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steelwingx


Just a simple guy, who loves to write stories for MLP.

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100 years into the future. Equestria's old regime has been toppled, Celestia is dead, Luna is missing, and the elements have been defeated. in their place, a cruel, malicious king now rules over the kingdom, crushing all opposition, and forcing a majority of the population into lives of bitter poverty.

but in a far corner of the kingdom, a young stallion will rise to the challenge, along with friends from the past and present, they will rise up to fight the new regime, and risk everything, to save their kingdom.

(takes place after season 4)

Chapters (18)
Comments ( 36 )

Ok so can you update this please?
Ill take that as a yes

4484425 fear not my friend, there shall be plenty more updates, the next two chapters are done and shall be posted soon.

Starting to become hunger games are we?:trixieshiftleft:

Way to make cliffhanger and also when will luna be riding on spikes back while spike burns new canterlot to the ground?:pinkiecrazy:

4535364 not entirely sure what you mean, but i can assure you, Luna and Spike will both play major parts later on in the story, but not in the way you expect them to.

I sense hfrostmay be the new bearer of with her kindness or magic *waves hand* you do not realize I used the force to figure that out! *runs away in a puff of smoke*

O.O whoops. Sensing frost will be the new bearer of friendship or magic :derpytongue2:

Adding twilight to the story are we ?:twilightsmile:

Hmm. Either he'll be slapped by his mother, or hugged. Depending on if she's been interrogated yet.

4749781 im gonna say hugged AND slaped because he scared her (probly) hafe to death but be hugged for being alive

Hidden feelings arise from river....

Love for this story has been multiplied by 50%

4771329 it would be of great help, if you spread word of this story. please don't think of me a greedy, i just want more people to check it out.

please, from one pony fan to another:applecry:

This really needs more likes and views :eeyup: Awesome so far...

4776656 i truly appreciate the support guys, i wasn't so sure this story would be that well recieved honestly, your kind words mean a lot, i just hope i can keep it going:pinkiehappy:

4777139 I dont think my words mean that much because im a very inexperienced writer :/ so I cant tell good from bad but this is still a good story none the less

alright then, since you four are going to be Night Ranger’s, each of you will be allowed to customize your weapon
FREEKING FULLY AUTO RPG MINIGUN, that's what I would chose:twilightsmile:Anyone who see's this comment tell me what you would chose.
Oh and before I forget, when is spike going to make an appearance?

4778604 well. when i wrote that they had firearms in the story, i imagined they would be more along the lines of WW 1 style weapons. so probably not many mini-guns.

as for your question about Spike. he will make an appearance and he will play a major part in the following events of the story, and since i don't usually give out spoilers, i'll just say that he makes his initial appearance in the second part of the story.

4779695 oh ok, FREEKIN I can only think of a lee Enfield with a scope now:/ but still you get my point at what I would chose right?

4781780 not entirely sure what you mean. is that from a game or something, i'm no expert on firearms,real or fake.

4782156 the Lee Enfield is a french bolt acton sniper rifle :derpytongue2:dont exactly remeber when it was made though

Even though you told me spike is makeing an apirenses in the next story, it would have been awesome if you had spike walk in and be like "luna, im back from my scouting" and then said to be continued. But still I loved this story and I can't wait for the next one to be out
You hqve earned 10/5 mustaches:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

4782761 well, that's a nice little theory you have, but i'm sorry to say your wrong about that.

since you seemed to mostly be interested in Spike's role in the story, i'll give you a little hint.
Spike is not on the best of terms with the ponies of Equestria.

if you want to find out more, you'll just have to wait and read.

4782845I'm sorry about nagging you about spike it's just that spike Is more on the higher-end on my list, top of the list to be exact

4782872 not a problem my friend, i'm always curious to know what my viewers imagine future events will be.

but i promise, Spike's reveal will be nothing you expected.

4782889 awesome! I love it when things dont go as imagined

4779695 thinking back to this, i did some research and there are gatling guns back then, they had a fire rate of 120 rpm and are 800 lbs, but they still had them and they were created in the revaluton war

In which chapter of this story does Celestia die?:raritystarry::eeyup::applejackconfused::applejackunsure:

5031234 as explained in the Introduction, she dies as part of the set up to this story. but she does not die through any of the actual story chapters.

4779695

Aww, no Thompson? no Browning?

(I know the Thompson is an smg)

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