Good first chapter, lets see where this takes us =P

Wow, this s great. Can't wait for more.

Like the direction defiently like the description but im a tad bit confused on his current size is he still baby dragon sized or larger cause i can't exactly see him leaping over the stacks of books in his normal form

Great job so far. I had a bit of trouble finding where the dream ended and reality came in, but other then that I liked it. I hope to see more in the future.

>>418367418367 He is roughly his normal size.

>>418422418422 alrighty the visual always helps a lot of people increase spikes size but they don't really give a decent description drives me nuts but being hes about normal size i can see why you left it out here (but since you plan on making him grow please rember that descriptions are your friends well intill you over use them) continue on with the extreamly promising story my good man

All right, this is great! Let's see what happens.

>>418446418446 Indeed. In this case, I specifically excluded his size, giving only the slightest hint about it. Everything has its own place in this story, though I will look through as I edit to make sure nothing important is excluded.

It would be amusing to get twenty chapters in only to state. "Oh ya, he's a girl now. Sorry, I forgot that."

>>418699418699 indeed lol that would be rather shocking to find out

This is a great first chapter, and I'm looking forward to seeing more of it soon! I can't wait to find out where this is going!

I like it.  Where are we going with this?  I hope we're not going to see Spike hook up with Twilight.  But considering the phrasing you've used so far, I doubt it.

>>419936419936 Places. Then times. Then Times. Once more, Times, though this instance will be before and after Places, to change things up a little.

As far as the plot is written now, this is entirely accurate.

Now I'm going to change it out of spite.

>>419953419953

What?  Are you saying you won't answer?  Well, I've figured as much, the question was rhetorical.

You'd have to be a pretty shitty writer to reveal too much too soon.  Like me!

Awesome, great flow in this writing, the pace is perfect.

The scenes between Spike and Twilight were really pleasant. Tracked.

This needs to get updated

>>510981510981

Finals are done. Chapter 2 is ready (has been ready for weeks, actually). Re-writing it over and over to make it look good and read well.

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If anyone wants to edit and/or read for me before I upload, that'd be lovely. Otherwise it should be out by Friday. Unless, of course, I'm a liar; in that case, who knows if/when I'll ever update it.

>>536013536013

I'd be willing to give it a look if you need someone to proofread it. I'll do my best anyway.

>>536013536013 Remember me saying "It'll be out by Friday?" Yup. I lied.

I'm liking where this is going! Drunk Spike should be one hell of a sight

HEY! Spike is not ten he's more like 13 since he is just about four, five years then the rest and im sure we all know fluttershy is like 18 since "im a year older then you" and he is going tru prubity but anyways it was good anyways. And the pinkie party dude i hope its super awesome i mean come on pinkie hard cider not apple but hard cider and a dragon that can out drink just about everone just for his belly its going to be good i can feel it.

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Just imagine it, Spike.” She rose onto her hind legs and tossed a foreleg over his shoulder, holding her other forelimb out before them. “Sapphire shot glasses. Sapphire shot glasses EVERYWHERE!” She swept the unoccupied limb out towards the sky and he could almost see her visions of sapphire glasses filled with alcohol, stacked into towers so large they disappeared into the sky.

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This story sounds like it's just a rollercoaster of awesome.

Edit: Sorry if you got multiple notices from me, I was having issues posting pictures in my replies.

Oh buck yes this is going to get fun.

I'm not sure if it's more fun to just keep catching bits and pieces of whats going on or the full story. I mean what did Pinkie do to Rarity? And what sort of parties have we been missing out on? Mentions of Tombstone, Caramel, and Big Mac making out again? Fields of ice cream, candy coated apple trees, and Pinkie getting a hold of Mac for a forth time? what are we/Spike missing out on and is it more amazing then what Pinkie did to Applejacks hoof? So many questions!

>>548730548730 well mate considering the drinking age i think its safe to assume the ages aren't quite humanized in this story so Spike isn't getting the short end of the stick like he usually is when his age is ten or so, its relative.

So Pinkie on alcohol scares the shit out of me i mean can you imagine the pressure to the 4th wall

Pretty awesome read man keep it up

Now I want to see a drunken Spike 0_0

Also, I see what you did there with Tombstone.

moar prease?

can't wait for MORE

...Where are we going with this?

