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Rarity brought out the croissants and tarts while Fluttershy poured tea. The pegasus was silent while eating, trying to decide how best to approach the subject of the letter.
Just show her, it will be okay.
"I needed to—"
The words came out of both their mouths in almost perfect unison. They looked at one another, each realizing the other had something to say, but neither one sure what that something might be. Her friend spoke first: "Please, darling, I can wait. You had something to tell me?"
Nodding, Fluttershy reached for a piece of paper. "Um, I wanted you to look at this, Angel found it on my door this morning, with a red rose." Fluttershy pointed at the rose in her vase. She was already nervous, and nothing had even happened!
Please, just admit you wrote it. Don't make me pretend it wasn't you.
She passed the letter to the her friend, who began to scrutinize it. "My dear, are you all right? Did this frighten you in any way?"
Oh, she's worried. She thinks she scared me!
The timid pegasus shook her head. "N-no, I just wanted your advice. What type of pony would write this? They act like they know me. Maybe I should write back?"
Just say the words. Tell me you wrote it. Please.
The fashionista stared at the letter, looking thoughtful. "What do I think, hmmm? Well, this pony is clearly very much affected by you, dangerously so. He, or she, is deeply in love with you. Delirious with it I should say. I don't think they are, well, dangerous per se, but they may be delusional, possibly a bit deranged."
You... think you're delusional for loving me? Why would you say that?
"This bit about wanting to spend the rest of their days making you smile strikes me as particularly crazy. Not the intent, mind you, that all seems nice enough. But who writes that to somepony they don't know?"
I loved that part... Oh please, please don't lie, just tell me!
"I don't think I would advise writing back, let them have their little fantasy, it's hurting nopony."
It's hurting me! Can't you please admit it?
"I can't really tell more from this, other than... the name 'Elusive' strikes me as a very shady sort of name. It's likely a nom de plume. Then again, if it's truly their name, how can you trust somepony with a name that screams you can not? No, just leave well enough alone my darling, I don't believe they will bother you again."
You want me to forget it?! No, no I won't!
She listened to her friend lie through her teeth, and she was gritting her own the whole time. She... She didn't say it! Why won't she say it? She didn't want to force her; She wasn’t going to break anypony’s trust by revealing that she knew.
"Um, okay, if that's what you think, Rarity." She said, disappointment heavy in her voice.
Maybe she just doesn't want to say it... was it just a fantasy to her? Playing at being somepony else?
Her friend stood and hugged her gently. "Don't worry darling, that letter was written by a lovesick fool. Clearly they had no idea what they were doing at the time. Love drives us all to do irrational things, I suppose. Consider it a compliment, and forget it." You are the fool! A fool and a liar!
Why can't you—
And then she understood.
It should have been clear earlier, it was staring her in the face. It was her friend’s body language. Everything about her posture, the way she acted... it was screaming pain. Even before being acknowledged as the spirit of kindness, the pegasus had always had... something, some little talent Twilight would probably call empathy. Whatever it was, she just knew when something or somepony was hurting. Her lovely friend was in agony. Every word she was speaking was killing her. She could feel the unicorn trembling slightly as she hugged her.
No! Stop doing this to yourself! I don't want this!
Her friend released her, and began clearing the dishes from the table. "Let's clean this up and go to the spa, darling. I feel like I could use a good soak just now."
How can I... You need help, don't you? You poor thing!
She was frozen with warring emotions, and Rarity looked back at her. "Fluttershy, is something the matter, darling?" Her friend looked concerned, and she couldn’t blame her.
Everything is the matter! I can't let you do this to yourself, I won't!
The pegasus whispered softly: "I'm sorry, Applejack, but... she needs me."
She made a decision then and there. Her beloved couldn't do it. she couldn't say the words, not without help. Maybe she was a fool, but she was a fool because of love.
And she's my fool!
She heard the unicorn trying to say something more.
Shhhhh, it's okay, let your Fluttershy fix this. I'll make it all better.
Then she kissed her, draping her forelegs around her fool's neck as she did so.
The kiss went on to the point where Fluttershy could not bear the lack of air any longer, and then a bit longer still. The fashionista seemed frozen, certainly not shying away, but her body language said she simply had no response for this course of action. She gazed into those sapphire eyes lovingly, wondering what her reaction might be. The fashionista seemed to have awoken from a daze. She glanced about the room in confusion. "I'm terribly sorry, Fluttershy. I believe I lost focus just now. Did I miss something?"
