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The curse of Loyalty

It's been a long time for a lonely mare, abandoned when the love of her life left to pursue her dreams and ambitions.

This started as a single scene that got stuck in my mind one night and I decided to put on paper, so to speak. It's expanded since then, and will continue to do so.

The pic is a screenshot from Hurricane Fluttershy.

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Dracarion

Dracarion #1 · Apr 5th, 2012 · · · Another Rainy Night ·

I'm not really sure where the idea for this story came from, but I hope you enjoy(ed) it all the same.

Desol

Desol #2 · Apr 13th, 2012 · · · A night in Canterlot ·

Well it was good. That's really all I can say, though, as it was also really short. It's a look into a single moment in two lives, and really leaves the reader feeling unfulfilled.

Dracarion

Dracarion #3 · Apr 18th, 2012 · · · A night in Canterlot ·

446698 Actually, I've been working on some more for it.... and forgot to change the status. I apologize to you Fracture, and anypony else who felt unfulfilled/disappointed that it ended so soon. With that said, there will be more to come.

Desol