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This story is a sequel to One Minute to Impact
Diamond Tiara cared little for those around her as she grew up. Always believing herself to be the best, she mocked and teased those below her to make sure they knew there place. However, she now faces the question of how to make amends for the sake of love.
Cover art done by the talented ResistanceChick.
Editing done, as always, by the wonderful Ameribrony.
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Will there be another sequel?
Levitated? How can Diamond Tiara do that and she's an Earth pony? Also, what happened between her and Silver?
4507423 Er, facehoof. I'm sorry, for some reason I thought she was a unicorn and my head short circuited. I will fix soon. Sorry.
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4507761 I guess you just had some jumbled thoughts.
4507761 Why must you leave me guessing?!
4508127 Why must we have puns? Oh wait, I love puns!
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This is sweet, now i actually want to see them getting along better and better. And i hate Filty Rich again, i don´t know if that was suppose to happen, but something in this fanfic like several other time let me hate him.
Somehow Diamond Tiara is the perfect sad and lonely pony, if i thought about it i start to remeber movies in which such rich people like her don´t have the nicest life.
I would of loved this to have gone on a bit longer. I have to say the ending sort of came out of no where for me. Bit blindsided, honestly. I had to re-read that Scootaloo part over again just to make sure I wasn't misreading it.
I guess we'll have to ponder about what's up with Silver and Apple Bloom. This could of easily continued on for a good 1-2k more. The neutral ending just felt like a tease. So much more drama can pop up with these two, from AB or Silver hearing untrue rumors about DT and Scoots being seen having a date at a fancy restaurant, to many more things.
This was a great sequel, everything was moving along just fine. The hint that maybe Silver might hate lesbians or something could be a thing. DT could of gotten a rather cold, deadpan stare of unreadability from Silver since then. One that led to Silvy to treating Diamond differently, distancing herself more and more now that she knew her friend was into that stuff, DT apparently having had a crush on her all that time.
Maybe Silver felt cheated on when she learned of why Diamond always followed the CMC, feeling Diamond wasn't worth it anymore because apparently she wasn't good enough to keep Diamond's attention all to herself?
And for Apple Bloom? That's some good stuff. I can totally see the country life treating AB to grow up with certain views, say stuff that offended Scoots or maybe something else!
But, that's the point. We'll never know! (At least until a sequel is hopefully written with these awesome young mares and how they deal with all the not so love and tolerance they are being pelted with on a daily basis! Even at home far as DT is concerned with apparently not being good enough or always disappointing her parents in some way.)
Long rant short, I wish it hadn't ended so dryly there. Very neutral. Touching, it opens up doors at least, but the Story felt like it took a bit of a Bad End/Normal Ending path in one of those date sims. WTB GOOD END!
P.S. For what's worth, I love the story. You had me hooked. I just wish you'd a gone a bit further. Or maybe announce a possible sequel? I do hope we get more!
4531436 Actually, originally, Silver Spoon was going to show up and that was how the inner turmoil of Diamond Tiara was going to be shown. However, I ended up rewriting everything past Spitfire and RD's talk three-four times trying to get this story to be how I wanted it to be. As for the sequels part, yes. I have been hesitant to actually saying anything seeing as I try to keep these to one shots because they were originally not going to even be a series. However, you can see that that isnt true. I dont know when more will come out, but I promise that I do have ideas, especially for these two young mares. Happy?
4531607 Having read a story I apperantly read a while back, only to be reminded of it after the line about how he shouldn't ask anymore questions if he didn't want another black eye, I have to say when I fell for this universe as it hit me that THIS story is actually a sequel to that last story.
"I can say this much, she won't be flying away from me anytime soon."
It was obviously Scoots, but what hit me was realizing there WAS a prequel to this.
I guess using Sequels and Prequels to describe them isn't fair. More like, an "Ongoing" slice of life series much in the vain of how different things got between S1 and S3. I like it. I really enjoy your "Not a sequel but in the same universe" stories. It really makes one care about the characters a bit more knowing they're all still growing and we get to see another chapter of their lives play out.
So, yeah, I like the stand-alone reads perfectly fine. It's just nice to know it's all in the same universe at least. I can't believe it took me this long to even comment on the last story. Which, gotta say, Rumble is a cool friend.
Anyhow, glad to hear you have more in store. You did have a few repeat words in that last fic though with "time time" and a missing quotation mark that made it seem like the narrator was getting a speaking role with one of Button's lines breaking into DT's descriptions. But I have to say it was all just too wonderful to care and didn't break my immersion with the story. Just thought you might want to know if you ever get the urge to go back and fix stuff.
I'll stop babbling now, these pain killers are making me jump topics left and right. xD
I like your writing. You have a great little world going here. Hope you do something with Twilight sometime. It's good to see her support Diamond, or lol at least be her usual patient self as she always tries to educate ponies and stop fires from starting. ;3
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Dt got friendzoned
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4548466 i call 'em as i see 'em
i love how she got friend zoned
Same exact context.
4987073 Did you enjoy it?
4987085 Sort of, it was well written, and a very fun read, but I felt a little jipped at the ending. I'm a big time shipper and love happy endings so I was a little disappointed at the ending.
4987119 I will admit that I understand why some people are jipped by the ending. Personally though, I think one fic wasn't enough, at least not this fic, to establish two long rivals as lovers. In fact, this fic should have a sequel by now, but I have had to wait on cover art for a *Jumbled checks watch* ugh.
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*looks at story*
What do you mean, "complete"?
5646773 There is a sequel if you want them actually getting into the relationship.
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It's just, this story clearly isn't finished. You established a conflict that you didn't properly resolve, and heavily hinted at a second one that was never elaborated on. You made promises here that you didn't fulfill. That's not really something you can simply put off for the sequel, because that still leaves this one feeling unfinished.
5646888 I... don't really know what to say, because you are correct. There is a problem with this story, but it was from a time when I didn't think about all of this enough to realize that. Also, the One Minute series was always oneshots before this, and that may have stopped me too. I'm sorry.