This is very good. I like your writing. You have my like! good work

Yeah this has so much potential and you have already done so much to the story. It's really good keep writing.

I love how you did this story! Keep up the good work!

very interesting take on the whole ponies come to earth thing, and using actual military instead of halo. tracking this and have a success mustache while you are at it.

I'll track it and read later. Seems intriguing.

人民解放军空军  CHINESE now what does this say?

>>407838407838 It translated out to "People's Liberation Army Air Force".

>>407926407926 k thx

Give it a couple of re-reads and a spellcheck.

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Hitler approves.

Please write more.

Good day.

I came here thinking this would suck, but due to the comments I'll give this a try

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Please tell me how you find it. Thanks to everyone for reading and feedback :)

>>408958408958 This actually pretty good, I'll give you a track and a like

Shit. Just. Got. REAL.

Stay frosty!

~Hazard~

So Lyra has found a small unidetified object that belongs to the PLAF Twi, Pinkie and Bon Bon are now currently traped in Iraq

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Almost all, true but twi is still in Equestria

>>426941426941 Repent, Repent the end is nigh bow down before The Flag the Pink Destroyer has come Repent

MOAR!!!!

This is GREAT!!!

Damn Commies

Hmmm... Good... I wonder what oppressions that the commies will bring upon Equestria.

MOAR

LOL nice story A like for you my man.

Annnd just like that its gone