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SpikE-dog


Hey there. Made this account to get my ideas out there. Male. 17. I love mlp and soccer. I may not upload very consistently but i try my best. I am very active on my twitter and instagram(same name)

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A special romance fic about a certain timid yellow pegasi and a pie addict Wonderbolt who must both struggle to balance their everyday lives and avoid the eyes of a rainbow haired superfan and an especially fiery captain.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 19 )

this looks promising. I hope to see how this story will progress. Good job writing Pinkie Pie's personality.

It is very well written...

But I'm sorry to say I just don't like it. I'm sorry.

Comment posted by SpikE-dog deleted Jun 7th, 2014

4508771 that's okay... Thanks anyway

4508771 I'll be posting chapter 2 within a week so at least stay to check that out

4554592 thanks and I'm over halfway through the second chapter already so not to much longer.

Great chapter. I really enjoyed watching how Soarin paled out. As for a suggestion. I would sa ynext chapter should include a funny and painful escape route so Soarin isn't spotted by Rainbow.

4614325 thanks and that's a great idea and I might put in a bit on angel trying to get him busted too lol.

Fix the grammatical errors. Other than that, you have a charming piece.

Come out of the closet? I don't get the joke. Please explain it to me.

Yes I saw the South Park episode where they used the joke for the whole thing.

5304204 it means you tell people you are gay. I just find it funny cus a lot of people in this fandom ship mares with mares and stallions with stallions

5304191 thanks and yeah I do miss some easy grammar mistakes but im only a beginner so I'll correct that over time.

Great chapter. I loved Angel's antics and Fluttershy's distraction. That was perfect.

Great job with the update. I love how this story is working out. I can't wait to read what happens next. Good luck.

I'm fairly certain the rabbit is male, other than that nice work.

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