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Lyra Writes A Creepy Wish Fulfilment Story About Humans

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For a while, Lyra has only been seen raiding the fridge and making coffee. Bonbon decides to figure out what she's up to.
A short made on a whim.

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aCB

aCB #1 · May 16th, 2014 · 6 · ·

It wasn't a bad story. The ending left something to be desired, though. I didn't know if you were trying to be funny, or going for shock value, or what, but I didn't get it.

Bonbonbonbonbonbonbon!

RevelRomp #2 · May 16th, 2014 · 3 · 1 ·

I like the silly, exaggerated, and cute parts of the fic like bouncy Lyra and bon bon bon bonbon bon bon and unicorn not making use of magic at all because reasons. Though the way it could be interpreted as a jab at others makes me a little uncomfortable. Mainly because it's hard to tell when (what I perceived to be) such jab is meant in as a jest or is meant to hurt or misinform.

Perry Pinkie Potter

Perry Pinkie Potter #3 · May 27th, 2016 · 1 · ·

Don't know whether to or at the ending, but still like it!

Suukorak

Suukorak #4 · Sep 20th, 2021 · 1 · ·

Heh, you got a good chuckle out of me on the last paragraph.

Lyra's enthusiasm is infectious (and adorable), but I dread to ask what the

shapes [...] that Bonbon wasn't sure she wanted to know what they were

were meant to be.

A fun, quick read!

Kevin Lee #5 · Apr 10th, 2023 · · ·

#5
All of the above, especially #3:
7252776

Don't know whether to or at the ending, but still like it!

👍

NAH223445566 #6 · Dec 9th, 2023 · · ·

XD La echaron.

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