Starlight Eclipse is a vampiric teenage mare currently at high school in Manehatten, but on her first day she learns that a hunter happens to attend the same school, and that causes trouble, because now her secret must be kept not only for her family, but her life!
(On hiatus until I recover from... something)
Well lets get started one the ending plummeted like a cliff all abrupt and out of nowhere but that's my opinion. Another idea is to stop jumping around a lot like this
Its a bit awkward if you ask me and there is this feeling of missing out.
p.s Spelling is not my best subject so I wont be doing things like that or grammar I am sort of good at but not to where I'll pick up on it and nag about them...
Yay now I want to come back for more due to dat ending bro dat ending any way look to see some of your latest work win you post it but for now I have 65 un read chapters from a group of story's I agreed to edit plot wise... so bye!
Love the story, the only thing I dislike about this story is its length, make it longer!
4502824 Heh, alright then, chapters will be lengthened... Wait, don't I know you?
4505873 Yea, you know me
I must say you have a way with words. I'm actually not that sad at the death of her mother because I didn't get a good description and I didn't get attached, but I do feel remorse for her daughter as well as empathy for losing her mother.
Congratulations, you have my like and fave and I compliment you on your wonderful writing skill.
May I ask when the next chapter might be released?
May I be the first to say I think this is excellent!
By the way, I think you should keep ruby alive and make her a blood bank for miss vampony
4562237 Thanks, and don't worry, Ruby will live. I have plans for her
4564668 can't wait for the next chapter!
Ahhh more readers come to your story of twist and turns :D let there be more to come in due time
P.s I now can check into your story a bit more as I have free time now so yay
Heh, early chapter with a rather large twist at the end...
Hmm, maybe I shouldn't have made that promise about Ruby...
Can you get anymore super-edgy OC?
Awww, I liked ruby. I hope she can come back.
Damn. I thought you killed ruby for good. How did she live?
Again, I compliment you on your excellent story!
4609553 You do not know if its truly her. Remember this story is POV and not everything will mean something they way you might expect.
Honestly I did expect that plot twist. BTW keep up the good work.
i can help. i put my story on haitus for awhile.
is there a reason besides the one you gave?
I may can help. I have ideas. :P
I think this is such a great idea! I just kinda LOOOOOOVE wereponies, vamponies and that stuff so I love this too!
Pick a good author that diserves this!
i woud love to help but cant in the middle of my own story