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When Lyra Proposes to Bon-Bon, Pinkie's zealous promotion of the noble wedding of the century attracts some unexpected and unwanted attention. Can Pinkie and her party ponies pull off the biggest wedding Ponyville's ever seen to give the two most deserving ponies a happily ever after?
I don't think I've seen a story with this particular plot before, and you appear to be executing it well; as a fan of Lyra and Bon Bon as a couple, I approve.
One question, though: I know it's a nice tune, but why was Pinkie, if I am not mistaken, humming the Nation Anthem of the USSR?
I normally don't read shipping but I saw it was Lyra/Bon-Bon so I decided to check it out. This an awesome story with funny dialogue and characterizations of these characters with no canon character. I liked that bartering at the beginning.
As someone else said Pinkie as a wedding planner. I am scared!
If you knew about the unknown pony's identity, then they wouldn't be an unknown pony anymore, you see? That's what we call keeping the readers in suspense!
And Vanner! You're DOING IT AGAIN! You're making Pokey Pierce sound like Hugh Laurie in my head! You did it in the last story too, y'know.
In other words, keep it up!
This story appealed to me for a very personal, selfish reason: My parents actively opposed my wedding to my wife. Very actively. I have not seen them since my marriage, more than ten years ago.
Thank you for a GOOD resolution to the idea of one group not marrying another. True love is vastly more important than titles.
My reaction to reading this was "wow" then i lost myself and went into a state of reading i have not entered since i had read the grapes of wrath, this fan fiction rivals a masterpiece and i have not read anything this good in what feels like an eternity, i have never liked romance stories but this defiantly takes the muffins you have my praise for this and i await anxiously for the next chapter
amazing story i just love it, i consider it a masterpiece my fanfic doesn't scratch the surface of yours, your fanfic took me into a state of reading i haven't been into since i read the grapes of wrath i give this story a 6/5 i don't normally like romances but this one is just great :D you just earned a fan that awaits the next chapter
Awesome story! Can't wait for more.
The only bit i have trouble with (and it's entirely my fault) is reconciling Lyra and Octavia's relationship with my other favorite ShipFic, Allegrezza. lol
Thankfully, years of Nerd-ery have given me the power to conjure multiverses at will!
Welcome to Equestria-2!
I love this!^_^
I'm a big fan of filly/filly fics, especially with this couple!^_^
It's so sweet/cute!^_^
Just really great!^_^
A really good fanfic here!^_^
Just one thing...
How does Lyra know about humans, are they living on Equestria... visited..... or just myth/legend?
your ability to flip between more literary tones to the comcial slapstick of mlp fim canon is awesome! the one thing i would say is not to write to much plausible side stories (eg octavia, trixie, etc.) b/c readers will want a good majority adressed... avoid this unless you actually are planning to create a really long series (which i totally hope you do!)
all in all im really excited for what you have here, and i can't understand anyone who doesnt feel the same way
ROCK ON!
Well, it serves Bon Bon right now. She's not good enough for Lyra anyway. If she gets down on her knees and begs an apology then maybe Lyra will forgive her. Though in my opinion Lyra should have nothing to do with her now. She is a horrible excuse for a mare, and Lyra deserves better then that now. She actually accused her of lying, her behavior was simply awful. I say Lyra deserves better than her.
I love Berry Punch in this fanfic!
Can't wait for the next chapter. Normally I don't read too many pony fics since there are so many of them, but this one had some great stuff.
Also Bon Bon does seem quite friendly with the rest of the town(excluding Rarity and Applejack) if you pay attention to her appearances in the show.
Found a lot of respect for Berry Punch after reading this chapter. Those two stallions were hilarious, that made my day.
Also, I really really REALLY enjoyed this chapter. I also liked the ending. You left a very good cliffhanger and successfully created an emotion of misery and hopelessness. Hoping to see more ^_^
“Dude, I think we just got married,”
“No way, I’m not gay. I mean, not that there’s anything wrong with that.”
“Uh, totally, Me neither. Yeah, there’s nothing wrong with being gay.”
The two stallions looks at each other for a moment. As the sun passed over head, Plow saw a look he never hoped to find those deep brown eyes. Barbell had seen it too, and a moment later, the two ponies were locked in a passionate kiss that sent them tumbling down the stairs of the chapel.
just fucking lost it.
The show's name is MLP: Berry Punch is Magic, cuz as a marriage maker, she has skills.
Lyra, you have to realize you don't mean what you said. Bon-Bon didn't mean her accusations of you lying. You two are perfect for each no matter what anypony(or one) says. Tears were shed at their folly.
The two stallions walked in a daze from the chapel, still unsure as to what exactly had happened. Plow looked at the scroll, then back to Barbell.
“Dude, I think we just got married,” said Plow.
“No way, colt,” said Barbell. “I’m not gay.” He coughed and looked around a moment. “I mean, not that there’s anything wrong with that.”
“Uh, totally,” said Plow. “Me neither. Yeah, there’s nothing wrong with being gay.”
The two stallions looks at each other for a moment. As the sun passed over head, Plow saw a look he never hoped to find those deep brown eyes. Barbell had seen it too, and a moment later, the two ponies were locked in a passionate kiss that sent them tumbling down the stairs of the chapel.
I lost it after reading that section. Many facehoofs were had.
Irrelevant Post
It seems the My Little Pony Friendship is Magic Wiki has changed the names "Lyra" and "Carrot Top" to "Heartstrings" and "Golden Harvest" based on the release of a couple toys that bear small resemblance to our beloved ponies.
Opinions?
http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Heartstrings
http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Golden_Harvest
I have the vague impression that I like everything in this story more than the scenes actually focusing on Lyra and Bon-Bon. There seems to be a certain veneer of melodrama to their interactions - even the pleasant ones - that makes me want to roll my eyes and skip ahead. They're just not as entertaining as scenes like Berry Punch's marriage ceremonies or as interesting as the plot to foil the meddling of the nobles. Also, I really, really don't buy this chapter's cliffhanger.
The writing is great though.
God this story is one of the best! its very moving.
I nearly got a tear in my eye where they held the meeting and offered their services for free
and this chapter makes me wanting to tollerate and love the shit out of this Capitalists (with a crowbar, an M4A1 and a lot of Grenades)
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; Can't wait for part 3 Vanner! 
I'm having so much fun with these icons. 
I don't like this duke. Not one bit. Trixie as the black sheep sister to Pokey. This is interesting. Hopefully, it leads up to a Trixie appearance.
That opening alliteration.... It's okay Vanner, I still love you and whatnot. Also dat ending, 100% improvement
CANT WAIT
Oh don't mind me. Looking forward to the next installment! Filler and I will be going over it with a fine-edged knife instead of the usual chainsaw. 
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