I don't usually review scat—actually I have—but what the fuck do I care? This was certainly a unique work, never thought such a concept would come to ponies. I like it, and I particularly liked your work on Chamber Pot as well. I could tell here that you were really giving an effort here, your descriptions were quite adequate, and the lust for the work itself teemed from most chapters. It did seem somewhat mechanical at times, like you were trying to force through it, but you kept descriptive and tried something new each chapter, which is laudable. The ending seemed like a bit of a cop out, unless I'm missing something, otherwise I have no idea who it was. You're very good at what you write. I've been following the /anon/ threads for quite a while, and I suppose I just felt the need to finally say something on FiMfiction. You're quite popular among those of this fetish. Keep up the good work.
I can't think of who Twilight knows who'd cause that kind of shock in her, yet wouldn't be aware of things like Pinkie Pie's Sense, and would also know, have the power, and want to observe all of the Elements like that. Discord, Princess Celestia, and Princess Luna would all most likely know about the Pinkie Sense, although now that I think again, Cadence or Shining Armor might have been able to pull it off, may not have had time to learn anything to close about Twilight's friends, and there being the culprit would definitely shock her a lot. I don't know but I do enjoy this story, my favorites are probably Rainbow Dash's for clopability, Pinkie Pie's for being so unusual yet adorable (and kinda scary), and Rarity's was sort of amusing in a "her ridiculously amount of discomfort with her own bodily functions makes a mess" way. I think it would be cool if there was an epilogue added that reveals the culprit, like them chuckling over Twilight being distracted from finding them or something.
I don't usually review scat—actually I have—but what the fuck do I care?
This was certainly a unique work, never thought such a concept would come to ponies. I like it, and I particularly liked your work on Chamber Pot as well.
I could tell here that you were really giving an effort here, your descriptions were quite adequate, and the lust for the work itself teemed from most chapters. It did seem somewhat mechanical at times, like you were trying to force through it, but you kept descriptive and tried something new each chapter, which is laudable. The ending seemed like a bit of a cop out, unless I'm missing something, otherwise I have no idea who it was.
You're very good at what you write. I've been following the /anon/ threads for quite a while, and I suppose I just felt the need to finally say something on FiMfiction. You're quite popular among those of this fetish. Keep up the good work.
Incredible!
The second pony to notice the camera... But I still don't get it. Who put the cameras into toilets?
I can't think of who Twilight knows who'd cause that kind of shock in her, yet wouldn't be aware of things like Pinkie Pie's Sense, and would also know, have the power, and want to observe all of the Elements like that. Discord, Princess Celestia, and Princess Luna would all most likely know about the Pinkie Sense, although now that I think again, Cadence or Shining Armor might have been able to pull it off, may not have had time to learn anything to close about Twilight's friends, and there being the culprit would definitely shock her a lot. I don't know but I do enjoy this story, my favorites are probably Rainbow Dash's for clopability, Pinkie Pie's for being so unusual yet adorable (and kinda scary), and Rarity's was sort of amusing in a "her ridiculously amount of discomfort with her own bodily functions makes a mess" way. I think it would be cool if there was an epilogue added that reveals the culprit, like them chuckling over Twilight being distracted from finding them or something.
I have to know who the culprit is but i think it is celestia herself shes called molestia for a reason
I thought it was going to be this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ony4orjoNSw but spike works too.
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Oh, trust me.
It's not Spike.
5497623 What do you mea- oh wait it's incomplete.
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