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Needs moar drunks.
I'm aware it was coincidence + commissions, but somebody had to say it.
So thanks for that.
Wow, nice one.
So that was... Something. Cannibalism? I think that's the word.
4509215 Nope....just a mare eating a doughnut.
4509270 um, but... Its alive, aware, is able to think for itself, it can move and it has the ability to communicate! is that not cannibalism?
4509288 It's not a pony, It's a living doughnut that looks like a pony.
I would tag this teen, I think. There really is not to much sexual content in it.
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Perhaps, but I would hazard a guess that the site moderators wouldn't appreciate lines such as:
in a Teen rated story.
4510365 good point...
4510365 I APPROVE!!
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Hmm... I don't usually like micro vore, but this is pretty good!
4509288 It would also feel wrong to me if my doughnut was cute, cuddly, and didn't wan't to get eaten....
4511280 Good I'm not the only one who thinks that eating other intelligent species is wrong.
4509345 Then by that logic eating zebras is perfectly fine.
Interesting I liked it
4512279 Never said eating intelligent things was wrong, look at the definition of cannibalism.
4512719 Yes I am aware that cannibalism refers to the consumption of ones own species. But how am I to judge that something that is recognized as intelligent isn't the same as us. If I killed an alien that's not considered murder, manslaughter or homicide, but the question is why isn't it?
Oh god, A ton of tiny little donut ponies running around. O_O
4512971 If its evil then its justified, but if it was just trying to give you a cake then its wrong. Try to remember that this started because you said it was cannibalism when its not. Then you tried to get me to think that its cannibalism for ponies to eat zebras (or something similar in thought, not really sure why you brought that up or why you also included eating intelligent things and murder out of nowhere). Is eating something intelligent and NOT the same species cannibalism? No. Wrong? YES.
4514644 I guess I need a new word for it, then maybe I could play devil's advocate better. That's beside the point.
I found a very minor thing you may want to edit.
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Drat. It seems my self-editing skills are not as good as I had hoped. Thank you for pointing out this error; I'll have it fixed immediately.
4512279 So then, are you saying that Zebra's are doughnuts, that look like another type of animal? What type of weed are you drinking?
4518320 I don't know how you got that. I just said that from the logic in previous posts was since zebras aren't ponies then it wouldn't be considered cannibalism to eat them.
4509345 Does that mean I can kill all animals everywhere if I feel like it, since they can't even talk and are thus inferior to me by my own justification?
4518908 Don't question it.
4529922 Question what!
4529946 Exactly
4523779 ....its a doughnut....not an animal.
4538248 But it's edible. And alive.
Like animals!
4538748 I would get into it scientifically, but you're bent on winning an argument by pulling stuff out of your ass.
4523779 yes! but that is your choise not your obligation.
4541158 *grins* I'm a scientist. Try your best... and know that you shall fail.
4541503 As it was Pinkie's choice to eat the living, sapient doughnut pony.
Therefore, I am also allowed to make a similar choice and devour all that I am capable of subduing!
4543665 thank goodness the man has by jove!
4543658 no, you're not.
4546545 *grins wider* Oh ye of little wit. I most certainly am. Graduated with my Masters in Biology from Rutgers in 2006.
Now I'm in developmental genetics, studying the BMP pathway in the neural tube and its derivatives, especially the inner ear (cochlea and semicircular canals especially) and brainstem, with a focus there on the point of crossover of the ventral pyramidal tracts.
We've developed a conditional knock-out of the BMP receptors utilizing the Cre-loxP system, which has targeted expression within CNS mesenchymal-derived tissue beginning around embryonic day 9.5 in mice via the promoter region of the Brn4/POU3F4 gene to mimic the pathogenesis of several types of inherited hearing loss and determine the genes acting downstream of the BMP receptors which aid in the formation of the finer inner ear structures.
*smirk* Now, do please school me in this science you claim to know better than I.
4548493 Ok....one, never said I knew more, and two, that has nothing to do with cannibalism or doughnuts.
4548859 You claimed I was no scientist. I have refuted your claim.
Plus, you were about to attempt to prove something purely philosophical with science, a subject that deals in hard fact.
And cannibalism had nothing to do with my trolling either. I was talking about eating lots of tasty animals, not other people.
People taste too greasy.
This story made me think of this picture:
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But I did enjoy the story.
more on this, please. you skipped over the best part.
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Apologies. I'm afraid I'm not very skilled when it comes to certain fetishes such as vore. This piece was more of a self-challenge to see if I could write it at all, and attempt to make it work for those who do enjoy this kind of material. I will keep your comment in mind, however, for if I ever decide to write another vore story in the future.
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Well, it's all subjective really. Different people like different parts of it, and for different reasons. A lot of people just like the size difference, so they're into micro/macro for the feeling of being utterly powerless, and at the mercy of their gigantic companion. There's a certain high that comes from knowing they could crush you at any time, but don't. Other people like the playful part of in the mouth. They like the sensual aspect of it, where they get to explore this other being intimately, and are explored as well. You could call it kinky, I suppose, but it's a very sensual aspect.
Then of course there's my favorite part. Swallowing. I used to say that I enjoyed this because of the thought of being squeezed all around by those thick, moist, pink walls, smothered in bodily juices as you slide forward. But really it's completely different than that. It's like the idea of standing over a cliff. Everyone thinks about 'what if I jumped?'. I don't care who you are, everybody thinks about it. It's that feeling of 'well the ride down would feel awesome, but I'd die at the end' And that dangerous part gets your heart pumping, and you feel alive. You could design a system to carry you safely down, but at a certain point you have to surrender complete control to gravity.
It's the same thing with roller coasters. Right at the top of that first apex, when you roll off the lift track, and the first car starts leaning down over the crest. There's a moment there when you realize you can't get off anymore; you've committed yourself, surrendered control, and you're along for the ride now, wherever it takes you.
This is the moment that I love. Granted vore is usually fatal, my mind understands that I'm reading a fictional tale. Still, the words have power, and that moment where you can no longer turn back. Your arms are pinned to your sides and you're sliding over the back of the tongue. You've committed yourself, surrendered complete control, and you're along for the ride now, wherever it takes you. Please give as much intimate detail to that moment as possible. Even the trip down the esophagus is the hottest part of the story for me. This is part of the reason why a lot of vore stories end when the prey reaches the stomach. Unless you're into fatal or full tour, the ride is over at that point, and you're just riding the high from the best part.
Not to mention that being propelled along by all that muscle sounds like a lot of fun, but you die at the end (kind of like the jumping off the cliff thing), which is the reason some people are into full tour. If you ever end up writing full tour, never skip the peristalsis, because that's what the readers will be in for.
Sorry for that textwall, but I figure if you're gonna write this in the future, I want it to be as good as possible.
In fact, a great example on how to get the full effect out of the swallowing would be the alternative ending to Hexus's Cinnamon story. The original post is gone, but I've saved a screencap of it.
Pinkie Pie, how could you eat that poor little doughnut pony, no matter how delicious she is? That poor, living doughnut pony.
I really have no idea why people are even bothering to argue about cannibalism and murder in the comments. I fully understand that it's a very sensitive subject, and I would never advocate for things like that, but COME ON! IT'S JUST A STORY! I liked it, personally. Just as a fanfic. If someone I knew in real life did what pinkie did (provided this scenario COULD somehow happen in real life), I would be pretty mad at them.
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