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Brosparkles


A bro, who sparkles.

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The Cutie Mark Crusaders are well past their normal time to get a cutie mark, and it's about time they realized their potential. Even if they don't want to.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 30 )

MmmmmmmMMMMMOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA----- I give up.

4688526 Um, thanks, maybe? Not entirely sure what you're tying to say, but thanks nonetheless. :twilightblush:

4688571 Oh, well, hopefully there'll be more! I don't have any real schedule, and I might be decently busy coming up, but I'll try to keep it up whenever I can!:pinkiesmile:

It's ok, I'm not sure how to interpret the first comment either.

Heh, isn't Scoots the one with the accounting dreams?
Maaaannn, she is gonna be SO PISSED!!!!!

Unless, of course, she manages to fly through statements and crunch numbers faster than any other mare in Equestria.
/cringe comment

Well. This is incredibly depressing. I think I'd kill myself than go through Cutie Mark Mind Control. C'mon fillies, it's time to rage against the machine!

4688542 I was trying to do the excited viewers slightly stereotypical long scream of "more", but, in lieu of the half-invested mark thing, gave up half way through.

I've changed the tags from slice of life to adventure, because where I feel the fic is going is no longer slive-of-life-y like the first chapter was. (And even then the first chapter barely qualified.) Also, the new chapter (The second one, for anyone viewing this in the future) will be up later today, once I wake up most likely. I don't want to update this late at night and have it be missed, so I'll just do it tomorrow. In general expect chapters ranging from 2000-3000 words, but no promises, along with a release schedule, they get released whenever I write them.

4690355 I guess you could say you only got a half mark in cheering. :trollestia:

Well, hello there Mr. Gaunt. Fancy meeting you in these parts.

4692819 There's a reason for him seeming so weak and frail.

4692859

I'm sure. He just reminds me of Leeland Gaunt from Needful Things.

4692882 Hmm, never heard of the character. I just figured it was a way to refer to him, seeing as he's very weak and frail. (Yes, I did have to look up the word gaunt.)

4692893

Ah, I see.

If you care: Leeland Gaunt was a demon of sorts. He'd get you that thing you want so much that you Need it, whether it was a rare baseball card or something far more exotic in exchange for.. considerations. This new guy just struck me as Pony Gaunt.

4692916 Interesting. I won't confirm or deny that for now, to leave it up to the later chapters. (Also because I don't even know what's gonna happen, I just write it as I go.)

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So, those uncontrollable urges are implanted by Luna?

Y, Luna, WWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?!?!?!?!!?!??!!?!??!!!

Wow... this is incredibly boring :rainbowderp:

4699544 Okay then, sorry you feel that way I guess. :applejackunsure:

Please tell me something horrible happens to this Luna.

Sun dew... a small glob... oh god that's not flower juice :twilightoops:

:applecry:

:trollestia:

So while looking at a map of Equestria (The canon one) I realized that if Equestria is based on the U.S geographically, that the crystal empire is just Canada.

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So does make them better or worse than Equestria? Btw will we be seeing apple bloom again?

Sorry for the continually shortening chapters, the next one will be a bit longer I hope. It was just a good place to end that one.

I bet it is a rescue beacon that activates when destroyed

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