So, everypony is replaced with an earlier version of themselves from the planning of the show? Or maybe an earlier generation of ponies?

>>420826420826 Pretty much.

Something like this?:

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Interesting, do go on!

>>420878420878 something like that, only with normal Twilight in the middle.

>>420878420878

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>>420881420881

The horror!

>>420878420878>>420879420879 Pinkie pie....... with wings............

I am so reading this.

>>420891420891 I'm having the idea that Pinkie is a terrible yet fast flyer, a bit like Derpy :)

>>420898420898 Does fluttershy do the 4th wall breaking then? Or more like cracking, since she probably wouldn't break anything.

>>420903420903 nah it will still be Surprise

Y'know what would be cool? G1 mane 6 emoticons.

>>420891420891

Surprise is an awesome pony!

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>>420909420909 Surprise and Firefly are best ponies!

>>420889420889

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This was a triumph.

>>420907420907 I don't really know much about the other generations. But ey, maybe I'll find out stuff from your fic! Hope you'll continue on it.

>>420924420924 Don't rely on mine too much! I'll be adding some of my own impressions too!

>>420917420917

Cupcakes, well two can play that game.

oh, this could be interesting, tracking this.

>>420933420933

Meh, I can't understand what they were saying.

Now lets party like its the 1890's.

Pinkie: What's in the like bar? I have them now. It's 62 people in my basement. Look again. The people are now cupcakes! Anything is possible when people think you're a party pony and not a serial killer. I'm a horse. *whistles*

>>420946420946

I admit defeat mein kaiser.

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YAY! Time to act out the story! Wait, did I just out Derpy there? BINGO!

So far a lot of the story is following the pilot episode almost to the letter (with small changes in names). It seems it will pick up and become its own narrative, however, as the author explores how Twilight reacts when she knows what will happen already.

>>429348429348 Maybe, its bad?

>>429687429687

No, not at all. NOT changing would be bad, in that I have seen that episode a number of times and don't really need a recap with five names changed and nothing else. Changing it this way would be interesting.

>>429827429827 Thanks! :3  

EDIT: After all, what would Twilight do if she went back in time?

>>429866429866

According to canon, she would fail to warn herself not to worry and create a temporal paradox that made her a complete buttmonkey.

>>429880429880 -giggle- is that so?

Well, this is what I think might happen... so lalalalala

wait, what about that dimensions twilight? or did they switch places. that was always my question when something alike happened in cartoons

>>435502435502 I wa waiting for somepony to say that. Well apparently, normal and G1 twilight switched places and now G1 Twilight is finding fluttershy :3 This are two different dimensions.

Twilight's fast one with suprise had me thinking "Clever Girl, dood."

Neat story so far, dood.

>>477999477999 Haha! Thanks!

Short but neat!

>>478015478015 Thanks, but I'm kinda stuck here :p Also with exams coming and three other fics in progress, the chapters should come after a while

I like how you remembered that while TS in the beginning hated the party the modern TS knows how much fun they can be .  I think I thought should have been changed was RD's now Firefly's Rain-blo Dry since RD would use it since it closely resembles Rainbow I'd have thought Firefly would have used a different name.  I wonder why there aren't other time travel fics like this though (PST me if there are though)

>>478362478362 yes, I find the lack of time travel, discorded , mind-control and hypnotised pony fics on Fimfiction disturbin. But anyhooves, thanks for your feedback!

>>478362478362 Oh yes, about Firefly, I was chose Rainblue dry thanks to her mane. All along I have been thinking about Dash's mane as the cause for the rainbow moves.  

Um...this is weird.  But I think I know where you're going with it.  Anyway, there's one problem: This Applejack seems to be a bit schizophrenic.

WHO THE HELL ARE YOU!?  GET OFF ME YOU FREAK!  Oh, nice to meet you, care to try some apple products?

You'd think she would pace herself this time during brunch, considering she knows what's going to happen.

The scene with Firefly seems a bit off.  For instance, I don't know if Rainblue dry makes any sense in this context.

Then there's the overall tone, feels forced.

The scene with Sparkler is rushed.

You know what I would have liked to see: Spike getting a crush on a different pony.  It would have worked so well.

...or did he and Twilight just didn't realize yet.

"'Next is perfume.'"

DA FUQ!?  Why do they need perfume!?

I assume the abrupt cut off was because Posy accidentally killed her.

Twilight: "No I wasn't surprised at all Surprise.  You kinda suck at this."

Now, is anything else planned?  Or is it on permanent hiatus?

Found this little error after rereading the 3 chapters

Twilight just raised an eyebrow and stuffed a hoof into Pinkie's mouth

Should go without saying but Pinkie's should be changed to Surprise's