The pegasus giggled a bit, apparently her intended lover (If Fluttershy had anything to say about it) was convinced she had slipped into a daydream just now. "Um, well, you were asking if I was ready to go, and then I kissed you." She punctuated this sentence with another quick peck on the white coated unicorn's cheek.
Rarity still seemed a bit confused. "Wait, what was that just now?"
The pegasus kissed her again, full on the lips. Oh, this is fun! "I said, you asked me if I was ready to go—"
The puzzled unicorn nodded understanding. "Yes, I remember that, and then?"
Fluttershy smiled and leaned in. "And then I did this." She kissed her lovely friend again, followed by two pecks for good measure. Do you get it now?
Her lovely friend smiled a little stupidly, then shook herself. "So what you are saying is... The things that are going on now... it’s all really happening. This is, in fact, real."
Fluttershy nodded her head, kissing her again. This is so nice, I should have done this ages ago. "Very much so. If you like, I could give you a little love nip on the neck. If it hurts, that would prove you’re awake, right?"
The befuddled unicorn nodded. "That... might be best. If this is not real, I am going to be very upset. I will likely shout very angry, hurtful things when I do wake up. I hope for my sake and yours this is happening."
Fluttershy gamely bent her neck, and nipped her friend, just hard enough for her to feel the pressure. Then, feeling naughty, she suckled on the spot she’s bitten, enjoying the feeling of the unicorn’s shuddering breaths. She stopped, and raised her head to look at Rarity again. "Convinced now?"
Rarity looked wonderingly into Fluttershy’s eyes, touching her neck with a hoof, seemingly unsure whether to trust her own sense of touch. "So, this is real then."
Fluttershy looked her in the eyes and nodded slowly. "Would you like me to give you another love bite to prove it?" Because I would like that, I would like that very much. Please ask me to do that.
Rarity shook her head. the enamored pegasus kissed her again. The unicorn's expression went slack and daydreamy once more. She visibly tried to regain composure. "Darling, please, do not take this as a complaint... I should be forever grateful if you continue what you are doing for the rest of my days, but why are you doing it?"
Fluttershy smiled mischievously. She had done it, she had taken her fate in her own hooves. It feels... powerful. "Because I wanted to. Because you make me want to. Because I was tired of seeing you hurt yourself."
Rarity looked nonplussed, and just a little worried. "Have you been listening to Iron Will again?"
Fluttershy paused. Am I going too far? I don’t want her to be worried...
No, she needs me to be assertive. You can do this, be confident, be sexy!
The pegasus shook her head. "This is not about New Fluttershy, or Old Fluttershy, this is about Rarity's Fluttershy." She pouted, quivering her lips. "Now you have to promise me something. You have to promise me you will stop doing that. Stop hurting yourself."
"I— I promise, just don't make me Pinkie Promise. I don't know if I want her involved in... well this." The graceful unicorn's eyes shifted, as if thinking of something.
Fluttershy laughed warmly. Pinkie? Why would she look aside when talking about— She looked almost guilty just now... why would she— Oh. OH! Hmmm... that might not be bad, actually. I wonder if Pinkie would mind? We'll talk about that little look later. "A plain-old promise is enough for now."
The unicorn smiled happily, seemingly not believing her good fortune. "But... what brought this on, why so suddenly?"
The pegasus kissed her again. She batted her eyes and said: "Rarity, do you love your Fluttershy?"
Rarity melted in her hooves. "Oh yes, yes I do love you— I... said it!! I finally said it!" She looked positively elated at the exclamation. Her eyes were full of tears that had gone unshed during her ordeal. Fluttershy held her tightly and gave her another quick peck.
The pegasus sighed. She still doesn't understand. "You said it perfectly well yesterday. It was written in ink. It was lovely."
The unicorn stammered a denial, Fluttershy silenced it with another kiss.
"I know you wrote that letter. Your perfume was all over it. I wanted to give you time to tell me yourself. I would have waited until you could. But you were hurting yourself, Rarity, you were berating yourself for writing something from your heart. I won't have anypony hurting you, least of all yourself. You mean too much to me." She looked her beloved in the eyes and smiled.
Her befuddled friend looked at her, her eyes huge and still wet with tears. "You knew..."
