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Takes place during Hurricane Fluttershy: Fluttershy is frightened at the prospect of everybody laughing at her. As she weeps away from the other ponies, one mare on a walk finds her and tries to cheer her up and give her the support she needs.
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You know what I see when I see that cute little Manaphy icon?
I see promise.
Keep doing what you're doing.
I'm glancing over this story one more time as I write this and I can't find anything wrong with it that isn't a nitpick. I also like that it was just slice of life and didn't ship them. Come to think of it, FlutterFire sounds cool...
ANYWAYS!
Pretty good, the ignoring the tryout episode, always thought that Spitfire was a good pony. Honestly I was thinking that this would have been sibling FlutterFire to borrow 4538455 name for the ship. Very well done
short and sweet, i liked it.
Who's been hating on your fic? More importantly, why?
Came here from the group thread, don't get discouraged, you're a damn good writer.
I'm faving this, and I'm checking out your other one. Keep writing.
Good writing, but, personally, I felt the story plot left a bit to be desired. It lacked a certain je ne sais quoi.
I love it. Poor Fluttershy and all the bullying. I like how Spitfire promises to help.