Dj for filly radio doing Fanfictions on the side cause I have a big brain. Sorry for not getting the third chapter of Return of the Strong Ones out finals and stuff you know how it works. :/
As war looms over Equestria, Twilight discovers the secrets to resurrecting an old and forgotten cult of earth pony warlocks. Big Macintosh begins his training in the magical arts and is thrust into a war that could decide the fate of all of Equestria.
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cant wait to see where this goes
Black Mass - Electric Wizard
a shitstorms a brewin
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It's an error from the google docs whip. It hasnt been working very well recently. I have to format anything myself or it will end up poopy-like. He most likely didnt check the format after saving. or it could be intentional. I have no idea.
Wait, wait, wait. Earth pony... mages? Really? Meh; reading.
why does this show up when I search "Hockey"?
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Probly cause my name :P
OMG! This I don't understand why this doesn't have more reviews, or why it hasn't been on the spotlight...
Is it bad that I can see this getting a romance tag within a chapter or two?
Other than that comment, good story, and I want more.
I like the concept of the story, as well as the slight chances of MacDash. However, I feel that you rush while narrating. Also spotted some small grammar and spelling mistakes, but nothing too important. Will track or fav, once i figure out how XD.
470856 His/her mouth is full of truth. And I would also suggest adding details and not rushing the story so much XD. Good work
I'm really liking where the story is headed. Wish it had more MacDash though, but I don't thinks that's the real deal with this story. Hope you update soon, but don't rush it. Myabe it's me, but sometimes I feel like you rushes yourself when writting, so the story feels incomplete, rushed. Godd work though.