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Midnight Flare is a pony that shouldn't exist. A creation of magic between a unicorn and a dragon, Flare is a hybrid of the two species. After his father passes away and his mother prepares to enter her hundred year hibernation, Flare must leave the cave they reside in and find a place among ponies in a nearby town called Ponyville. But his journey will not be easy, he is different from other ponies with fangs, snake eyes, and the ability to turn into a dragon. To top it off, when his mother enters hibernation, Princess Celestia will finally be able to sense the creature she did not know of.

Chapters (17)
Comments ( 106 )

So far its a good story, keep up the good work. Of course i am looking forward to what happens next, maybe a shipping between twilight and midnight? XD :pinkiehappy:

An interesting, albeit a very cliche concept, though you would be much better off with a ton of fleshing out. By fleshing out, I mean by breaking this chapter into three or four parts and extending them. :pinkiesmile:

440374 True, it is a tad cliche.:twilightsheepish: Also, I will probably end up fleshing out this chapter over time.

Seems very interesting will be tracking to see where this goes.

The biggest thing that I can think of is that you have verb-tense issues. You start out with present-tense and then switch to past-tense partway through. I recommend you just stay with past-tense. But whatever one you pick...stick with it. You need to stay consistent. :duck:

good story tracking this:pinkiehappy:

440537 Thank you for pointing this out, I didn't even realize I had switched the verb-tenses.

Favorited! Really impressive, can't wait for more! :yay:

Well you got my attention cant wait for more.

This was a great chapter and very sad but yay contact with ponies!

YES AN UPDATE! NOW TO READING :D

Wonder what Celestia and Luna gonna do when they discover that he can change back and forth in pony or dragon form.

yay :yay: a shipping will luna, we need more of those :heart:

Heheheh!
This has been a most interesting premise and story.

Interesting. Tracking. This story is really good so far.:pinkiehappy:

Nice pacing on this story, looking forward for more :raritywink:

Interesting concept. Keep up the good work, I'll be tracking.

yay good story

"Let him go. He has much grief to vent, alone." Celestia said quietly.

"Let him go," Celestia said again, "some things are best left alone, even if it causes some grief."

Uh, redundant much? Pick a sentence and stick with it. Or was there meant to be another sentence between those two?

Anyway, great story, and I look forward to more. Also, I have a request for more Mane 6.

592825 Yeah, that was more of a filler, just so that the chapter could be a little longer and I wouldn't feel bad about taking so long only to make a short chapter. :twilightblush: I'll fix it later.

592865 Well, I can't really say no to that much cute, can I? :heart:

592825 Whoops, just looked closer at that and realized how badly I screwed the pooch, thank you.

593455 i dont think so. i tried it once before...... ended up in hospital for a week.

So does this take place before the changeling invasion. Cause I would love to see Flare kick some shape shifting flank:rainbowdetermined2:

Awesome as usual:rainbowdetermined2:

:yay: yay new chapter cant wait for the next :twilightsmile:

Defencive magic is up next right?

Dawww, Flare and Luna are getting together:heart: i would have never guessed that Equestria had suicide bombers:derpyderp2:

He will make it and by the time he arrives I assume would be when the changelings brake the shield or when the attack fails. Good chapter.

Y'all done f***ed up now:flutterrage:

"Luna didn't say any more, butt pouted as she ate."

Butt pouted? Oh God, my imagination is a horrible, horrible thing sometimes :rainbowlaugh:

Absuluetuly amazing!:twilightsmile: my good sir pinkie up!:moustache:

Could you please pass the roast changling, nom nom nom

Love this Story!!!!

742092 I laughed a little too hard at that. :rainbowlaugh:

Angel's Calling - Sabaton

> "Well, come on, you bastards, you want to live forever?!"

Motorhead, I like you.

Sweet an update. T'was an excellent chapter. have a stache :moustache:

Why can't there be more of these hybrid stories?! I mean, come on! You can just feel the awesome flowing off of it! :rainbowdetermined2:

Another good chapter my fine sir, I will meet Shiro's bid and raise him another three... :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

-Jorofrarie

778781 An awesome feeling can easily break by other writers, why have others while the best is here.

Okay, just started this, and it's good thus far. However, there is one rather small, if not significant error that hasn't been pointed out - you used the term "filly" to refer to a younger pony, but "filly" only applies to a young female pony. Foal is a general term for a very young pony, and after that it's either colt (for males) or filly (for females). Just thought I'd point that out. :derpytongue2:

797111 Thank you. This is a useful clarification.:pinkiesmile:

good chapter cant wait for the next

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