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you thought this was a troll fic didn't you?

But it's not.

BUT THAT'S THE TROLL. :trollestia:

yah I'm going to change the title...

changed it.

If you're wondering, I titled it trololololol at first, because it was supposed to be a troll fic, but then I got sad so I was like NOPE! no giggles for you.

My shortest story yet. Curse my random ideas that I must write into stories, you are too many.

A nice story, but I'm confused. What happened? :twilightoops:

413793 I KNEW somebody wasn't going to get it. Actually, I don't expect you to get it your first read through. It might take a little while to process it or something. But I'll give you a hint. A certain episode of MLP:FIM. Remove Celestia from the scene, and make the magic more malicious. That's basically the idea.

That was unexpected
I was expecting a story about bullying lol

413800 I was kinda thinking that, but there's no Alternate Universe tag. :twilightblush:

413804 so was I, but this is how I write stories.

"Okay fingers start typing."

*types*

*wakes up*

*reads through the page I typed while asleep*

"Yah, that looks good...not what I intended......but whatever"

*post*

This is very sad. I'm surprised. Something so short could be so depressing! (no pun intended):fluttercry:

413808 Thank you for reminding me, adding the tag now.

413808>>413306

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I still don't get it. Explain please?

413921 just think about it for a bit.

I think I know what happened. Twilight's magic on the day she earned her cutie mark killed her parents and Smarty Pants was her only friend until she came to Ponyvillie. I guess this means that Celestia's intervention wasn't enough in Twilight's flashback. Or maybe she exaggerated it so the Cutie Mark Crusaders wouldn't be scared for life. :trixieshiftright:

413996 *clap clap clap clap*

413933:

I think I understand it now!!

Wait, no. I understand it a lot more, but not completely. Please forgive my simple mind.

414036 Why thank you. Of course since it wasn't specified it's understandable how some people can get confused as to what happened. But you did a great job. :scootangel:

err im guessing twilight killed her parents?

I get it and it's really saddening how this plays out but I still vastly enjoyed the story.

I enjoyed it... but what exactly happened in the past..? :applejackconfused:

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Celestia wasn't around to intervene when Twilight went all super-saiyan, and she wound up accidentally killing her parents instead of turning them into plants. She's having flashbacks because this is just after Lesson Zero and her recent loss of control just made her remember how the last time she lost control, she made herself an orphan and she's realizing that she could have gotten her friends killed if she hadn't settled for the Want-It-Need-It spell.

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12 weeks later...
Notification about Memories? I wonder what in the world that is...
*sees cover pic, remembers the story*
*reads the reply*

Wow, that really sums it up.

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