Fluttershy nodded, kissing her again. "I knew. In case I need to make this more clear, I feel the same way. Now you have one question to answer: What would Rarity like to do with her Fluttershy?"
Rarity was, quite simply, floored. What is one supposed to do when everything she wants is presented on a silver platter? "Um... darling... this is completely embarrassing. You see, I had this plan. It was a good one, or so I thought at the time. Well, a series of plans really. Only they got all jumbled up in my head, and everything kept going wrong. You have this effect on me, thinking of you, being around you... Then there was your pet Angel, that sneaky little fink knew what I had done. Oh, sorry, I know he is your pet, I didn’t mean to... But I couldn't have that, you see! This was mine, I was supposed to confess and then sweep you off your feet. It's all gone wrong! I-I don't know what to do now!"
The pegasus nodded understandingly. "It's okay, Rarity, I know it went wrong. I watched you talking about ‘Elusive’ and I just wanted to cry. You are not crazy, you are a wonderful pony who did some foolish things. You are kind, you are generous, and you are going to be mine. If... that's okay with you."
There really are no words for how okay that is. I will really need to show you how very okay that is in the near future.
She hid behind her pink mane just a bit, coyly batting her eyelashes.
You... you're flirting with me! Doing a truly wonderful job at it too... If my knees weren't quivering I would be telling you just how much. But... why this sudden change? When did you get so very bold?
Rarity smiled shakily. For the moment, she locked the worries up in a small box. "I would love that, you have no idea how much. Well, maybe you do, since you know what I wrote. I-I just don't know, darling. Please, tell me what you want, won't you?"
Fluttershy's eyes widened. Being asked what she wanted seemed to put her just a bit off guard again. Rarity relaxed just slightly. The awkwardness her dear friend always showed was back with a vengeance. Maybe I was just imagining it... "Um... you could kiss me back?"
The unicorn stared, not understanding how she had possibly not done that yet. That may well be the best idea in the history of good ideas. "Um, yes of course..." Rarity looked the lovely pegasus in the eyes; leaned forward, and pressed her lips firmly, but gently, to hers. The fashionista suddenly felt something pressing against her pursed lips, and opened them slightly. She now found the pegasus' tongue warring with hers. Ah yes, like they do in Prance. This continued well past the point both of their hindlegs felt the urge to buckle. The kiss was finally broken, both of them breathing heavily. So... aggressive! She's become so daring and confident! I should be proud but...
"D-darling, are we moving too fast? We have not properly had a first date yet. I am finding thinking very difficult right now, but I think etiquette frowns on that." She was gasping, her voice ragged and hoarse, her whole body flushed and sticky. Is she doing this solely for me?
The pegasus had caught her breath now, and kissed her again. "Do spa dates count? Because we've had about a hundred of those, and you never let me pay for it. So... I think those count."
The flustered fashionista was quite enamored with the idea, but she was also hesitant. This all seemed too perfect, like her fantasies come to life. "Um... I don't know, I think a date can be anything in which both parties enjoy themselves for the sake of romance." Stop worrying, this is perfectly normal. Whirlwind romances can be very intense. All the books say so... Oh but those rarely end happily... No, stop fretting over nothing. This is love, enjoy it!
Her lovely friend smiled triumphantly, and then seductively. "Then they count. I've had a huge crush on you for ages."
Oh sweet Celestia, why didn't I ever ask her before now? "Then we actually have a lot to make up for..."
Fluttershy kissed her again, hard and insistent this time. "Yes. Yes we do." She replied, disentangling herself from Rarity and walking up the stairs. She looked back over her shoulder. "I need a shower, it wouldn't do to arrive at the spa like this, would it?" Rarity calmly sat back, reveling in the sensations, prepared to wait as long as needed. Watching Fluttershy leave, it became very clear she was swishing her tail back and forth as she walked. The pegasus mare turned back and looked at her, winking. "Are you coming?"
The unicorn gulped. Oh... OH! "Yes, darling!" She galloped up the stairs.
Oh... My... She hadn't been aware just how nice it was to have somepony else there to get the hard to reach places. Fluttershy turned her head and kissed Rarity as the unicorn lathered around her wings. Rarity seemed determined to do everything by hoof, not that she minded. She'd dreamed of exactly this on several occasions, but the dreams had never been this... detailed.
Fluttershy gasped as her beloved’s hooves brushed past the butterflies on her flank, then moved on to other areas. Now she's just teasing. She pouted just a bit, but there would be time for that later. The rest of our lives. She was determined it would be so.
