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Tofazz


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This story is a sequel to Coming Home


Saif Tham often travels to Canterlot. Sometimes it’s to run errands for his brother and family, sometimes it’s a vacation.
Whichever the reason, he always visits somepony dear to him.

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Comments ( 12 )

D'awww...adorable pony cuddles.:rainbowkiss:

Yusss so cute!!:rainbowkiss::twilightsmile:

Great read.. keep it up

Wow. :rainbowderp: Just wow. (I love it! :rainbowkiss:)

4692844 Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :twilightsmile:

So romantic.:raritydespair:
A realy good little story.

Oh wow, Saif really loves Trixie... A lot.
Loving this story. :raritycry:

Does Saif realize his lover is the same mare his mistress spent a night with? Reasonably if he was at the wedding he would have recognized the lock of blue in her hair would he not?

It is the mother of all coincidences that his lover slept with his sister-in-law. Could be hilarious or tragic if and when everyone realises, depending on how you make the revelation known and how you make the characters react.

Lovely little one-shot expanding on both what we knew about Saif alone, as well as him and Trixie from A Faded Touch of Blue. I have to say that the level of affection she showed for him here makes me wonder if she was mad at him during the Gala or something? She just seemed like a completely different pony here, but don't get me wrong, not in a way that felt inconsistent with her character, it just leaves me asking plenty of questions about those two and just what exactly they feel for each other. Wonderful work as alway, Tofazz! :rainbowkiss:

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