NOTE: On Hiatus until I wrap up Iron Mare and Captain Equestria.
Co-written by JZ1, Fedorasarecool and iowaforever
Part of Phase One of the Harmony's Warriors Universe.
Proofread by Paleb05, Scootluna and Spy11887
Pipsqueak is nothing special, really.
Okay, he is a science major, so it's not like he's dumb or anything. But he's not what you would consider one of the 'cool colts'. He's just another face in the crowd, just trying to survive high school like any number of his fellow students.
That is, until he goes on a field trip to RichCorp, the corporation at the very cutting edge of everything scientific. While there, he gets bitten by a rare Star Spider. Soon, he starts to develop strange new powers and abilities. Now he's anything but normal. And with those powers, he'll learn a very important lesson:
With great power, comes great responsibility.
Pip now isn't just another face in the crowd. Now, he swings from the rooftops, keeping the city safe from danger.
He is the Spectacular Spider-Colt.
Well, not a bad start, I follow this to see where it goes.
4488835 Yeah, I'll be first to admit this is VERY bare bones.
Obviously things will get more fleshed out later as the story goes.
It seems I have a habit of having rather brief prologues don't I?
4488843 Not that I saw when reading them. I also saw you update listen for each story, I hope Iorn Mare next chapter is bring work on. And are you going to post this on Fanfiction as well?
Well, it's a start, that's for sure. You should check out my Marvel stories.
4488871 Yeah I do.
Just not as often.
But I do keep them updated.
4488871 And yes, Iron Mare shall be the next Harmony's Warriors fic to be updated if everything goes right (I might just up and write the next chapter of this just to justify it's existence a little better you know? Instead of just leaving it with a bare bones prologue for a month)
I'm actually currently working on the next To Boldly Go chapter, since I've been neglecting that work something fierce.
Wow, that was fast. Should head over to TVTropes
Also
4488910 That was exactly what we had in mind when we wrote this.
Also, I should probably list you has a proper co-writer now, since you do so much help on these....
A good a start as any. I look forward I see where this goes.
4488882 Ok, just wondering.
4488875 Hey Billy remember me? How are your chapters for Curse of the Black Pearl coming? I want to read more of it.
4488918 Alright then. Mind if I include it on the TVTropes page?
4488934 Sure. I have no qualms.
4488910 honeydew? Shit! Keep him away from a pick axe, Jaffa cakes, or any form of explosive!
In the description:
There seems to be a word missing.
4489024 Thank you I'm fixing it now.
Looks good, Ben. I'm not usually a fan of all things Marvel (Marevel? Heh),and especially not Spider-Man, but I'm liking this a lot. Can't wait to see what happens in Chapter 1!
And do I detect a couple of well-known Muppet characters from the bit in Castle of the Two Sisters on? I'm thinking...yes.
4489108 Why yes they are muppet characters.
I'm a mad man
4489120 Kinda thought so. The original Muppet Show was one of my fave TV shows back in the day.
Really? Gee, I couldn't tell.
4489135 THE MUPPET SHOW IS AWESOME
4489140 Yes, it was.
Good start. Not much more to say. Gives me an idea for my sequel. Hope you don't mind me borrowing an idea from you.
So Pip's parents have no conspiracy on this story, but have you thought about them having any relevance in another story? Just wondering.
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Eh, they're on hold for now due to lack of notebook paper, which I need in order to iron out any flaws the story might have.
"And if somepony told you he was your average, everday colt, not a care in the world...then somepony lied."
4489417 as long as due credit is given.
4489657 nope.
They're like Batman's parents. Exist to die.
I have a suggestion, why not have the Mane-iac in there?
She does kind of remind me of the green goblin a little.
4491240 well, I do have plans for her, but I figured I'd move her to the Batcolt Beyond fic (which is in the same 'verse anyways).
But nifty idea though in making her a Spider-Colt villain. I do already have a Doc Ock lined up though, let that be known.
4491309 Oh. Do you have a bat-colt fic already, or are you planning on working on it in the future?
4493792 Planning on it.
4490676 Course man. I said borrow, not steal. II`ll use it dust it off and give it back.
Huh; so Zecora isn't involved in the origin anymore? Also, are you going to give credit to the artist who did the story picture?
Huh. Muppets.
4497643 Yeah, I'll do that right now.
And no, I don't think she is.
I think she just kinda got jossed when we decided to skip the ponyville trip.
Dang it.
4497810 Darn. So did I read the chapter right when it described the spider as 'magical'?
Also, since we're clearly skipping the funeral scene, are you still planning on having Bluebell and Pipsqueak related?
4497871 Yeah.
If anything, since I'm still writing the first chapter (I either work hella fast or hella slow
), I can drop in a reference to her having left for work or something.
Or she just lives in a different place, either works.
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4488910
Speaking of the Muppets, is it just me, or does Coulson remind anyone else of Kermit?
“Now, you didn’t leave your watch in there again, did you Beaker?” is that a Watchmen reference? Or am I looking too far into it?
4515228 no its a reference.....just with less depression
4497810 Hate to keep coming back to this, but are you going to credit the artist who did the story picture?
4515601 yes, but alas, I've been distracted with the new chapter.
Pretty sure you can click the pic and get the source though, but I could be wrong
4515739 It sends you to another version of the image, without any credit to the creator.
I tracked down the picture. It was drawn by someone named Jack Lee, who uses the handle SpikesMoustache on deviantART.
4516596 Thank you so much, I'll link it now.
4516636 Yay!
Ironically, the fact that there's no conspiracy makes their deaths even MORE tragic!
4527969 EXACTLY
Oh man! It just gets more sweeter!!!
So, Featherweight is this world's Harry Osborn, Filthy is Norman, and Diamond Tiara is Emma Frost. BTW, I noticed that you didn't say that Filthy won't EVER turn into the Goblin, just not in THIS story. Dinky is part Franklin Richards, and the other part is either Gwen Stacy or Mary Jane (or possibly a bit of both). Too bad Filthy turned Cup Cake away. Filthy does seem to love his daughter, and is maybe a little nicer than Spider-Man canon, but he is still not a very nice pony. I hope Cheerilee doesn't do anything evil.
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Yes. You're correct. And yes, Filthy will totally go Goblin...most likely in the sequel or possibly a later one. Depends on how things pan out.
She's a bit of both yes, and yes, she's Franklin Richards.
Well, she's a one-armed scientist in a Spider-Man story....I don't see much joy in her future
Poor Tiara I hope she get better soon