She twisted from Rarity's grasp, giggling as the unicorn brushed her flank again. Rarity looked at her quizzically, so she decided to explain. "Let's go to the bed."
Rarity flushed blood red. "Um..."
The pegasus giggled. So its on her mind too... Soon enough, my lovely. "No no, not that, not yet. You're carrying way too much tension in those shoulders. I felt it when I was washing your back. Aloe would have a fit if she felt you like that. Let me give you a massage to get those kinks out."
They stepped out from the shower, the pegasus wrapping a towel around herself modestly. She handed one to Rarity and watched in fascination as it was wrapped around her in the soft glow of her telekinesis.
She had Rarity lay down on the bed, kissing her softly as she did so. One for every time I ever wanted to. Oh, that's still a lot, I better kiss her more often. She began kneading the white coat under her, working the muscles gently, but firmly. Rarity groaned when she hit the right spots. She slowly moved down the back, to the flanks.
Rarity's froze. "Darling, that's— OH!"
Fluttershy cooed. "Just lie still, let me work."
Rarity relaxed, letting her marefriend's (Oh mercy, is that what we are now?) hooves wander across her. She calmly melted into the mattress, eventually blushing brightly and preparing for... something when the pegasus reached her flanks...
And then Fluttershy was finished, patting her on the side and helping her up. She chuckled nervously, wondering if she had really expected Fluttershy to do anything like that so quickly...
After they had cleaned up again, they left for the spa. They leaned on each other, sighing happily. The trip seemed so short to the pair, who could barely keep their eyes on the road, because it might have meant sparing an eye from each other. When they arrived at the spa, Rarity gallantly opened the door, and gestured for her marefriend to enter. Upon entering herself, Rarity, grinning hugely, walked up to the counter. "The usual, please."
Lotus took one look at the pair, smiled happily, and gestured for them to enter. She ran to find Aloe, and whispered something in her ear. By that point, their clients had already gone into the first prep room, so they were alone.
Aloe looked back at her and sighed, half-romantic and half-exasperated in tone. "At last."
Lotus grinned back. "Right? What's it been, a few years?"
"Easily. Well, let's not let on we know. I'm sure they wish to tell us about it."
"They had better after all the times we had to watch them dance around the issue."
The two began to collect their tools of the trade, more excited about their work than they had been in quite a while. This promised to be an interesting session.
Comments ( 97 )
Great interpetation of fluthershy seriously, about the fact that she just wanted Rarity to stop hurting herself, because as we all noticed when a friend is in hurting that little pegaus become realy bold i would say even reckless. (stare master and dragonshy are 2 example out of a bunch.) More then that when she loose herself into cheering in sonic rainboom, will always remain one of my favorite passage in the whole series. Loved the last bits with the spa ponies too.
Great chapter, wonder where you're gonna go with the next chapter.
I believe this calls for a :flutterwink: because I can't think of words eloquent enough to...
^WAIT, WE DON'T HAVE THIS! HOW DO WE NOT HAVE THIS?!
Whoa. A daring Fluttershy and a confused, daydreamy Rarity. This was a great chapter in all the right ways!![]()
*scrabbles for emergency insulin syringes* Sorry, my diabeetus are acting up again...![]()
My favorite chapter so far. Though the next one is already looking good.
This was so sweet- Like a dam of emotions broke!
I liked the exchange at the end, Aloe and Lotus must have picked up on a lot of things in their line of work.
I CAME!
(WHAT?!)
TO THIS FANFICTION!
(OH!)
TO READ THIS UPDATE AND COMMENT:
(Awkward silence)
AWESOME FLUTTERRARES FIC!
(Awesome FlutterRares Fic?!)
/shot for poor attempt at a re-write of 'CARD GAMES ON MOTORCYCLES!!!!
The Spa ponies... They knew...
Glad to know they ain't morons! XD
Here ya go.
Aggressive Fluttershy for the WIN!
good storie i like it you had won a thumb up keep up the good work i'll wait more storie from you and i'm following you.
So, Vera would have a fit if she had to massage somepony who actually needs it?
That's like going to the barber and him getting mad at you because you let your hair grow![]()
...now you're going to pay for a new laptop because of the rainbows shorting it out...the rainbows came out of my fucking PORES
Yay new chap !![]()
EDIT: aggressive Fluttershy! Oh and FINALLY! I feel for you, spa ponies!
