During her parent's funeral, Vinyl Scratch is almost killed by a mysterious unicorn, but is saved by Octavia Melody, or as she is know, Secret Agent 0CT. She soon finds not only are her parents still alive, but they need her help. Now, she must work along side Secret Agent 0CT and the Equestrian Secret Service in order to stop the Three Doctors. Can she stop their plan to eliminate all unicorns, save her parents and still manage to get the girl? Tune in now to find out!
Authors notes: This is going to be silly, don't expect super serious. You have been warned. Cover art edited from mlp comics cover. There will be romance, but it's not the main focus of the story.
Chapters (9)
Fascinating. I like it
Ah, good ole excitable Scratch. <3
Hello, its me again!
So far I like how this is going. Silly, but exciting! I had my share of laughs, and am definitely looking forward to more!
I liked how you portrayed Octavia's car. The subversion of the swanky spy car trope was brilliant and unexpected. Also the aversion of the bond girl trope! Thank God.
Caballeron's appearance is also pretty rad. Also Photo Finish. I like the idea of there being more to background ponies than meet the eye. When Photo first took notice of Fluttershy, maybe she had just finished a mission of her own, for instance.
On the other hand, I noticed that sometimes you capitalize Three Doctors and sometimes you don't. Just a silly mistake but it bugged me!
4496578 I, ironically, sung a parody of this song when I started writing this story. >.>
4506409 Excitable Scratch is best Scratch. <3
4568115 Thanks ^^ also, eep! That was not supposed to happen! The Three Doctors are totally scary and powerful and must be capitalized!
Action! Adventure! Spies! Gadgets! Explosions! Kissing! Comedy! Gray and white ponies!
Dr. Arthruz is going to be a mind blowing character reveal. Calling it now.
I am loving this so far. It's like Get Smart mixed with James Bond and a little bit of Indiana Jones mixed in. It's too late my time to comment more on the individual chapters, but I'll just say that Octy and Vinyl are just adorable as a couple.
I heard "plan to eliminate all unicorns" and came running. I brought popcorn
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Well, you know that this means that you might have to write a sequel now. Though to be fair, it could work as a indefinite ending too, and not need a continuation. All depends on your tastes. Still, this was kind of a fun ending, particularly with that changeling twist to tie it all together again. Now all we need is for V1n and 0ct to become a spy couple in the future, and all the threads will finally be played out. Well, till later.
4941727 Hope he was all you hoped. ^^
5221679 That is an adorable image... Pinkie best eater of popcorn.
5242972 For now, I'm not planning a sequel, but who knows? If people like it I'll at least try. I try to keep my fans happy. ^^ I probably fail more than I'd like, but I try by jove. >.>
i certinatly would not mind a sequel why baecause of the re the jokes all to be of them need more orginal im sorry not simply read and heard a thosand times youve got to show you can stand on your own two legs to keep my vote for a sequal
'Looks at the author's note and the date the chapter was published then looks at all the comments, lols'
Personally I think you've done great so far. Now, no more interruptions, I have another five chappys to read.