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Note: This is NOT a crossover with Penumbra. I picked the name based on the dictionary definition of the word.

In her wanderings, The Great and Powerful Trixie accidentally unleashes an ancient evil that may spell doom for Ponyville. Cut off from the Princesses as well as the Elements of Harmony, the mortal ponies must face an enemy far beyond their power. It is a time for heroes and sacrifice in the name of all they love. Who will rise to the occasion, and who will fall on the field of battle?

If you do not like to read about ponies dying, stay away.

Image by the amazing Enma-Darei

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 21 )

Dammit all, I was expecting a Penumbra Crossover with Trixie.

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Guess I'll have to deal with it.

Me: Yay! Penumbra crossover!

Story: lol, nope.

Me:
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*Pokes head around corner*

"Penumbra Crossover?"

Story: NOPE! :D

*Still reads it*:twilightsmile:

i dont know what penumbra is, except in the astronomy terms. but this sounds supah bad ass:rainbowdetermined2:

Penumbra crossover with Trixie? YES!

Wait.

Aww.

Sorry guys; I have no idea what Penumbra is. :twilightblush: I picked the title for its dictionary definition. Description modified accordingly.

I like it! I don't even know what Penumbra is, so no disappointment here :rainbowlaugh: Seems interesting. One thing:

"ground-bound ponies were better that her"

Should be than. :trollestia:

I've not even read Penumbra. I'm just here because you've got an awesome track record with Trixie.

You misspelled Macintosh, and maybe replace "people" with "creatures" and "person" with "pony" or "mare".

678557 McIntosh is the correct spelling, according to Lauren Faust. It's the same as the apple varietal.

"People" = fixed.

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Thanks for changing "people." This website, the My Little Pony wiki, the package of his doll, and every fanfic I've read call him Big Macintosh, but Who am I to argue with the Fausticorn.

Omg. You all should play Penumbra. I've only been through Overture, But it's an amazing game.

...and Now I'm tempted to write a Penumbra crossover...

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so this is how your Idea came about, I cant play Overture for the time being, every time I work up the courage to, the damn dogs are there and Im like "NOPE NOPE NOPE":rainbowderp:

1223014 Lol. If you haven't' played Black Plague, It gets worse.

This story really deserves more than 9 likes.

1316313 Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it.:ajsmug:

Y1

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:fluttershysad: Penumbra's the name of my fic. :fluttercry:
Why you gotta be so mean to me? :applecry:

In any-case I'll read this, let you know how I feel about it then, but seriously. Penumbra is the name of my story. Not saying you copied me, I just saw that and felt :twilightoops:

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Um . . .sorry? As you can see, I first posted this back in April, so I'm definitely not copying you.

I'll be glad to hear your thoughts!

Y1

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Well the premises are nothing alike, so I really doubt anyone stole any ideas from anyone else here.

Great stuff here, Pond.

I'm a bit sad to see Trixie all- Well you know. Not Trixie.:trixieshiftright:

But I trust things will turn out okay. Or she's going to die.

this chapter was written on my birthday!

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