Well its about buckng time!![]()
loved the aloe and lotus at the end! guess when u work at a spa all day, you pick up a few things.
heres hoping for a 'happy ending' ![]()
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WOO!!! I have no idea what it is about Flarity stories that i am so attracted to. Maybe it's the way their personalities mesh, maybe it's just because it is Rarity and Fluttershy. I don't know.![]()
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FOREVER!!!
Keep it up and you will have a happy(in a good way) reader.![]()
This is one of the few ships... no, romance fics, period, I've ever been interested in. I'm watching this - and you - with keen interest. It's a wonderful read.
A very dynamic yet still in-character Fluttershy. You should be proud! ![]()
Great Cliffhanger. I ain't even mad.
FINALLY!!! ![]()
After all these chapters where I blamed you of wanting harm to my heart by over-exposure to pure, exciting romance, I've put the puzzle pieces together. ![]()
You were actually working towards something else. Thanks to you, I know have a second heart! ![]()
That's it, you've done it. I'm forever enslaved to this amazing piece of literature. ![]()
Cheers!
Kyor
I normally roll my eyes when a chapter gets redone, but that was a massive improvement on an already excellent chapter -
yay!
This chapter got dangerously close to getting cloppy. But not quite.
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Fluttershy seemed almost like New Fluttershy, yet wasn't there completely. I say this because she seemed too assertive, not "I'm going to bucking KILL you" level, but she still seemed, Not Fluttershy.
Rarity was well done though, but maybe use some more "darling"s and "dear"s?
Fluttershy is actually the dominant one in the relationship? And it totally makes sense too!
Love it!
I like how you went back a bit into the story to show Fluttershy's point of view. That was a very interesting choice to do and I believed it worked out perfectly.
for the spa ponies for actually knowing whats going on between Rarity and Fluttershy!
I had a D'awwgams while reading this, and as for the next chapter...
This was a really good story. I enjoyed every chapter. It was nice to see the other ponies in relationships too, but Rarity and Fluttershy was why I read this. I saw it a few times on the feature box, and I decided to read it finally. Well worth the time as it was quite adorable.
Well I certainly loved this chapter and those before it. I am following this story, although I do not believe there will be much left to it. If it ends soon then I shall at least take a gander at any new stories you write.
>>698069 Oh I know, the interlude's exists because people expressed an interest in seeing more of those pairs, so I made little one shot length chapters, a sort of bonus if you will. They have little significance on the main storyline and only serve to show that yes, other ponies exist on planet Flarity.
>>698815 The story is mapped out to take place over roughly a week in real time. We are on the morning of day three, so no, its not ending quite so soon. What I will tell you is, I will attempt to make it interesting for you as we go. The two are together now, which is wonderful, but now we will see a bit of their lives after the ship finally sailed.
1. At least we know that aloe and vera aren't idiots
1b can't wait to see the "bonuses" that Fluttershy and Rarity might recieve
2. Can't wait to see what the RD, AJ, Pinkie, and Twilight think, since they all know it's coming, maybe they will use it as an opportunity to come out to each other as well
3. I wouldn't have believed that you could've topped the last chapter with this one, but you sir succeeded; beautifully ![]()
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It may be a played out device, but everyone sees it but you is still fun.
This feels a little out of character for Flutters. She has moments of strength, but I can't picture her being so dominating in a relationship. Then again, it's the shy ones you have to look out for.
I hope you know, dear author, that just because they're finally (FINALLY) together, does not mean you get to end this any time soon ![]()
Oh no, you will be with us for a very, VERY long time...![]()
>>709371 You may find this revelent to your interests. For the record, the story will run its course over roughly a week in real time. We are on day 3.
>>719097 You may find this revelent to your interests. For the record, the story will run its course over roughly a week in real time within the story. We are on day 3. Here's the thing, I find two types of ship fics interesting, those that show the beginning, and those that show the ongoing relationship. I rarely find both in the same fic. I am fixing that.
is that so
if thats is so i have much to look forward to than
i wanna ask a whole bunch of questions but i wont. i'll just be surprise.
i guess if i just read more comments i wouldnt needed to be told about this
im glade you want out of your way for me though
cant wait for this complete story of yours
im finally caught up with everyone else now
I loved the fakeout. I always enjoy it when stories play mind games like that, and it's something I enjoy putting in my own stuff from time to time. Fluttershy certainly was quite bold in this chapter, hm...It was a very different take on her character (haven't seen the ep with Iron Will, yet) but seemed solid enough. Good show.
