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I’m a Brony since the late of April 2013. I love Starlight Glimmer, Twilight Sparkle, Flitter, Cayenne, and Moonlight Raven. I love metal music and getting along with others.

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On one Peaceful day at Canterlot, one of Princess Luna's Royal Guards has a plan to make them laugh and to enjoy. He done it before and knew that they haven't tried it before. So this is a story of about Golden Star, an autistic Royal Guard of Princess Luna, plans to make his superiors to laugh about and remember how funny they could inhale gas called helium to do funny and ridiculous voice sounds.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 3 )

Grammar: eenope
Main idea: silly and potentially enjoyable:pinkiesmile:
Writing: bad pacing and lack of explanations
Characters: OC out of nowhere, poor dialogue for reflecting personalities

Verdict: Ask Twilight Sparkle to assist with a rewrite

Fart humor is never funny

where exactly does equestria GET helium

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