You really like stretching things out don't you?

When can we expect the next chapter? I like where this is going, and we haven't seen any Sparity material. I like this so far .

Well I hope there's more :D I really did love reading this, and the promise of adult-humor is wonderful <3

I like this so far.

Pleeease continue this.

I like this I like it a lot.  But now for the most important question.  This has the romance tag, so who is Spike with?  DUN DUN DUN!

Best wishes friend!

tombstone and big mac kissed

So when is this update? soon right?

I like this, really I do.

I do have to point something out though. Every time I've read a Spike centered story, there are always 3 dislikes. No matter how many chapters, likes or words, always three dislikes. Are there people out there who find the Spike stories and just dislike them on principle?

Anyway, have a mustache, have four of them:

I can't wait to see what happens next.

This definitely is interesting and drunk Pinkie Pie is going to be the most entertaining thing ever so I hope you'll update soon.

Twilight is EVIL!

... I feel so bad for Big Mac.

FINALLY!

YOU'RE BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

So My Proud Human is basically Roman history if they were all benders?

I'm okay with that.

WHAT DID PINKIE DO TO YOU BIG MAC???

You're back.

Awesome!

>>18644081864408 I did, but no Pinkie Pie fun yet.

>>19380871938087 Eeyup.

>>19381391938139 Eeyup.

>>19381711938171 & >>19390321939032 You would think that, wouldn't ya? Naa...I'm just picking up my keys.

>>19384681938468 Actually started writing it out in story format...I got about three pages in when I realized there was no point to it; I can just toss references when necessary. To summarize MPH, basically just combine every anime/anime-esque thing from the last 15 or 20 years and attach the loosest understanding/knowledge of ancient history the world has ever seen. Then stick a bit more Samurai Shamploo and Inuyasha in.

>>19388711938871 Party hard. Really....really hard. Try not to leave any stains though.

>>19390761939076 Why thank you.

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Adults only

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One of my writing playlists. It offers juuust enough variety for me to not go stir crazy; it isn't quite a Fallout Boy, Lindsey Stirling, Cellweller mashup, but it serves it's purpose when I'm not home.

>>19384681938468 Not quite. Mark Anthony was actually Caesar's strongest supporter and good friend. Brutus was the one who betrayed him along with the Roman senators. Mark Anthony led a rebellion against Brutus and the senators because of the fact they murdered Caesar. The more you know

Also, et tu Bruta means you to Brutus, and is commonly used nowadays when someone stabs you in the back.

>>19423761942376

Them being enemies turned allies made for a better story as per 99% of all video games, movies, TV shows, anime shows, cartoons, flipbooks and crude cave drawings so I went with that and 'prettied everything up' after that, I suppose.

Also SHHHHHHH don't spoil the comic. You're exactly the type of person Spike was worried about; do you kiss your mother with that historically-accurate-factoid spewing mouth?? Wretched fiend.

Know what? You just earned yourself a reference at some point as one of those filthy spoiler-ponies. I hope you're proud of yourself.

>>19425321942532 Always.

>>19425391942539

Waitaminute, I know you! You were in the comments section about...40 weeks ago!

Oh wow...I really look lazy when I phrase it that way.

Well "In for a penny in for a-solid-brick-of-the-largest-denomination-of-money-your-country-produces-an/or-legally-recognizes-as-firewood", I always say. See ya in 3 or 4 epochs.

“You win! Just keep her away from me, AJ, she…she did things with it.”

>>19420291942029

Heartache number one was when you left me,

I never knew that I could hurt this way,

And heartache number two,

Was when you came back again,

You came back but never meant to stay.

Like this story already.

Back to reading!

Drunkin' wild party awaits!

Man this story needs a 'Random' tag, because it's all over the place, lol.

Well this is going to be a long story.

And I really don't think Spike should attend any adult party with Pinkie, lol, or at least not get drunk at one with her there.

O...kay...

Um, Given that Pinkie routinely bends the laws of physics on themselves like a freakin' pretzel, I'm not sure I want to know what she'd do in a situation of drunken debauchery...

But, at the same time, I am intrigued...