town. Other than that... you got a foundation of a shipfic, for a ship that needs some more fics done for it.

In the Name of Her Serene Majesty Celestia Everfree,

Celestia's Paladin: For Honor and Duty, For the Sun and Moon

I've noticed a pick up in Pinkintosh shipping and I'm all for it. Fluttermac and Twimac have been done to death, plus the whole opposites attract thing.

>>536410536410

I wouldn't say that TwiMac as been done to death, since it is very much overshadowed by FlutterMac. But seeing one of the other parings done well is always enjoyable.

PinkiMac. Its true.

Complete? This looks more like a start.

One day, in the quaint town of 'Ponyvillie'.

The end.

A lot of unneeded text takes from the story, very uneventful too.

YOU WILL ADD MOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!

not bad, i wish this wasn't complete and you could make another chapter though.

well done

i'll admit it out of these little pairings involving BM, i believe PinkieTosh to be most likely. i liked this good job. i even once read a story on them already going out but i can't remember what it was called.

Wait...that's it?

It's good. Real good. But it's complete already!?

Gotta admit, kinda boring.  Nothing really happened and nothing was resolved.  It really feels like a start to a story than a stand-alone.  Without Big Mac finding out about Pinkie's crush there's no conflict.  But the writing's coherent and the idea is not an out-of-left-field kind of plot, so it's good there.

Hahahaha Big Mac a fillies colt epicness so BRING ON SOME MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!

I agree with the some moments. MOAR

I admit that I liked the sheer simplicity of this story. While it's a stretch to say that Big Mac never went to Sugar Cube Corner or met Pinkie Pie, this is not my story and it makes yours what it is. It felt cute, not overdone, and makes the readers want more because of how abruptly it comes to an end...I like it.

Hello everyone I have gone back and revised some things in the story and I am now waiting for comments on how to expand this story, if you have any ideas please let me know, there are no wrong answers.

Hey everyone here's part 2 of the revised edition of the story for your viewing pleasure.

sweet

>>10377501037750 alright message me if you need any help

I like how this sounds so far keep it up

Well here it is, for your viewing pleasure I present to you "Big Macintosh's Day Off Part 3"

Thank you all for sending in your ideas even if I didn't get as many as I would have liked, I hope this was worth the wait.

Lastly see if you can spot the reference I slipped into this part, I hinted at in my one of my earlier blogs.

"A peck on the check"?

>>14489291448929 Will fix that, thanks for pointing it out.

I loved this fic.

The end was a little too....well...sudden.

But I really enjoyed it.

>>17566661756666 Did you spot the reference?

>>17569531756953

Reference? What reference?

>>17569701756970 Never mind I thought I made it obvious.

Quick little note here, for all of you who saw "Sleepless in Ponyvillie" you will know that Scootaloo lost her scooter in that episode.

Since she has it in this fanfic just in case you might be wondering this fic takes place BEFORE the events of that episode.

The scooter itself is not enough to warrant an alternative universe tag.