A special romance fic about a certain timid yellow pegasi and a pie addict Wonderbolt who must both struggle to balance their everyday lives and avoid the eyes of a rainbow haired superfan and an especially fiery captain.
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A special romance fic about a certain timid yellow pegasi and a pie addict Wonderbolt who must both struggle to balance their everyday lives and avoid the eyes of a rainbow haired superfan and an especially fiery captain.
this looks promising. I hope to see how this story will progress. Good job writing Pinkie Pie's personality.
It is very well written...
But I'm sorry to say I just don't like it. I'm sorry.
4508771 that's okay... Thanks anyway
4508771 I'll be posting chapter 2 within a week so at least stay to check that out
4508788 Alright, if you say so...
MOAR!
4554592 thanks and I'm over halfway through the second chapter already so not to much longer.
Great chapter. I really enjoyed watching how Soarin paled out. As for a suggestion. I would sa ynext chapter should include a funny and painful escape route so Soarin isn't spotted by Rainbow.
4614325 thanks and that's a great idea and I might put in a bit on angel trying to get him busted too lol.
Fix the grammatical errors. Other than that, you have a charming piece.
Come out of the closet? I don't get the joke. Please explain it to me.
Yes I saw the South Park episode where they used the joke for the whole thing.
5304204 it means you tell people you are gay. I just find it funny cus a lot of people in this fandom ship mares with mares and stallions with stallions
5304191 thanks and yeah I do miss some easy grammar mistakes but im only a beginner so I'll correct that over time.
Great chapter. I loved Angel's antics and Fluttershy's distraction. That was perfect.
5306593 Thanks a lot man
5342364 Moar pls :D
Great job with the update. I love how this story is working out. I can't wait to read what happens next. Good luck.
I'm fairly certain the rabbit is male, other than that nice work.