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W1kk3d_Mango 276

Joined March 2012
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    W1kk3d_Mango's Stories (2)

    • Virgin in the Night
      Luna recognizes a small pony, and decides to take her out on a small adventure. The two soon find love and Fluttershy's wounded heart is hea

      3,154 words · 892 views · 29 likes · 3 dislikes
    • Mystery Mash Up
      Doctor Whooves, Derpy, Daring Do, in a Sherlock Holmes style mystery!
      7,694 words · 617 views · 18 likes · 2 dislikes

    Luna recognizes is wallowing in the night by herself feeling lonely, when she decides to head off looking for somepony who is awake and to spend time with. She happens across a shy pony at her farm house and asks her to accompany her on a small "adventure" with her.

    First Published
    7th Apr 2012
    Last Modified
    8th Apr 2012

    Comments ( 12 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 62w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I just want to reiterate what was in my blog post. This isn't my usual M.O. so if it's terrable i'm sorry, but I really hope everypony likes it :raritystarry:

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 62w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Here I am, reading these, and I'm asexual. (As far as I know, anyways.) Whyyyyy?

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 62w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Short, but very sweet. Some spelling errors, but we all have those. I quite enjoyed it.

    The story is marked 'Incomplete'. Does that mean there will be more?

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 62w, 4d ago · · ·
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    So..more?

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 62w, 4d ago · · ·
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    FlutterMoon is best ship

    #6 · Chapter 2 · 62w, 3d ago · · ·
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    "Virgin in the Night"

    (ಠ_ಠ) Subtle.

    #7 · Chapter 2 · 62w, 3d ago · · ·
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    "Luna's soft gave looking deep into her soul." I think you mean gaze, and having "Luna's deep blue eyes were seeing into her" right after it seems somewhat redundant. :moustache:

    #8 · Chapter 2 · 62w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>424495 Thanks lol :derpyderp2: good feedback! I'll adjust that.

    #9 · Chapter 2 · 62w, 3d ago · · ·
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    :trollestia: Lol molestia would love this, yes?

    #10 · Chapter 2 · 62w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Wow, I didn't think Fluttershy would have it in her.

    #11 · Chapter 2 · 57w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>428345

    It's always the quiet ones...

    #12 · Chapter 2 · 10w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Why does this have a teen tag? :rainbowhuh:

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