I don't know where the fuck this is going, and I'm not going to make guesses at where the fuck this is going. I just know I'm along for the ride.
As for that 'static', that's from something I know it. I can't quite place where, be it movie or video game, but that memory-static combo has been used in a different medium for sure. Can you tell me if you happen to know?
5296587 There's weird and disturbing explicit sex in one of the early chapters and then things get worse. I'd have had no problem reading it when I was under 18, but your mileage may vary.
As a matter of legal issues, I'm sure Regidar and everyone else on this site suggests you do not read it. If you do, you do so assuming all responsibility. In the future, try not to clue people in on your age. D:
5297352 Wasn't planning on reading it unless there was anything like the sex in some part of it, i was informed that there was by 5297121. I don't get why people like the sex scenes in stories that much either, IRL, totally different story, in MLP? I don't even know .-..
5298496 ?? This is a story about a guy who has descended into insanity to the point where he's in love with a mop. I'm serious, the sex scenes in this story are not about getting the reader hot, they're about demonstrating the character's insanity. They are not the kind of thing that's going to get the majority of people hot and bothered.
5298501 5297352 5296587 I was actually a bit reserved about adding in this scene here, even in a work as dark as this. I don't know if I can ever properly convey this type of action properly without making it seem just like a point of drama. So I dunno, I gotta tread lightly.
5300340 You realize, lets say some random internet police person (i don't know the actual name) finds out your 16 and that you've written that, the site would be taken down, even though i don't give an honest shit, still, just don't, idk why, come up with something easier to understand and more convincing and i may do it.
lets say some random internet police person (i don't know the actual name) finds out your 16 and that you've written that, the site would be taken down,
that's uh that's not how it works at all
anyway, your reading of this story doesn't really matter to me that much It's up to you whether or not you want to do it
5300681 >In a livestream >Guy is drawing art >He says how he used to read fan fics >He has a good voice, and people are asking for him to read this >I link him the story and tell him to read chapter 3 >I'm now banned from the stream and people are dying of laughter and he gets jelly of me flirting with his GF, even though his gif calls herself "the flirty type" and tells me to call her "your Bubblegum Bitch" >I walk away with so much swag and euphoria eminating off of me i could have been considered a god.
5300340 16? I am impressed. My writing when I was 16 was utter shit. (I could capitalize, spell, punctuate and comprehended the hard return and the concept of the paragraph changing when the speaker does, so I guess it wasn't utter shit, just very very shitty.)
5302527 One could argue that my writing is still very poor. It's just that, for some reason, people rarely do. My writing has gotten far better than it was back when I started posting on this site at 14, though.
I don't know where the fuck this is going, and I'm not going to make guesses at where the fuck this is going.
I just know I'm along for the ride.
As for that 'static', that's from something I know it. I can't quite place where, be it movie or video game, but that memory-static combo has been used in a different medium for sure. Can you tell me if you happen to know?
5295942
I do not
One; yay, it's back! And two.... What just happened?!
5295952 Y this story flagged adult? Doesn't look so bad on the description.
Aaaand we've reached the worst part. This is not looking good at all for either of them.
5296147 I'd suggest you read and find out
5296573 Well i'm not 18, still think i should read?
5295942
I thought that was a Slenderman thing or something.
5296587
There's weird and disturbing explicit sex in one of the early chapters and then things get worse. I'd have had no problem reading it when I was under 18, but your mileage may vary.
5296587
As a matter of legal issues, I'm sure Regidar and everyone else on this site suggests you do not read it. If you do, you do so assuming all responsibility. In the future, try not to clue people in on your age. D:
5297352 Wasn't planning on reading it unless there was anything like the sex in some part of it, i was informed that there was by 5297121. I don't get why people like the sex scenes in stories that much either, IRL, totally different story, in MLP? I don't even know .-..
5297975
Oh, believe me, the sex scenes in this story aren't there because anyone is going to like them. :-)
5298479 Fuck you.
5298496
?? This is a story about a guy who has descended into insanity to the point where he's in love with a mop. I'm serious, the sex scenes in this story are not about getting the reader hot, they're about demonstrating the character's insanity. They are not the kind of thing that's going to get the majority of people hot and bothered.
5298501 Wow, i just sent someone a "Fuck you" when i meant to send that in skype >.< soz, i didn't even see what u said until now xD.
5298501
5297352
5296587 I was actually a bit reserved about adding in this scene here, even in a work as dark as this. I don't know if I can ever properly convey this type of action properly without making it seem just like a point of drama. So I dunno, I gotta tread lightly.
But certainly, this is not for pleasure.
5299059 I'm going to be stupid and ask why the scene was as disturbing as it was.
5299677 you could always
you know
read it for yourself
5300154 I'm not looking to piss off the admins tho, nor do i really wanna be mentally disturbed, even though i already am.
5300318 listen, buddy
I'm 16
I've written 44 mature stories
the mods don't care about your age and the stories you read
5300340 You realize, lets say some random internet police person (i don't know the actual name) finds out your 16 and that you've written that, the site would be taken down, even though i don't give an honest shit, still, just don't, idk why, come up with something easier to understand and more convincing and i may do it.
5300395
that's uh
that's not how it works at all
anyway, your reading of this story doesn't really matter to me that much
It's up to you whether or not you want to do it
5300681
pls continue pumping this guy for lels
Also, 11 years is way less than I expected.
5300681
>In a livestream
>Guy is drawing art
>He says how he used to read fan fics
>He has a good voice, and people are asking for him to read this
>I link him the story and tell him to read chapter 3
>I'm now banned from the stream and people are dying of laughter and he gets jelly of me flirting with his GF, even though his gif calls herself "the flirty type" and tells me to call her "your Bubblegum Bitch"
>I walk away with so much swag and euphoria eminating off of me i could have been considered a god.
5300340
16? I am impressed. My writing when I was 16 was utter shit. (I could capitalize, spell, punctuate and comprehended the hard return and the concept of the paragraph changing when the speaker does, so I guess it wasn't utter shit, just very very shitty.)
5302259
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5302527 One could argue that my writing is still very poor. It's just that, for some reason, people rarely do.
My writing has gotten far better than it was back when I started posting on this site at 14, though.