Just want to stop and say, very good pacing with this story. Too often in shipfics I see: "I love you" "I love you too", followed by a Marvin Gaye record.
Then she kissed her, draping her forelegs around her fool's neck as she did so. <--- 11 chapters later
YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA sweet jesus that was getting painful.
Good GOD this is good. -Sits down with bag of popcorn-
I ain't sleeping tonight.
I forgot to say this, but I love the way Rarity ripped her own letter apart. It's very realistic and relatable to us writers and I don't care if that was bad grammar. Us. Writers.
Also, there were dangerous levels of D'AWWW in this chapter. So much D'AWWWWW could cause a chain reaction that could lead to
Love and Tolerance around the world!
I wish...
I have 7 chapters to go until I finish this but I'm going to bed after this one so I can feel like things are going to be happily ever after forever. These first 11 chapters have been nothing short of a delight to read. I love a good romance story and the way you portrayed these two is just perfect. I couldn't ask for a better love story. Simply amazing.
So, I was rereading this chapter... oh my GOODNESS I love Rarity's thoughts this chapter. They're just so PERFECT. I just had to stop and laugh.
"You are kind, you are generous, and you are going to be mine. If... that's okay with you." There really are no words for how okay that is.
"Um... you could kiss me back?"
The unicorn stared, not understanding how she had possibly not done that yet. That may well be the best idea in the history of good ideas.
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Oh my goodness I love it.
The spa pony bit really made me realize that nearly everypony in town knew Shy and Rar loved each other, except for Shy and Rar. Love really does make people, er, ponies stupid.
I've been reading this while sick. It can't be good for me, but I just can't stop! Now I have D'awwabetes and a cold.
Alright, don't act like you weren't expecting it this time. How could I not comment on the most important chapter (So far. Someone might die or something, I dunno). I said by the end of this story I would be a Jolly Rancher, well guess what? You just moved my schedule up! I feel embarrassed to admit it, but I actually squeed in this chapter.
I love this story so much! God, I can't stop smiling! I can't wait to read more, but that will have to wait for tomorrow. Just well...Awesome, dude.
The "wild" side of Fluttershy seems awefully fitting.
Canon, she's not even close to being like that. I mean, she's still afraid of her own shadow, and then just repeatedly kissing Rarity... Okay, maybe a little more than simple kissing... It's not like her but it just seems to fit her perfectly!
Finally began my (long overdue) trek through this story. I still have fourteen chapters to go, but that is besides the point.
The point is that this story of yours is so ridiculously sweet and heartwarming that, for a good amount of time, my brain stopped working properly.
I started making high-pitched noises with my mouth. I can only assume that I was trying to make words. I thought I was broken.
You sir, have completely blown me out of the water with this story so far, and I'm not even halfway to being caught up with it.
And you did it with one of my least favorite main Six Pairings, too.
But it is late, and I need to go, I most certainly look forwards to reading the rest of this, when I get the chance. Until then, just keep on doing what you're doing now, it seems to work exceedingly well. ![]()
Go spa ponies. I'm really looking forward to their involvement In The next chapter. I have a feeling it will be them trying to pressure the duet into spilling the beans. If not, then let's see where this goes....
Pinkie? Why would she look aside when talking about... Oh. OH! Hmmm... that might not be bad, actually. We'll talk about that little look later.
You know what? Im going to end it here at chapter 11. I just don't see how this could get any better and it seems like a good ending point. If anyone would like to prove me wrong im all ears! ![]()
wooooo!!! aaaand they're together. aand.... whoa, there's still a lot of chapters left... let's see if this turns into some grand adventure (like a lot of otherr romance fics i've read seem wont to do... )
Aloe looked back at her and sighed, half-romantic and half-exasperated in tone. "At last."Lotus grinned back. "Right? What's it been, a few years?"
"Easily. Well, let's not let on we know- I'm sure they wish to tell us about it."
"They had better after all the times we had to watch them dance around the issue."
The two began to collect their tools of the trade, more excited about their work than they had been in quite a while. This promised to be an interesting session.
I love how Aloe and Lotus speak proper Equestrian. I can't remember how many stories I've seen them in where one or the other has a thick unidentified accent.







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